Poems for and About Husbands by Top Critiquers
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Poems for and about husbands by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 9:58pm
17th Jan 2025 9:58pm
plea
keening deep within
melodic pain plays quietly
the victim stirs
a casualty of fate
designed to fail in time
the body withers away
and inside I break
there is no reprieve
my delsuions carry me away
my heart can't face the news of today
thoughts darken then grow bright
let strength find me
give me succor in my time of need
I'm in shock and don't know how to cope
carried away on a river of tears
sighing within feelings like I might faint
my husband is my life
I'm no good on my own ...
melodic pain plays quietly
the victim stirs
a casualty of fate
designed to fail in time
the body withers away
and inside I break
there is no reprieve
my delsuions carry me away
my heart can't face the news of today
thoughts darken then grow bright
let strength find me
give me succor in my time of need
I'm in shock and don't know how to cope
carried away on a river of tears
sighing within feelings like I might faint
my husband is my life
I'm no good on my own ...
#grief
#husband
#love
152 reads
6 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
8th Jul 2022 3:21pm
8th Jul 2022 3:21pm
Without coffee or remorse
I like cops and married women for
the same reasons:
They’re pissed at the world,
they fuck fast
and they
keep their
mouths shut.
So I texted a cop
I’d once done a ride-along with,
because while
I read porn,
my husband
and our girlfriend
talked about
baby names.
It punched a hole
in me.
Something gaping
and ugly.
And I wanted to fill it.
With you.
With you.
I wanted to feel all that
tension,
that heat
that...
the same reasons:
They’re pissed at the world,
they fuck fast
and they
keep their
mouths shut.
So I texted a cop
I’d once done a ride-along with,
because while
I read porn,
my husband
and our girlfriend
talked about
baby names.
It punched a hole
in me.
Something gaping
and ugly.
And I wanted to fill it.
With you.
With you.
I wanted to feel all that
tension,
that heat
that...
#husband
#girlfriend
#sex
#lover
#emptiness
577 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
11th May 2020 9:19pm
11th May 2020 9:19pm
BRIDGES TO CROSS
From moments of time with each other as one, there will be situations that will test our love bond and patiences along, with our strength and compassion with unconditional support of understanding of honor and respect. That will bring us struggles and maybe destroy the very fabric of the love, that we built from our own blood sweat and tears with the process of the hurt and pain. That we will have to face head on with life's trials and tribulations, that will become sometimes to heavy upon our souls and hearts and minds, penetrating through the very systematic factions of our true existences...
#wife
#husband
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#relationships
747 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 00:15am
12th Jan 2025 00:15am
The DUP Court
Ladies and Gentlemen
Jurors of the DUP court
Allow me to paint you a picture
It’s a crime of the heart
(Of the heart, he said?)
Yes, you heard me correctly.
For those of you with delicate dispositions
Or have never heard of some positions
Please allow me to finish this crime of hate
(wait, he said heart, now hate)
I know I am making you wait
It's too long, so here it goes.
She found him in the bed with Gwendolyn
Gwendolyn, in her words, is her best friend
They grew up in a time of...
Jurors of the DUP court
Allow me to paint you a picture
It’s a crime of the heart
(Of the heart, he said?)
Yes, you heard me correctly.
For those of you with delicate dispositions
Or have never heard of some positions
Please allow me to finish this crime of hate
(wait, he said heart, now hate)
I know I am making you wait
It's too long, so here it goes.
She found him in the bed with Gwendolyn
Gwendolyn, in her words, is her best friend
They grew up in a time of...
#ForbiddenLove
#girlfriend
#husband
#lust
#wife
257 reads
8 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 1:52pm
7th Mar 2025 1:52pm
Where are we going?
Softened lines converge
in the haze, your lips meet mine,
blurred, yet crystal clear.
Whispers merge with light,
colors fade but hearts align
timeless in the kiss.
Within oblivion
a kiss blooms, defying void,
timeless whispers rise.
Stars dissolve to dust
yet your touch ignites the dark,
void bends, love remains.
Through the endless night
oblivion guards our spark
bound within the void.
Through the veiled embrace
world dissolves to just us...
Softened lines converge
in the haze, your lips meet mine,
blurred, yet crystal clear.
