Poems for and About Girlfriends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about girlfriends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 10:20am
8th Apr 2025 10:20am
The Devil Inside
Just so you know
Satan is hiding where I usually go
Last night when I was going down on you
You're pussy was wiggling & jiggling, did you have any clue?
I was scared stiff
I decided to peek in
His eyes were glowing with sin
That rattled me up
Satan was the little man in the canoe
You enjoy his company
Do you want me or him, when it's time to screw?
He turns you on
His pointy, curvy tail sticks you from behind
His horny head grins, as though he committed a crime
You giggle and tell me
Please...
Satan is hiding where I usually go
Last night when I was going down on you
You're pussy was wiggling & jiggling, did you have any clue?
I was scared stiff
I decided to peek in
His eyes were glowing with sin
That rattled me up
Satan was the little man in the canoe
You enjoy his company
Do you want me or him, when it's time to screw?
He turns you on
His pointy, curvy tail sticks you from behind
His horny head grins, as though he committed a crime
You giggle and tell me
Please...
#devil
#girlfriend
#rhyming
#satirical
#sex
238 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 8:30pm
28th Mar 2025 8:30pm
Booby Trapped
#erotic
#girlfriend
#lust
#relationships
#sex
249 reads
13 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 4:26pm
26th Mar 2025 4:26pm
Balm
Hands brush, sparks ignite.
Eyes meet, a world set ablaze.
Love's bold flame takes flight.
Fingers intertouch.
Two hearts beating as but one.
Love's quiet tempest.
Under moonlit skies.
Whispers melt into the night.
Their souls so divine.
Breath meets tender breath.
A universe forged from touch.
Eternal embrace.
Storms rage in their eyes.
Yet in their arms, calm takes hold.
Love’s boundless haven.
Eyes meet, a world set ablaze.
Love's bold flame takes flight.
Fingers intertouch.
Two hearts beating as but one.
Love's quiet tempest.
Under moonlit skies.
Whispers melt into the night.
Their souls so divine.
Breath meets tender breath.
A universe forged from touch.
Eternal embrace.
Storms rage in their eyes.
Yet in their arms, calm takes hold.
Love’s boundless haven.
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#kindness
#love
#passion
143 reads
9 Comments
musht_e_ghubaar
Arsh
Arsh
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 1:54am
14th Mar 2025 1:54am
Chandana
After Chandana
Lips like velvet, breath like fire,
We kissed as if the world would expire.
Our tongues danced, a tender fight,
gasping for air, yet holding tight.
Your scent, a drug I still crave,
your warmth, the ghost I couldn’t see.
I ache for the comfort of your touch,
your presence meant so much.
The nights we spent, so close, so near,
Yet now they feel so insincere,
Did I hold you tight, or let you slip?
Did I taste your soul, or just your lips? ...
Lips like velvet, breath like fire,
We kissed as if the world would expire.
Our tongues danced, a tender fight,
gasping for air, yet holding tight.
Your scent, a drug I still crave,
your warmth, the ghost I couldn’t see.
I ache for the comfort of your touch,
your presence meant so much.
The nights we spent, so close, so near,
Yet now they feel so insincere,
Did I hold you tight, or let you slip?
Did I taste your soul, or just your lips? ...
#dating
#girlfriend
#love #memories
#love #memories
107 reads
1 Comment
MasterG
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 2:35pm
23rd Feb 2025 2:35pm
Never mine
As I take pen in hand
To write but one final verse
I stop to read your text
Examine your photos
The love begins to poor
From my eyes as rain
My hands begin to shake
Knowing this is but a farewell
It becomes hard to breathe
Catching my breath
Becoming impossible to breathe
Empty time will fill the void
As you slip thru my hands
Putting down the pen
Unable to write
I see now that was once unclear
You were never mine
To have and to hold
Till death do us part
It was but a dream
Made by the...
To write but one final verse
I stop to read your text
Examine your photos
The love begins to poor
From my eyes as rain
My hands begin to shake
Knowing this is but a farewell
It becomes hard to breathe
Catching my breath
Becoming impossible to breathe
Empty time will fill the void
As you slip thru my hands
Putting down the pen
Unable to write
I see now that was once unclear
You were never mine
To have and to hold
Till death do us part
It was but a dream
Made by the...
