Metaphor Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 11:34am
7th Jan 2025 11:34am
All my entire life
It's funny when I think about it knowone I've ever been with, gave me what I've been getting from you. 🤔 But it's not to say that me myself and I didn't realize that, I had it then like I know now. FOR sure it was my fault I messed it up the amazing relationships then, for I didn't know that I had it then like I know now in my life. For let me be the first to say I am to blame cause back then, I've been hurt and lied and cheated on, by the very someones who I thought I could trust. YET that became a lie in so many ways, that my own heart became as cold as ice, with no feelings or...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 7:04am
6th Jan 2025 7:04am
WALK WITH ME
If you could take a walk with me what would you see 👁️ as you walk away from the negativity of the world, 🌎 as we take this walk through this old mighty oak tree. Planted along time ago in God's heavenly dirt not touched by man on earth. 🌎 For it's true that we are creatures of entity of souls of spiritual, beliefs and silent whispers of being able to connect with you, in ways that you may never truly understand. BUT yet we know what you are going through in each and every one, of your own thoughts and prayers and insight into your lives on earth. 🌍 For...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 00:40am
6th Jan 2025 00:40am
The dark shadows of night
Why is it that way when you lose countless hours worrying, about the shadows that appear upon the wall 🧱 as we awake from a dream. BUT yet it's those who aren't real just apart of your imagination, once created as the night of the world takes shelter beneath the clouds of the world 🌎 Becomes a darkness of gravity pulling into your own thoughts, that you feel that is watching you sleep 😴 so peaceful and quiet in your dream state of mind. For we ask thyself what does it want with you, for you are just a creatures of habits no different, from anyone else who sometimes...
#confusion
#LifeAsAWriter
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 2:30pm
4th Jan 2025 2:30pm
The Longing Flower ...
A bird flew by and dropped a seed,
It landed softly on fertile soil.
With time, it grew, deep roots to hold,
But the flower dreamed of fields afar,
Longing to leave and reach the sky,
Unbound, untethered, and free to roam.
"Why must I stay when I wish to roam?"
It asked as life stirred within the seed.
The wind would whisper of the wide, free sky,
Yet something held it fast to the soil.
It yearned for adventures distant and far,
But the earth, unyielding, kept its hold.
The flower grew, but...
It landed softly on fertile soil.
With time, it grew, deep roots to hold,
But the flower dreamed of fields afar,
Longing to leave and reach the sky,
Unbound, untethered, and free to roam.
"Why must I stay when I wish to roam?"
It asked as life stirred within the seed.
The wind would whisper of the wide, free sky,
Yet something held it fast to the soil.
It yearned for adventures distant and far,
But the earth, unyielding, kept its hold.
The flower grew, but...
#LifeCycle
#metaphor
#philosophical
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 11:40pm
3rd Jan 2025 11:40pm
MAJESTIC THOUGHTS
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words, for what I want to rap to you about now, as I encourage you all 😉 for when was the last time you've been to see, your Doctor for a righteous exam of your body and mind and heart ❤️ For I'm here as a friend and poet ✍️ YET I'm just a mortal man who just want you to think for thyself, and have you to think about your own health and well being. 🙏 For sure as a new year is beginning, 😄 and some of us makes plans, for the betterment of our lives. 🙏 Let's take care better care of our...
#cancer
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 2:33am
3rd Jan 2025 2:33am
Be mindful of your thoughts
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ Have you ever been in a situation, that you never thought you will have to learn, to understand and navigate through your situations. THAT you can't control no matter how much we try, to get away from all the negativity. 🤨 For you can control one thing, and that is your faith 🙏 woman to man and man to woman and it's your own thoughts, of your own mind. I know what you are thinking part of you wants to stay, yet the other part of you, 😞 knows that it's hard to say goodbye, to what you thought that you had...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 10:50pm
1st Jan 2025 10:50pm
Candle light groove
When would you be willing to share your thoughts, and open the doorway to the stairs to your heart. 💖 For sure I know that it's very hard just trying to be able, to share your thoughts and insight and thoughts, and emotional feelings of life and love. 😘 But yet your 💔 is still broken glass of pieces, 😞 that you feel will never be replaced by someone else. But yet you still have the faith in your mind and heart, 💕 that day will come out of the darkness that once was hidden, by not having the kind of love that you deserve, better than what you don't need...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 11:49am
29th Dec 2024 11:49am
Eternally Harmony
For sure what are you willing to sacrifice, for your eternal Harmony
🤔 For what are you doing in order to remain positive, and focus on what you want and need not what you don't need or want, in your life and world. 🌎 For real do you know what you want and need, to sustain your own way of thinking about your own life. 😌 For haven't you had enough of the UNTRUTH, that you've been receiving 😳 for sure you don't deserve what you've been getting from someone. For real what would you change from them to now. 🤔 For just a mortal moment just imagine,...
