Gothic Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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gothic seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Ravenskraft
Poem Published
4th Jul 2024 5:51pm
4th Jul 2024 5:51pm
De'Nyghtshade's The Written Portrait for The Endless Short Poem Session
Come to me.
Undress yourself unto it's nothing left on.
This is my song from an unsung tongue
Walk around nude.
Why I can admire you
Without touching you.
So badly I want to devour you softly.
Till now let me adore you
As I write a portrait of you. With an imagination feel
I appeal To love you still.
Midnight would soon be ours. Yours. Mine
2024.
Undress yourself unto it's nothing left on.
This is my song from an unsung tongue
Walk around nude.
Why I can admire you
Without touching you.
So badly I want to devour you softly.
Till now let me adore you
As I write a portrait of you. With an imagination feel
I appeal To love you still.
Midnight would soon be ours. Yours. Mine
2024.
#gothic
#romantic
#Romanticism
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Ravenskraft
Poem Published
29th Jun 2024 6:34am
29th Jun 2024 6:34am
The Forest of Endless Vocals By FD Ravenskraft for Endless Press
The Forest of Endless Vocals
By FD Ravenskraft for Endless Press
On the shores of complicated
And Deranged is a place on the Mountain of Styx
The weight of the River of blood emerges
The scene of Endless Screams compose
The vocals of pure horror and beauty
The flight of the watchers cover the Plainfield
One thousand square feet of endlessness acres
In the fields of broken symphonic choral
Singing in anger and fury. Darken and eerie
Filthy and unnerving
This place has broken instruments from the sound
Of Symphonies ...
By FD Ravenskraft for Endless Press
On the shores of complicated
And Deranged is a place on the Mountain of Styx
The weight of the River of blood emerges
The scene of Endless Screams compose
The vocals of pure horror and beauty
The flight of the watchers cover the Plainfield
One thousand square feet of endlessness acres
In the fields of broken symphonic choral
Singing in anger and fury. Darken and eerie
Filthy and unnerving
This place has broken instruments from the sound
Of Symphonies ...
#gothic
#mystery
#ShortStory
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Ravenskraft
Poem Published
29th Jun 2024 6:28am
29th Jun 2024 6:28am
The Concerto of The Abyss By FD Ravenskraft for Endless Press
The Preparation of the Intro
As the orchestra prep to propose to the bride
As she is the mother of darkness
Mother of all as you saw. It doesn't matter at all
This tale is too involved in the marriage to the abyss
A sinister awakening of her
Sleep on her hellhound fur
But what occurs is the fact
That this marriage is madness
The necessary sadness
To be a gift of all. The Fall of the Living Fallen
But dead and rotten
The prestige of the conductor's baton
That heaven and hell is in his command
As we see it in close demand...
As the orchestra prep to propose to the bride
As she is the mother of darkness
Mother of all as you saw. It doesn't matter at all
This tale is too involved in the marriage to the abyss
A sinister awakening of her
Sleep on her hellhound fur
But what occurs is the fact
That this marriage is madness
The necessary sadness
To be a gift of all. The Fall of the Living Fallen
But dead and rotten
The prestige of the conductor's baton
That heaven and hell is in his command
As we see it in close demand...
#gothic
#scary
#ShortStory #tragedy
#ShortStory #tragedy
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PAR
Poem Published
25th Jun 2024 5:44pm
25th Jun 2024 5:44pm
Inexplicable yesterday
It was May!
I don't remember the day...
What more can I say?
Boats circled the bay.
Seagulls seemed to pray!
From the sky it came as if it were an x-ray!
In the middle of the bananas on the tray...
Something very strange and gray!
How, with so many sins, can we pay?
Those who didn't watch continued on their way!
I don't remember the day...
What more can I say?
Boats circled the bay.
Seagulls seemed to pray!
From the sky it came as if it were an x-ray!
In the middle of the bananas on the tray...
Something very strange and gray!
How, with so many sins, can we pay?
Those who didn't watch continued on their way!