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
#romantic
248 reads
0 Comments
MasterG
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 2:19pm
23rd Feb 2025 2:19pm
I found
I listen to my heart beat
It’s sounds of defeat
Stopping only once
Performing not one stunt
Searching for its pair
It sees nothing but a glare
My vision comes clear
Your beauty brings fear
We are a match
Not just a patch
Our love is eternal
Not just external
The darkness turns bright
There is nothing to fight
Our love is of power
And goes beyond without fear
Master G
It’s sounds of defeat
Stopping only once
Performing not one stunt
Searching for its pair
It sees nothing but a glare
My vision comes clear
Your beauty brings fear
We are a match
Not just a patch
Our love is eternal
Not just external
The darkness turns bright
There is nothing to fight
Our love is of power
And goes beyond without fear
Master G
#girlfriend
#happiness
#love
135 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 7:31pm
14th Feb 2025 7:31pm
Don't f**k With His Girlfriend
He was planning a big day for him & his girlfriend
today was Valentine's Day
he went to the nearest store and purchased some flowers and candy
he wanted today to be a really special day
when the evening arrived, he was feeling really horny and wanted to have sex with her
she's always willing and able when he wants it
she never says no
he tries all his moves with her
the room was dimly lit for a moonlighting type of ambience
they moved to the bedroom
he washed up, brushed his teeth and put on his best cologne
she looked...
today was Valentine's Day
he went to the nearest store and purchased some flowers and candy
he wanted today to be a really special day
when the evening arrived, he was feeling really horny and wanted to have sex with her
she's always willing and able when he wants it
she never says no
he tries all his moves with her
the room was dimly lit for a moonlighting type of ambience
they moved to the bedroom
he washed up, brushed his teeth and put on his best cologne
she looked...
#girlfriend
#love
#MentalHealth
#mother
#ValentinesDay
124 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 1:22pm
14th Feb 2025 1:22pm
's Day
Cupid's arrow flies,
heartbeats sync beneath the stars,
love's sweet clever lies.
Chocolate whispers melt,
roses blush with secret winks,
passions stealthy pelt.
Letters bloom with glee,
witty verses set hearts free,
valentine's decree.
Roses red and bright,
love's whispers in moonlit night,
hearts take soaring flight.
In this tryst we bloom,
cupid's arrows break the gloom,
love's eternal room.
Valentine's Day is today
it keeps bringing out
craziness in everyone!
heartbeats sync beneath the stars,
love's sweet clever lies.
Chocolate whispers melt,
roses blush with secret winks,
passions stealthy pelt.
Letters bloom with glee,
witty verses set hearts free,
valentine's decree.
Roses red and bright,
love's whispers in moonlit night,
hearts take soaring flight.
In this tryst we bloom,
cupid's arrows break the gloom,
love's eternal room.
Valentine's Day is today
it keeps bringing out
craziness in everyone!
#boyfriend
#flowers
#girlfriend
#lover
#passion
102 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 11:44am
6th Feb 2025 11:44am
A problem occured while fisting my girl
#dirty
#girlfriend
#orgasm
#porn
#wife
266 reads
11 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:14pm
19th Jan 2025 10:14pm
I Found Out Too Late that She Loved Me
I loved Hannah more than I could say,
But I didn’t tell her that I loved her.
I wanted her to see it for herself.
So I came up with an idea that I thought would work.
She read the love poems that I wrote.
The poetic words revealed my true feelings.
She knew that I wrote them for her,
And she realised the depth of my love for her.
I didn’t know that she was in love with me.
She never showed her feelings for me.
Perhaps she tried to attract my attention,
But I was too dumb to realise it.
She wasn’t bold...
But I didn’t tell her that I loved her.
I wanted her to see it for herself.
So I came up with an idea that I thought would work.
She read the love poems that I wrote.
The poetic words revealed my true feelings.
She knew that I wrote them for her,
And she realised the depth of my love for her.
I didn’t know that she was in love with me.
She never showed her feelings for me.
Perhaps she tried to attract my attention,
But I was too dumb to realise it.
She wasn’t bold...
#girlfriend
#hurt
#love
#lust
#marriage
124 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 12:42pm
18th Jan 2025 12:42pm
Cum here and watch
#girlfriend
#orgasm
#sex
#uplifting
#wife
309 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 10:43am
17th Jan 2025 10:43am
It Still Isn't You
Your disease brought me closer to a decision
i know now who my true love is
It still isn't you!
While your laying there, let me introduce you to my true love
Here she is
Look at her
Young, spry and gorgeous
You use to be special many many years ago
Now your laying here, given a few weeks to live
You did nothing all your life to help yourself
You should have given me my divorce when you still had the energy, years ago
You can't even lift your head up
See you at your funeral
i know now who my true love is
It still isn't you!
While your laying there, let me introduce you to my true love
Here she is
Look at her
Young, spry and gorgeous
You use to be special many many years ago
Now your laying here, given a few weeks to live
You did nothing all your life to help yourself
You should have given me my divorce when you still had the energy, years ago
You can't even lift your head up
See you at your funeral
#death
#funeral
#girlfriend #marriage
#girlfriend #marriage
130 reads
4 Comments
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