Poems for and About Husbands by Top Critiquers
#husband
Related Theme
#lover
Poems for and about husbands by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Bend~Dedicated To My Husband
My mortality before me I come out of the shadows
my blaring light shine blinding
with an intensity that burns I tell you I love you
I must warn you I love hard
an eternity not long enough to know you fully
I'm but a young woman when it comes to loving
It takes maturity
A broken heart or many
but it is in me to give of myself wholly
returning affections and receiving afflictions
It is painful at times taking someone to your breast
not losing yourself but finding a part of you not known before
an awakening of...
my blaring light shine blinding
with an intensity that burns I tell you I love you
I must warn you I love hard
an eternity not long enough to know you fully
I'm but a young woman when it comes to loving
It takes maturity
A broken heart or many
but it is in me to give of myself wholly
returning affections and receiving afflictions
It is painful at times taking someone to your breast
not losing yourself but finding a part of you not known before
an awakening of...
#love
#husband
123 reads
10 Comments
Dad's Wedding Ring
Family vacation
Parents both deceased
Retrieved my dad's wedding ring
It lay resting in a safe deposit box
Almost 20 years now
I feel him in this ring
Brings comfort
I was never one for wearing gold
I'll make this exception
It worn in places
He wore it for over 50 years
I should be so lucky
Parents both deceased
Retrieved my dad's wedding ring
It lay resting in a safe deposit box
Almost 20 years now
I feel him in this ring
Brings comfort
I was never one for wearing gold
I'll make this exception
It worn in places
He wore it for over 50 years
I should be so lucky
#husband
683 reads
10 Comments
Sexpot Queen B-Day (4-13-16)
Sexpot Queen B-Day
She's young at heart
Waiting and Wanting
Her Pacifist to
awaken her core
Waiting on all fours
For her Pacifist to go
Doogie Style on her
Sweet Ass:
So awaken yourself
She's young at heart
Waiting and Wanting
Her Pacifist to
awaken her core
Waiting on all fours
For her Pacifist to go
Doogie Style on her
Sweet Ass:
So awaken yourself
#wife
#husband
#sex
#erotic
#dirty
431 reads
3 Comments
Your pain
Give me your pain
that I might understand it
that I may take it away from you
that your pain might be mine
that we can share and suffer together.
Men can never understand that
this makes a woman and
for some separates the sexes
so that a clear divide creates a
barrier and for those women they
celebrate this difference as a right
and a blessing.
Many call it the curse as pain has
been related to punishment for
sin by some religions but if this
term relates to religious
punishment why is this not felt ...
that I might understand it
that I may take it away from you
that your pain might be mine
that we can share and suffer together.
Men can never understand that
this makes a woman and
for some separates the sexes
so that a clear divide creates a
barrier and for those women they
celebrate this difference as a right
and a blessing.
Many call it the curse as pain has
been related to punishment for
sin by some religions but if this
term relates to religious
punishment why is this not felt ...
#husband
#motherhood
#ILoveYou
#LifeCycle
#admiration
544 reads
0 Comments
I Couldn’t Breath
#husband
#abuse
#DomesticViolence
#manipulation
#deception
488 reads
9 Comments
f**k you cancer
Why in the fuck
did you think
you could take him from me?
Do you know who the fuck you are up against?
I am all you wish you could destroy, but lives
He is more than what I am
He is the air I breathe
He is my soul
He is my heartbeat
He is the smile on our teens lips
He is the blood of life that keeps me alive
Hes made me everything I wanted to be
He loves me
Hes always loved me...
So, cancer FUCK YOU
You cant have him
NO. FUCKING. WAY.
Hes Mine
Ill fight for him
Come for me
Im...
did you think
you could take him from me?
Do you know who the fuck you are up against?
I am all you wish you could destroy, but lives
He is more than what I am
He is the air I breathe
He is my soul
He is my heartbeat
He is the smile on our teens lips
He is the blood of life that keeps me alive
Hes made me everything I wanted to be
He loves me
Hes always loved me...
So, cancer FUCK YOU
You cant have him
NO. FUCKING. WAY.
Hes Mine
Ill fight for him
Come for me
Im...
#husband
#illness
#cancer
642 reads
5 Comments
January 1964 first year adversary
January 1964 first year adversary
Every moment we spent together
Has touched our lives, our souls forever.
The things we shared and learned
Is permanent growth we've earned.
The person I have grown into today
Did not get there by chance, no way.
I am who I am partly because of you,
And you are YOU because of me, too.
