Lesbian Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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lesbian seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 2:03am
26th Dec 2024 2:03am
Traveling Across The Miles By Train
It was while they were
traveling across the miles
by train after spending
Christmas with her family
that Elizabeth and her
roommate Judy got turned
on, stripped down and
kissed and touched each
other all over until they
reached the peak of
orgasm and collapsed.
traveling across the miles
by train after spending
Christmas with her family
that Elizabeth and her
roommate Judy got turned
on, stripped down and
kissed and touched each
other all over until they
reached the peak of
orgasm and collapsed.
#Christmas
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#lesbian
#sex
123 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 11:46pm
23rd Nov 2024 11:46pm
Sleepover’s (What girls talk about early teens)
Cast: Julie, Francine, Gloria and Mei
Mei
I love romantic movies—the happy ever after and the kiss.
Francine
Nope. That movie was dry. There was no tongue in that kiss
Julie
You always want tongue, Fran. I think your hormones need to be leashed
Gloria
Not my kind of movie
Fran, Julie, and Mei say at the same time
Of course not. No girl-on-girl action.
Gloria
Well, I know what gets me going, and that was not it.
Mei
I heard that Joey will make a play for you, Fran. ...
Mei
I love romantic movies—the happy ever after and the kiss.
Francine
Nope. That movie was dry. There was no tongue in that kiss
Julie
You always want tongue, Fran. I think your hormones need to be leashed
Gloria
Not my kind of movie
Fran, Julie, and Mei say at the same time
Of course not. No girl-on-girl action.
Gloria
Well, I know what gets me going, and that was not it.
Mei
I heard that Joey will make a play for you, Fran. ...
#BestFriend
#lesbian
#confusion
168 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 7:57pm
23rd Nov 2024 7:57pm
They pretended
They would both pretend at night during sex that they were having an orgasm
For her it's real easy
She could just say that she's cumming, make some noise and that's that
For him, when he said he was gonna cum, he'd pull out and cum in his hand
She wouldn't know, since it was dark in the room and he made it sound so real
Sure he was hard, but he was thinking of other people he would see throughout his day
After about 10-15 minutes the act was over
They both would ask each other how it felt
They would both lie and say,
Great!
They would turn...
For her it's real easy
She could just say that she's cumming, make some noise and that's that
For him, when he said he was gonna cum, he'd pull out and cum in his hand
She wouldn't know, since it was dark in the room and he made it sound so real
Sure he was hard, but he was thinking of other people he would see throughout his day
After about 10-15 minutes the act was over
They both would ask each other how it felt
They would both lie and say,
Great!
They would turn...
#gay
#lesbian
#marriage
#relationships
#sex
200 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 3:18pm
7th Nov 2024 3:18pm
She Told Me That She's Not One Of Them Anymore
Steven
went over
to Ruth's
apartment and saw
her naked on the
floor with Heidi kiss
and lick
her friend all
over.
went over
to Ruth's
apartment and saw
her naked on the
floor with Heidi kiss
and lick
her friend all
over.
#corruption
#fiction
#ForbiddenLove
#lesbian
#sex
184 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 4:52pm
30th Oct 2024 4:52pm
Observations about Gays and Heterosexuals
Homosexuals and lesbians argue that they love the person and not the gender.
That is clearly a dishonest and misleading statement, and we should reject it.
If this were true, the gender of a person, male or female, would not matter to gays.
According to their reasoning, they should also love a person of the opposite sex.
But the person whom a homosexual or a lesbian loves is always someone of the same sex.
So the action and sexual preference of gays destroy their own arguments.
Gays turn to science to justify their craving for unnatural sexual...
That is clearly a dishonest and misleading statement, and we should reject it.
If this were true, the gender of a person, male or female, would not matter to gays.
According to their reasoning, they should also love a person of the opposite sex.
But the person whom a homosexual or a lesbian loves is always someone of the same sex.
So the action and sexual preference of gays destroy their own arguments.
Gays turn to science to justify their craving for unnatural sexual...
#gay
#lesbian
#morality #science
#morality #science
153 reads
0 Comments
EveAteRedApples
Poem Published
31st Aug 2024 12:13pm
31st Aug 2024 12:13pm
hey babe
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
I'm tired of all your hard edges
of your rigid insistent body
when these days I crave
blurred lines and soft curves
to lull me to sleep
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
and no you can't stay and watch
I'm not your personal gangbang porno
and I'm not up for being the third wheel
in another threesome
when the last one went so well
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
forgot the stubble rash you left
between my...
would you mind if I went back to girls?
I'm tired of all your hard edges
of your rigid insistent body
when these days I crave
blurred lines and soft curves
to lull me to sleep
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
and no you can't stay and watch
I'm not your personal gangbang porno
and I'm not up for being the third wheel
in another threesome
when the last one went so well
Hey babe
would you mind if I went back to girls?
forgot the stubble rash you left
between my...
#bisexual
#crush
#lesbian #LGBT
#lesbian #LGBT
280 reads
6 Comments
EveAteRedApples
Poem Published
6th Jul 2024 10:14am
6th Jul 2024 10:14am
my c**t has a date with your face
#bisexual
#erotic
#lesbian #sex
#lesbian #sex
474 reads
4 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2024 2:58am
2nd Jul 2024 2:58am
All night last night. - With EveAteRedApples
#bisexual
#collaboration
#erotic
#lesbian
#lust
435 reads
11 Comments
EveAteRedApples
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2024 2:07am
2nd Jul 2024 2:07am
All night last night - with Betty
#erotic
#passion
#bisexual
#collaboration
#lesbian
257 reads
12 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Jun 2024 7:32pm
21st Jun 2024 7:32pm
Not The Sort Of Thing To Share With Your Husband
Karina got mail from Melina.
It's a videotape of them having sex.
Karina hid it from Mark.
It's a videotape of them having sex.
Karina hid it from Mark.
#dating
#fiction
#home
#lesbian
#sensual
331 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Jun 2024 9:40pm
19th Jun 2024 9:40pm
During Spring Break In Fort Lauderdale
Robin woke in someone's bed.
She found herself with no clothes on.
She also noticed Angela's panties.
She found herself with no clothes on.
She also noticed Angela's panties.
#alcohol
#fiction
#lesbian
#sensual
#spring
277 reads
0 Comments
DampKitten
Poem Published
17th May 2024 9:55pm
17th May 2024 9:55pm
Letter to my Lesbian Lover
I’m so totally taken by your visions and affection…
I love the sound of rain on a hot tin roof, thunderstorms in the afternoon, and the quaking torrential atmosphere of inclement weather. I love the rolling black clouds and the flashes across the sky. I love being in your arms when the heavens are angry, feeling your protection circling around me, a blanket of bare skin. I love to be naked with you, sweaty and uncovered, open to the melting humidity, a solitary window, a quiet breeze, footsteps on the sidewalk below us.
They, the pedestrians, have no idea we are kissing...
I love the sound of rain on a hot tin roof, thunderstorms in the afternoon, and the quaking torrential atmosphere of inclement weather. I love the rolling black clouds and the flashes across the sky. I love being in your arms when the heavens are angry, feeling your protection circling around me, a blanket of bare skin. I love to be naked with you, sweaty and uncovered, open to the melting humidity, a solitary window, a quiet breeze, footsteps on the sidewalk below us.
They, the pedestrians, have no idea we are kissing...
#erotic
#lesbian
#lover
#passion
#sex
1051 reads
17 Comments
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