🤔 For what are you doing in order to remain positive, and focus on what you want and need not what you don't need or want, in your life and world. 🌎 For real do you know what you want and need, to sustain your own way of thinking about your own life. 😌 For haven't you had enough of the UNTRUTH, that you've been receiving 😳 for sure you don't deserve what you've been getting from someone. For real what would you change from them to now. 🤔 For just a mortal moment just imagine,...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 1:30pm
25th Dec 2024 1:30pm
Where will go to escape
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️
My question for you is more beneficial to you than you think, 🤔 for if you were given the opportunity to go far away, from the negativity and drama and confusion, with so much madness and chaos. 😡 THAT'S definitely seems to drain the very life out your deepness in your mind and heart and soul, as it steals the very life out of your mind thoughts, of your own insight and your own imagination. TO be able to just think clearly and rationally. For sure we can do anything if we put...
My question for you is more beneficial to you than you think, 🤔 for if you were given the opportunity to go far away, from the negativity and drama and confusion, with so much madness and chaos. 😡 THAT'S definitely seems to drain the very life out your deepness in your mind and heart and soul, as it steals the very life out of your mind thoughts, of your own insight and your own imagination. TO be able to just think clearly and rationally. For sure we can do anything if we put...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 8:53am
24th Dec 2024 8:53am
A Path To Walk
A path to walk, would that be fate?
that fear of dark, would I abate?
souls of profound bonds seldom found
barren hearts wouldn't tread that ground
quiet calls to trace in timeless rate.
Would inner rhythm dictate
heart abode or be it blind date?
or just to a world be spellbound?
A path to walk
To each step there should be a date
for every choice time wouldn't wait
roamers seek not the Self imbound
on divine journeys, souls unbound
feed heart and open wide mind's gate
A path to walk.
that fear of dark, would I abate?
souls of profound bonds seldom found
barren hearts wouldn't tread that ground
quiet calls to trace in timeless rate.
Would inner rhythm dictate
heart abode or be it blind date?
or just to a world be spellbound?
A path to walk
To each step there should be a date
for every choice time wouldn't wait
roamers seek not the Self imbound
on divine journeys, souls unbound
feed heart and open wide mind's gate
A path to walk.
#metaphor
#MyInspiration
#spiritual
#symbolism
#WritingPoetry
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 12:42pm
18th Dec 2024 12:42pm
Sometimes we forget
Through this life we are always facing ghostly hard times, when we start to find ourselves in battle, with things.that we can't control from happening, but yet it's life. 😭 THAT will break us down and destroy the deepness in our heart and lives, that comes from out of certain real life circumstances that just becomes more, than we can tolerate yet that is still life. For sure it's very necessary to understand, that there is an aura of understanding, that shakes up the nonsense, trying to make sense of it as we, exchange our own personal feelings and thoughts of emotions, and genuine...
#metaphor
#philosophical
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 1:21pm
13th Dec 2024 1:21pm
It's here I am free now
🙊🙉🙈. It's here I am free in this space without time. ⌚ For sure it's necessary to separate our mind, from our body as we believe that it's not impossible, cause you truly believe that anything is possible. When you believe in your dreams. 😔 For the elders say if you want good you gotta stop, doing that what is 😞 bad. FOR your thoughts and mind for sure we must not deviate. FROM the mission at hand 🤨 For above all else you must breathe, out the bad karma and replace it, with good karma into your heart and mind. 🧠 For there will be a...
#metaphor
#minimalist
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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