Whispers merge with light,
colors fade but hearts align
timeless in the kiss.
Within oblivion
a kiss blooms, defying void,
timeless whispers rise.
Stars dissolve to dust
yet your touch ignites the dark,
void bends, love remains.
Through the endless night
oblivion guards our spark
bound within the void.
Through the veiled embrace
world dissolves to just us...
#husband
#love
#passion
#relationships
#romantic
253 reads
12 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
19th Jan 2019 5:19pm
19th Jan 2019 5:19pm
January 1964 first year adversary
January 1964 first year adversary
Every moment we spent together
Has touched our lives, our souls forever.
The things we shared and learned
Is permanent growth we've earned.
The person I have grown into today
Did not get there by chance, no way.
I am who I am partly because of you,
And you are YOU because of me, too.
The changes I see
And what I have learned about me
Are a response to how we affected our lives
And what we discover in each other's eyes.
It is uncertain if we have to part or one day...
Every moment we spent together
Has touched our lives, our souls forever.
The things we shared and learned
Is permanent growth we've earned.
The person I have grown into today
Did not get there by chance, no way.
I am who I am partly because of you,
And you are YOU because of me, too.
The changes I see
And what I have learned about me
Are a response to how we affected our lives
And what we discover in each other's eyes.
It is uncertain if we have to part or one day...
#love
#husband
#heartbroken
658 reads
2 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
3rd Aug 2019 7:27am
3rd Aug 2019 7:27am
what's done in the dark
cry me a river
I'm cold as stone
no tears to bejewel my eyes
you are worthy of an ocean
I silently hold my pain
hurt in a glance
you catch sight of it
I look away
what's wrong babe?
nothing just the sun in my eyes
I'm keeping a secret from you
a no-good wife
you turn a blind eye
you're willing to put up with so much
I can't bear to watch you lose your grip
I catch you still watching me from the window
a parent with a wayward child
you have the right to worry
I don't...
I'm cold as stone
no tears to bejewel my eyes
you are worthy of an ocean
I silently hold my pain
hurt in a glance
you catch sight of it
I look away
what's wrong babe?
nothing just the sun in my eyes
I'm keeping a secret from you
a no-good wife
you turn a blind eye
you're willing to put up with so much
I can't bear to watch you lose your grip
I catch you still watching me from the window
a parent with a wayward child
you have the right to worry
I don't...
#love
#husband
#marriage #betrayal
#marriage #betrayal
510 reads
5 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
1st Jan 2023 2:15am
1st Jan 2023 2:15am
none of us have changed
your family are normal happy loud shouty people whom you say I’m rude to for taking myself off with a book but that’s the bloke you married
#husband
231 reads
0 Comments
DampKitten
Poem Published
9th Jun 2024 6:37pm
9th Jun 2024 6:37pm
Forced Entry
#husband
#passion
#relationships
#seductive
#wife
493 reads
16 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
11th Aug 2022 6:32am
11th Aug 2022 6:32am
The Virgin Bride
The Virgin Bride
You stand at the counter
glowing like the female essence
as you try on perfume.
The scent lingers
as I breathe each exhalation
My gaze follows your back.
Your black dress clings to your derriere
like a second skin.
“Only one person allowed in the dressing room.”
“She has a bad back and needs help dressing.
I am her husband.”
“Well, my boyfriend helps me dress,
and my back is fit as a fiddle.
Just behave yourselves in there.”
“She’ll keep her lingerie on. I’ll see to that.” ...
You stand at the counter
glowing like the female essence
as you try on perfume.
The scent lingers
as I breathe each exhalation
My gaze follows your back.
Your black dress clings to your derriere
like a second skin.
“Only one person allowed in the dressing room.”
“She has a bad back and needs help dressing.
I am her husband.”
“Well, my boyfriend helps me dress,
and my back is fit as a fiddle.
Just behave yourselves in there.”
“She’ll keep her lingerie on. I’ll see to that.” ...
#wife
#husband
#sex
#erotic
#sensual
473 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 8:07pm
29th Jan 2025 8:07pm
Leave Him Alone Or Else
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#husband
#sex
114 reads
0 Comments
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