#dark
#gothic
#sea
#shadows
#sky
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Ravenskraft
Poem Published
18th Jun 2024 11:57pm
18th Jun 2024 11:57pm
Mr Oblong's Body Parts For Endless Press Studios By FD Ravenskraft
Mr Oblong's Body Parts
For Endless Press Studios
By FD Ravenskraft
Drop the Body on the floor
By The fucking chamber door
The brutality upon the shores
Of the dirty nights of flight
The madness stares upon me
You see the bleeding heart is caught
By Oblong's torture chamber
I'm not your saviour
You have become his next favour
Heads. Torsos. Legs for sale
Coming for the smoker of hell
Butt cheeks tenderized and marinade
Drinking a bottle of Gatorade
Throw away the infected parts infested with AIDS ...
For Endless Press Studios
By FD Ravenskraft
Drop the Body on the floor
By The fucking chamber door
The brutality upon the shores
Of the dirty nights of flight
The madness stares upon me
You see the bleeding heart is caught
By Oblong's torture chamber
I'm not your saviour
You have become his next favour
Heads. Torsos. Legs for sale
Coming for the smoker of hell
Butt cheeks tenderized and marinade
Drinking a bottle of Gatorade
Throw away the infected parts infested with AIDS ...
#gothic
#mystery
#scary #tragedy
#scary #tragedy
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Ravenskraft
Poem Published
18th Jun 2024 11:47pm
18th Jun 2024 11:47pm
The Shadows of The Trees by FD Ravenskraft for Endless Press
In the Darkest Beginning
The breeding of the birth of trees
Comes into a darker path
Mother nature rages war against
Humanity for their cruelty
Their disrespect cost an uproar among the Gods
The reality of twisted ancients that breathe
Within them to kill everything at sight
To take back the beauty of mothers' attended
The obsession with killing humanity is a Just
Without disgust.
The Order is a must
The Trees devour the soil in blood
The carcass of humanity is being left by crows
After the animals tear them to shreds ...
The breeding of the birth of trees
Comes into a darker path
Mother nature rages war against
Humanity for their cruelty
Their disrespect cost an uproar among the Gods
The reality of twisted ancients that breathe
Within them to kill everything at sight
To take back the beauty of mothers' attended
The obsession with killing humanity is a Just
Without disgust.
The Order is a must
The Trees devour the soil in blood
The carcass of humanity is being left by crows
After the animals tear them to shreds ...
#gothic
#mystery
#narrative #scary
#narrative #scary
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 10:58am
12th Jun 2024 10:58am
Babylon
Gate of the gods.
Where the girls weep alone.
Eros disregards,
The unwelcome vermin.
Hoards of like mind,
Create towers of stone.
Building blocks of righteousness,
All the way home.
Never say what they think.
Just working as one.
A team of creators,
Invading heaven.
Don't let God know.
Don't let him see.
He'll scatter your thoughts,
Languages and family.
He'll tear down your tower.
And label it blaspheme.
He'll punish until you cower.
For even the thought of heresy.
You'll...
Where the girls weep alone.
Eros disregards,
The unwelcome vermin.
Hoards of like mind,
Create towers of stone.
Building blocks of righteousness,
All the way home.
Never say what they think.
Just working as one.
A team of creators,
Invading heaven.
Don't let God know.
Don't let him see.
He'll scatter your thoughts,
Languages and family.
He'll tear down your tower.
And label it blaspheme.
He'll punish until you cower.
For even the thought of heresy.
You'll...
#gothic
#heaven
#wisdom
209 reads
10 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
6th Jun 2024 9:22pm
6th Jun 2024 9:22pm
Halloween air in June
My hand breaks the surface and
parts the night-grass
on my grave.
My eyes roll back
as wind kisses my fingertips
and I revel in the taste of
fecund soil in my mouth.
The ground undulates
as if the very earth
were gravid
with me
something happened.
and I tear through the
universe’s placenta
with my dirty nails,
feral and filthy
dusky and filled
with living night,
My chest heaves against
the white linen dress ...
parts the night-grass
on my grave.
My eyes roll back
as wind kisses my fingertips
and I revel in the taste of
fecund soil in my mouth.
The ground undulates
as if the very earth
were gravid
with me
something happened.
and I tear through the
universe’s placenta
with my dirty nails,
feral and filthy
dusky and filled
with living night,
My chest heaves against
the white linen dress ...