The changes I see
And what I have learned about me
Are a response to how we affected our lives
And what we discover in each other's eyes.
It is uncertain if we have to part or one day...
Every moment we spent together
Has touched our lives, our souls forever.
The things we shared and learned
Is permanent growth we've earned.
The person I have grown into today
Did not get there by chance, no way.
I am who I am partly because of you,
And you are YOU because of me, too.
The changes I see
And what I have learned about me
Are a response to how we affected our lives
And what we discover in each other's eyes.
It is uncertain if we have to part or one day...
#love
#husband
#heartbroken
536 reads
2 Comments
Kiss Me
kiss me-
no, not there
but on the
side of my neck
like you used
to do to turn
me on and tell
me you love me
even though
the years have
turned my hair white
and i've
a few wrinkles
here and there
kiss me-
and tell me
i am still sexy
even though
its been years
since we
last made love
i have kept
myself up for you
waiting for
this very moment
just to be
with you once more
no, not there
but on the
side of my neck
like you used
to do to turn
me on and tell
me you love me
even though
the years have
turned my hair white
and i've
a few wrinkles
here and there
kiss me-
and tell me
i am still sexy
even though
its been years
since we
last made love
i have kept
myself up for you
waiting for
this very moment
just to be
with you once more
#love
#wife
#husband
#memories
#FirstLove
445 reads
10 Comments
Swete freond
My purest love, I long for thee
with all my heart and soul.
Thou art the fairest of the fair.
The brightest of the whole...
No other man can match thy grace
thy handsomeness and thy wit.
Thou art the sun that lights my day
and so the moon that guides my night.
My dearest one, I swear to thee
by all the saints in heavens above
that I'll always cherish thee
and honor thee with love.
No other man can take thy place
for thy virtue and thy brave.
Thou art the star that guides my way
the shield that keeps...
with all my heart and soul.
Thou art the fairest of the fair.
The brightest of the whole...
No other man can match thy grace
thy handsomeness and thy wit.
Thou art the sun that lights my day
and so the moon that guides my night.
My dearest one, I swear to thee
by all the saints in heavens above
that I'll always cherish thee
and honor thee with love.
No other man can take thy place
for thy virtue and thy brave.
Thou art the star that guides my way
the shield that keeps...
#love
#husband
#gay
#romantic
#passion
118 reads
2 Comments
none of us have changed
your family are normal happy loud shouty people whom you say I’m rude to for taking myself off with a book but that’s the bloke you married
#husband
132 reads
0 Comments
Villanelle Nr.20 — Age Divergence
We are ageing in different ways
and there are signs of a future time
when lights will dim in a strange maze
Barring sudden death, this phase
splits loved rhythms from known rhymes
as ageing takes on different ways
It’s hard to tell, predicting days
how long until a foreign bell will chime,
signalling lights dimmed in a strange maze
A theatre production plays
where actors dare not speak — they mime
the act of ageing in different ways ...
and there are signs of a future time
when lights will dim in a strange maze
Barring sudden death, this phase
splits loved rhythms from known rhymes
as ageing takes on different ways
It’s hard to tell, predicting days
how long until a foreign bell will chime,
signalling lights dimmed in a strange maze
A theatre production plays
where actors dare not speak — they mime
the act of ageing in different ways ...
#love
#wife
#husband
#aging
#SelfDiscovery
456 reads
12 Comments
The Virgin Bride
The Virgin Bride
You stand at the counter
glowing like the female essence
as you try on perfume.
The scent lingers
as I breathe each exhalation
My gaze follows your back.
Your black dress clings to your derriere
like a second skin.
“Only one person allowed in the dressing room.”
“She has a bad back and needs help dressing.
I am her husband.”
“Well, my boyfriend helps me dress,
and my back is fit as a fiddle.
Just behave yourselves in there.”
“She’ll keep her lingerie on. I’ll see to that.” ...
You stand at the counter
glowing like the female essence
as you try on perfume.
The scent lingers
as I breathe each exhalation
My gaze follows your back.
Your black dress clings to your derriere
like a second skin.
“Only one person allowed in the dressing room.”
“She has a bad back and needs help dressing.
I am her husband.”
“Well, my boyfriend helps me dress,
and my back is fit as a fiddle.
Just behave yourselves in there.”
“She’ll keep her lingerie on. I’ll see to that.” ...
#wife
#husband
#sex
#erotic
#sensual
349 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems for and About Husbands by Top Critiquers