Gothic by Top Critiquers Poems
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gothic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 11:58am
22nd Sep 2024 11:58am
Daylight has come to end
What had been so long ago
Is only a mist in the snow
And for the cleanses that once had been made
Are simply my sins that did fade
And for what we've become is only ecstasy
And a dream, a vision of pure misery
Let me be the one to tell you all
Of hell's resurrection and heaven's fall
Sleep sweet damned woman for you are
Caused him to triumph and forever will abide
By his side
Moon demon, celestial star gazer
Be a comfort to me and not curse my kin
Wise of all liars, stalked from the start
And not to show thy...
Is only a mist in the snow
And for the cleanses that once had been made
Are simply my sins that did fade
And for what we've become is only ecstasy
And a dream, a vision of pure misery
Let me be the one to tell you all
Of hell's resurrection and heaven's fall
Sleep sweet damned woman for you are
Caused him to triumph and forever will abide
By his side
Moon demon, celestial star gazer
Be a comfort to me and not curse my kin
Wise of all liars, stalked from the start
And not to show thy...
#dark
#death
#earth
#friendship
#gothic
187 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 10:17pm
27th Oct 2024 10:17pm
dire
perfectly excuted misery
perpetrated on my loneliness
oh dire day take your leave
deeply steeped in reverie, I am sadly absent
my beloved hope please shine on me
take the pain from sorrow and make me a believer
guilty silence in happiness's stead
I am dour
relieve the feelings in loneliness keep
and give me succor
oh malady of ill intent
release your grip so I may smile
emptiness of thought
darkness glow, so captivating
should I invite it in
and take leave of my senses?
hurting faith...
perpetrated on my loneliness
oh dire day take your leave
deeply steeped in reverie, I am sadly absent
my beloved hope please shine on me
take the pain from sorrow and make me a believer
guilty silence in happiness's stead
I am dour
relieve the feelings in loneliness keep
and give me succor
oh malady of ill intent
release your grip so I may smile
emptiness of thought
darkness glow, so captivating
should I invite it in
and take leave of my senses?
hurting faith...
#dark
#gothic
124 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
14th Sep 2021 10:48pm
14th Sep 2021 10:48pm
Red Velvet
Velvet
Blood
Drinking you
Anytime of the month
Blood
Drinking you
Anytime of the month
#dark
#sex
#gothic
651 reads
12 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
1st May 2024 2:00pm
1st May 2024 2:00pm
Devil Inside
do not bless me
for i have sinned
(Pretty Reckless)
in the cat black
of night gothic
vampire vibe
craving for
fresh meat
out for a kill
kick ass thrill
i can't control
the bloodlust it
consumes me
& takes over
just a ghost
skin & bones
mere remains
of what used to
be the soul of me
i'm gonna take a life
for i have sinned
(Pretty Reckless)
in the cat black
of night gothic
vampire vibe
craving for
fresh meat
out for a kill
kick ass thrill
i can't control
the bloodlust it
consumes me
& takes over
just a ghost
skin & bones
mere remains
of what used to
be the soul of me
i'm gonna take a life
#gothic
#vampires
242 reads
18 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
16th May 2023 2:39am
16th May 2023 2:39am
Mortgaged
God must be like Bela Lugosi
Staring over his dark matter cape arm
In curation of anonymity
And deficit thermodynamic charm
Sucking smiles out of his gothic face
As he stalks the beat of each mortal heart
Trapped in their spheres of Goldilock space
Where all sensation is a dying art;
Only the heat of a lingering meat
Fading as the universal ember
Fornicating with its bread and blood treat
Of the Eden we choose to remember
Where no one had to claw forevermore
Between starvation...and a credit score!
Staring over his dark matter cape arm
In curation of anonymity
And deficit thermodynamic charm
Sucking smiles out of his gothic face
As he stalks the beat of each mortal heart
Trapped in their spheres of Goldilock space
Where all sensation is a dying art;
Only the heat of a lingering meat
Fading as the universal ember
Fornicating with its bread and blood treat
Of the Eden we choose to remember
Where no one had to claw forevermore
Between starvation...and a credit score!
#gothic
#TruthOfLife
246 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
25th Jun 2024 5:44pm
25th Jun 2024 5:44pm
Inexplicable yesterday
It was May!
I don't remember the day...
What more can I say?
Boats circled the bay.
Seagulls seemed to pray!
From the sky it came as if it were an x-ray!
In the middle of the bananas on the tray...
Something very strange and gray!
How, with so many sins, can we pay?
Those who didn't watch continued on their way!
I don't remember the day...
What more can I say?
Boats circled the bay.
Seagulls seemed to pray!
From the sky it came as if it were an x-ray!
In the middle of the bananas on the tray...
Something very strange and gray!
How, with so many sins, can we pay?
Those who didn't watch continued on their way!
#dark
#gothic
#sea
#shadows
#sky
96 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
6th Jun 2024 9:22pm
6th Jun 2024 9:22pm
Halloween air in June
My hand breaks the surface and
parts the night-grass
on my grave.
