Metaphor Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#metaphor
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Apr 2025 1:24pm
12th Apr 2025 1:24pm
Eyes of the beholder
As there is still some beauty left in the world 🌎 there is still some people's heart, not change by the chaos and drama and confusion and madness. WHO take the time to admire the many flowers and inhale and exhale there beautiful scents. AS they stroll by the precious things in life. Just needing some gentle loving care and love and attention, to continue to grow and bloom in the fresh spring, weather of the coming of spring changing into a summer breeze as they bloom in the horizon sun 🌞 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
#flowers
#metaphor
#rose
#StreamOfConsciousness
#trees
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Apr 2025 10:37am
12th Apr 2025 10:37am
The Undertow of Life
There will be many things in our lives that we have to seriously question sometimes, for sure we feel like we are drowning in the undertone of life. Floating in a Undertow of the belly of the beast of darkness 🕳️ that has created morbid thoughts of death ☠️ in the shadows of our own personal thoughts. YET it seems to know what we need and want, but yet at what cost as we question, that scenario in retrospect is it testing our strength and perseverance. For sure does it see the truth of what our thoughts, are trying to hide behind the mask as a disguise 😞...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 9:53pm
10th Apr 2025 9:53pm
Drunk Skunk
Drunk skunk, wish you weren't the one
Bite my woman's sugarplum
This worthless piggy never made it home
Impulsive, compulsive
Hope you know your so repulsive
Pommel you like the dog you are
Oh honey I can kill you if I want
Kill you with my own two hands
Oh sugar I'm so happy I could kill you
Kill you like a stranger on my land
Because you, you are worthless like an animal
Labeled rejected on your back
A presence so offensive, A presence so unreal
So many ways to skin a cat
Everything tastes amazing...
Bite my woman's sugarplum
This worthless piggy never made it home
Impulsive, compulsive
Hope you know your so repulsive
Pommel you like the dog you are
Oh honey I can kill you if I want
Kill you with my own two hands
Oh sugar I'm so happy I could kill you
Kill you like a stranger on my land
Because you, you are worthless like an animal
Labeled rejected on your back
A presence so offensive, A presence so unreal
So many ways to skin a cat
Everything tastes amazing...
#evil
#kindness
#love #metaphor
#love #metaphor
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 10:45pm
8th Apr 2025 10:45pm
parables of vanity
touch the rose that fades in the darkest haze
challenging the immortal for all that has befallen her
at midnight's behest
Mortal cage full of rage
the dark for the moment claim another
rend the dark heart tis a dark art to plague
once full of beauty
now brazen with age
a smirk, a scoff
she reveals her innerself
full of pain, she remembers brighter days
a shrew with nothing but time
with sullied vision does cast a shadow
on the dawn's brilliance
for former glory she is vain
sullen faith is accompanied...
challenging the immortal for all that has befallen her
at midnight's behest
Mortal cage full of rage
the dark for the moment claim another
rend the dark heart tis a dark art to plague
once full of beauty
now brazen with age
a smirk, a scoff
she reveals her innerself
full of pain, she remembers brighter days
a shrew with nothing but time
with sullied vision does cast a shadow
on the dawn's brilliance
for former glory she is vain
sullen faith is accompanied...
#love
#metaphor
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Apr 2025 7:41pm
6th Apr 2025 7:41pm
Giving myself to you
When we meet for the first time I knew that you were the one for me, as I was for you for sure, we had a sacred deep connection, from the beginning.Yet it went deeper than that in retrospect of more details with understanding. For sure we felt differently then we ever felt before, as there was no negativity, just good vibes and positive energy for sure it felt simply Hypnotic, in a way as though we were walking up a flight of stairs, you on one side and me on the other side, going through the portal of miracles.
💕...
💕...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 10:31pm
5th Apr 2025 10:31pm
The silence of betrayal
The trials of the truth of the pain and hurt of love, is devastating for anyone who has been affected, by a crime of passion and deception and deep manipulations. Even though it appears to the naked eyes 👁️ 👁️ that with everything, that is going on between us and we truly thought it was well between us. YET beneath the surface of a mask as a disguise to hide your eyes. For your eyes are the key 🗝️ to the very deepness of your own soul. Yet Subconsciously we start to realize that there is something, that doesn't just feel like as it did BEFORE. For...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 00:36am
3rd Apr 2025 00:36am
When you down and out
How many of us remember these great words from a popular song, that nobody wants you when you are down and out.😞 For sure those words hold true to life, for how many of us have been in that kind of situation, when life situations have you feeling like that nobody wants you around 🤔 YET when you was up on your grind coming up it's funny, how they want you around, to get help with their own situations whether it's a conversation or in caring words or it's cash or a helping hand. 🤨 But yet they remember your name and the helping hand, you done for them when they needed...