#dark
#gothic
#lust #SelfDiscovery
#lust #SelfDiscovery
315 reads
18 Comments
Ravenskraft
Poem Published
25th May 2024 8:54pm
25th May 2024 8:54pm
FD Ravenskraft's The Watchers of Nevermore for Endless Studios By FD Ravenskraft
The Eyes of many
That sees everything and beyond
Within Ravenshenge is a terror within it
That all evil is trapped there to keep them in
Earth Dwellers want them to enter the world
of the living.
The king wants no part of this contract of the world
The Nevermore King heeds the call of his beloved
Watchers to seek guidance
Rochester keeps the Delightful ones from entering the world
as the graves are renovated for newcomers
and Pauline The Bearer controls the south of Banshees and witches.
As Izsenhimm will create a new nightmare to...
That sees everything and beyond
Within Ravenshenge is a terror within it
That all evil is trapped there to keep them in
Earth Dwellers want them to enter the world
of the living.
The king wants no part of this contract of the world
The Nevermore King heeds the call of his beloved
Watchers to seek guidance
Rochester keeps the Delightful ones from entering the world
as the graves are renovated for newcomers
and Pauline The Bearer controls the south of Banshees and witches.
As Izsenhimm will create a new nightmare to...
#gothic
#mystery
#narrative
#scary
#tragedy
195 reads
3 Comments
Ravenskraft
Poem Published
20th May 2024 2:14pm
20th May 2024 2:14pm
The Swarms of Murderers by FD Ravenskraft
The Swarming of Ravens plotting
Not just to feast on this day
But to end humanity with no delay
Rumming red
Red rumming. Their language of unknown
Dread. As they're Swarming
Like a can of Worms
To make society unknown to the plot
Of humanity treason
But now it's for a reason
This is the killing season
They came this night
To prepare their flight to attack
Knowing they all will crack
Into their mental capacity
A murderous rhapsody
The morning comes
The air is fresh. Having coffee
Feeling...
Not just to feast on this day
But to end humanity with no delay
Rumming red
Red rumming. Their language of unknown
Dread. As they're Swarming
Like a can of Worms
To make society unknown to the plot
Of humanity treason
But now it's for a reason
This is the killing season
They came this night
To prepare their flight to attack
Knowing they all will crack
Into their mental capacity
A murderous rhapsody
The morning comes
The air is fresh. Having coffee
Feeling...
#gothic
#scary
#tragedy
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Ravenskraft
Poem Published
19th May 2024 9:56pm
19th May 2024 9:56pm
The Rose of Raven de Cyrano By De'Nyghtshade
The Rose of Raven de Cyrano
By De'Nyghtshade
Dear love, I shall crumble in my own filth to be clean with my simple rhyme. As I'm breathing the heathen within my favour to love you. Damage as I am no more - Raven de Cyrano
My love. My deepest Lady.
I'm your Cyrano
Not your tormented Romeo
Or should I declare to decline
With a glass of fine wine
My tears are the roses
Simple and fair.
Please caress a lock of your hair
For me to grasp in your favour
My...
By De'Nyghtshade
Dear love, I shall crumble in my own filth to be clean with my simple rhyme. As I'm breathing the heathen within my favour to love you. Damage as I am no more - Raven de Cyrano
My love. My deepest Lady.
I'm your Cyrano
Not your tormented Romeo
Or should I declare to decline
With a glass of fine wine
My tears are the roses
Simple and fair.
Please caress a lock of your hair
For me to grasp in your favour
My...
#gothic
#mystery
#romantic #Romanticism
#romantic #Romanticism
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2 Comments
Ravenskraft
Poem Published
19th May 2024 00:59am
19th May 2024 00:59am
Death's Soiled Dove by F.D.Ravenskraft
She grasps the hands of death
And made love to him
It seems she wants him to feel her wealth
Indeed he did curse her with his gift
The caress of the dead man's lust
The chains of forbidden love
The passion of the delightful one
with one touch
She grasps the meaning of death
Ravenskraft
And made love to him
It seems she wants him to feel her wealth
Indeed he did curse her with his gift
The caress of the dead man's lust
The chains of forbidden love
The passion of the delightful one
with one touch
She grasps the meaning of death
Ravenskraft
#gothic
#scary
#tragedy
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