My eyes roll back
as wind kisses my fingertips
and I revel in the taste of
fecund soil in my mouth.
The ground undulates
as if the very earth
were gravid
with me
something happened.
and I tear through the
universe’s placenta
with my dirty nails,
feral and filthy
dusky and filled
with living night,
My chest heaves against
the white linen dress ...
parts the night-grass
on my grave.
My eyes roll back
as wind kisses my fingertips
and I revel in the taste of
fecund soil in my mouth.
The ground undulates
as if the very earth
were gravid
with me
something happened.
and I tear through the
universe’s placenta
with my dirty nails,
feral and filthy
dusky and filled
with living night,
My chest heaves against
the white linen dress ...
#dark
#gothic
#lust #SelfDiscovery
#lust #SelfDiscovery
274 reads
18 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 10:58am
12th Jun 2024 10:58am
Babylon
Gate of the gods.
Where the girls weep alone.
Eros disregards,
The unwelcome vermin.
Hoards of like mind,
Create towers of stone.
Building blocks of righteousness,
All the way home.
Never say what they think.
Just working as one.
A team of creators,
Invading heaven.
Don't let God know.
Don't let him see.
He'll scatter your thoughts,
Languages and family.
He'll tear down your tower.
And label it blaspheme.
He'll punish until you cower.
For even the thought of heresy.
You'll...
Where the girls weep alone.
Eros disregards,
The unwelcome vermin.
Hoards of like mind,
Create towers of stone.
Building blocks of righteousness,
All the way home.
Never say what they think.
Just working as one.
A team of creators,
Invading heaven.
Don't let God know.
Don't let him see.
He'll scatter your thoughts,
Languages and family.
He'll tear down your tower.
And label it blaspheme.
He'll punish until you cower.
For even the thought of heresy.
You'll...
#gothic
#heaven
#wisdom
160 reads
10 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
8th Apr 2023 2:20pm
8th Apr 2023 2:20pm
The Pains Of Evermore
eternal black heart
fears nothing ~ but the coming
cold dawn and sunrise
fears nothing ~ but the coming
cold dawn and sunrise
#dark
#gothic
#senryu
419 reads
5 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
5th Oct 2023 2:32am
5th Oct 2023 2:32am
The Many Faces Of A Seductive Sorceress
Until the calling of night
Let the Sorceress reflection mirrored
Enticing souls in flight
Unto the soothing voice
Whispers of seduction felt
As a handsome Knight who shall gallop unto my rapture and sweetly surrender
The song playing in the background of this video titled, When I Ride by Ashley Mehta is part of the creative app.
I do not own any copyright to the nature of the music, it is in part for entertainment purposes only
Let the Sorceress reflection mirrored
Enticing souls in flight
Unto the soothing voice
Whispers of seduction felt
As a handsome Knight who shall gallop unto my rapture and sweetly surrender
The song playing in the background of this video titled, When I Ride by Ashley Mehta is part of the creative app.
I do not own any copyright to the nature of the music, it is in part for entertainment purposes only
#gothic
384 reads
Naajir
Poem Published
16th Mar 2023 12:57pm
16th Mar 2023 12:57pm
Tales Of A Flayed Angel
^^^
there she stood
stilled in defiant beauty
on display as an archaeological find
of unknown origin
eternally posed for the curious
visitors laden with a peculiar taste
a for dark extravagance
^^^^
bemused and bewitched by
her immovable stance
molded meticulously by scripture
swirled within the folds of esoteric pottery
into a picture suggesting a worth more ...
there she stood
stilled in defiant beauty
on display as an archaeological find
of unknown origin
eternally posed for the curious
visitors laden with a peculiar taste
a for dark extravagance
^^^^
bemused and bewitched by
her immovable stance
molded meticulously by scripture
swirled within the folds of esoteric pottery
into a picture suggesting a worth more ...
#dark
#gothic
#night
534 reads
5 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
7th Sep 2022 2:55am
7th Sep 2022 2:55am
Balance
She was my perfect equal, balance, my little Goth doll
Black eyeliner, lips and nails calling the moon out for a brawl
She was strong in ways that most couldn't see
She was proud of who she was and knew who she wanted to be
Late nights she called me out into the moonlight
Kicking crazy knowledge about the universe and nature, and getting myself right
We crashed in abandoned churches, graveyards with spirits that needed company
We sat on ancient headstones and shared a little something something
Twist were made with a flask being passed back...
Black eyeliner, lips and nails calling the moon out for a brawl
She was strong in ways that most couldn't see
She was proud of who she was and knew who she wanted to be
Late nights she called me out into the moonlight
Kicking crazy knowledge about the universe and nature, and getting myself right
We crashed in abandoned churches, graveyards with spirits that needed company
We sat on ancient headstones and shared a little something something
Twist were made with a flask being passed back...
#love
#gothic
469 reads
2 Comments
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