#dialogue
#LifeStruggles
#metaphor
#sadness
#StreamOfConsciousness
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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:14pm
2nd Apr 2025 7:14pm
"The Black Widow's Game (A Metaphor)"
Under the cover of night, she prowls
Wolves delve in with their beautiful howls
Creatures of the night guided by white owls
A seductress in the shadows, a black widow in human form,
To bend his will, and weather any storm.
Her silhouette, a whisper of the night,
Marked by the hourglass, a dangerous, red light.
Her skin, dark and alluring, her eyes, as deep as the abyss
As she speaks her voice leaves a hiss, those extraordinary lips.... Pure temptation, perfect to kiss....
He is drawn to her, captivated by her...
Wolves delve in with their beautiful howls
Creatures of the night guided by white owls
A seductress in the shadows, a black widow in human form,
To bend his will, and weather any storm.
Her silhouette, a whisper of the night,
Marked by the hourglass, a dangerous, red light.
Her skin, dark and alluring, her eyes, as deep as the abyss
As she speaks her voice leaves a hiss, those extraordinary lips.... Pure temptation, perfect to kiss....
He is drawn to her, captivated by her...
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#metaphor
#romantic
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:22am
2nd Apr 2025 7:22am
Weep the Flowers
tears flower on my face
blooming so beautifully out of place
a gentle smile beseeching them not to show
but their delicate nature draws attention to my hardened expressions
forlorn they grow wildly without nuture
sweet daisies of faith come from deep within me
A memory is all it takes to reduce me to nothing
babies' breath moves in its spot in the garden, grieving
exhaling the pain and inhaling something tender
Tiny epiphanies show in my eyes
my soul is disconnected from my mind
so when I weep, it is from my sacred heart...
blooming so beautifully out of place
a gentle smile beseeching them not to show
but their delicate nature draws attention to my hardened expressions
forlorn they grow wildly without nuture
sweet daisies of faith come from deep within me
A memory is all it takes to reduce me to nothing
babies' breath moves in its spot in the garden, grieving
exhaling the pain and inhaling something tender
Tiny epiphanies show in my eyes
my soul is disconnected from my mind
so when I weep, it is from my sacred heart...
#flowers
#metaphor
#sadness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 12:17pm
1st Apr 2025 12:17pm
We have to ignore somethings
Through this cycle of life we all will have to learn, to walk away from the negativity of nonsense, that doesn't have anything to do with our own lives. For sure we have to learn how to navigate, through the process of the confusion trying to make some kind of sense out of it all. Just because we decided not to entertain, ourselves in a way that is detrimental to our own way of thinking about life. For sure we are responsible for our own actions, that comes with consequences, even when we speak within a conversation to articulate, what we have to say in a positive way to someone. Who is hell...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 2:11am
1st Apr 2025 2:11am
caress
loneliness of soul I'm missing something
wandering spirit return to me
caress the feeling
sensing you are near
covet the art of forgetting
it hurts too much to remember
listless day give me invitation
to share in celebration with your earth-bound children
remorseful shadow cultivating sorrow within me
draw nearer so I will know the immortal
part me from my brothers and sisters
and let me forget what it is to be human
painful understanding I am terribly different
with thoughts of where will I go
cast...
wandering spirit return to me
caress the feeling
sensing you are near
covet the art of forgetting
it hurts too much to remember
listless day give me invitation
to share in celebration with your earth-bound children
remorseful shadow cultivating sorrow within me
draw nearer so I will know the immortal
part me from my brothers and sisters
and let me forget what it is to be human
painful understanding I am terribly different
with thoughts of where will I go
cast...
#metaphor
#spiritual
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 00:42am
29th Mar 2025 00:42am
Gaze
a melody plays quietly
and I agree deep within with the sentiments
I've been here before
So, why am I so perplexed?
wondering at the same stumbling blocks
tripwires of faith getting me tangled
problems I've faced before and never conquered
I'm left kicking my ass damn it I did it again
Socrates of knowledge
philosophy of none
my mind reels, and I open doors
and as Nietzsche's said
careful gazing into the abyss
It might just be gazing into you
so with questions posed
Answers are given but...
and I agree deep within with the sentiments
I've been here before
So, why am I so perplexed?
wondering at the same stumbling blocks
tripwires of faith getting me tangled
problems I've faced before and never conquered
I'm left kicking my ass damn it I did it again
Socrates of knowledge
philosophy of none
my mind reels, and I open doors
and as Nietzsche's said
careful gazing into the abyss
It might just be gazing into you
so with questions posed
Answers are given but...
#metaphor
#philosophical
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