Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 6:50pm
7th Feb 2025 6:50pm
Some are watching
INSIDE ROARE
Some are watching
You don't know ... shh
Who watches your steps,
You don't know ... shh
Who counts the number of smiles.
You don't know ... shh
Who counts your tears.
You don't know who shares your house.
Who looks into your windows,
Who suits a black coat.
Who has tears in their eyes,
....it's probably me.
Who looks into your windows,
....it's probably me.
You don't know ... shh
Who wakes up with you.
You don't know ... shh
Who goes to bed with you.
You don't know ......
Some are watching
You don't know ... shh
Who watches your steps,
You don't know ... shh
Who counts the number of smiles.
You don't know ... shh
Who counts your tears.
You don't know who shares your house.
Who looks into your windows,
Who suits a black coat.
Who has tears in their eyes,
....it's probably me.
Who looks into your windows,
....it's probably me.
You don't know ... shh
Who wakes up with you.
You don't know ... shh
Who goes to bed with you.
You don't know ......
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
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NP_NP
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 7:57pm
6th Feb 2025 7:57pm
It Is What It Is
What’s my next move?
I’m scared to dip my toe,
Petrified of every step,
Afraid of what I’ll never know.
But it’s necessary,
I can’t stay in your shadow,
There’s more to life than what you gave,
I need to find it, to let go.
My heart hurts, whether you see or not,
But let’s not dwell in all the ugly,
I won’t point fingers, or play the violin,
No, I owe no one an explanation.
If they ask, I’ll simply say—
It is what it is, and nothing more,
No excuses needed, not...
I’m scared to dip my toe,
Petrified of every step,
Afraid of what I’ll never know.
But it’s necessary,
I can’t stay in your shadow,
There’s more to life than what you gave,
I need to find it, to let go.
My heart hurts, whether you see or not,
But let’s not dwell in all the ugly,
I won’t point fingers, or play the violin,
No, I owe no one an explanation.
If they ask, I’ll simply say—
It is what it is, and nothing more,
No excuses needed, not...
#breakup
#emotions
#heartbroken
#hurt
#separation
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 2:50pm
5th Feb 2025 2:50pm
Pray don't worry
As you go through the process of your trials and tribulations, that you will have to learn to navigate your true spiritual potential, to help you with making your own decisions that will affect, the very foundation of situations that will come with challenges that will sometimes have you doubting thyself. For regardless of what you have to go through will comes with more lessons that we still have to learn. Yet you must have faith in your life's beliefs, cause sometimes we have to give our problems, that we can't solve to give them to Almighty God. For don't worry because God Almighty, will...
#emotions
#hope
#love
#motivational
#strength
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oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 3:59am
4th Feb 2025 3:59am
Can you Hear the Silence
Can you hear the silence
I yearn for the silence to hear me
I run from the noise that assaults me
I breathe but my breath can’t hear me
I live for the silence that lives within the trees
We’re so used to the noise that silence scares us
I get anxious when the silence confronts me
I am afraid to not hear a sound around me
Make some noise to make him go away
Can you Hear the Silence
I yearn for the silence be near me
I run from the noise that’s around me
...
I yearn for the silence to hear me
I run from the noise that assaults me
I breathe but my breath can’t hear me
I live for the silence that lives within the trees
We’re so used to the noise that silence scares us
I get anxious when the silence confronts me
I am afraid to not hear a sound around me
Make some noise to make him go away
Can you Hear the Silence
I yearn for the silence be near me
I run from the noise that’s around me
...
#emotions
#silence
#spiritual #strength
#spiritual #strength
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Pete_25
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 8:10am
3rd Feb 2025 8:10am
Adorn
Things I've heard
The eyes have seen
In sugar coated
Crystal dreams
Cipher old
High, below
From the top
In-between
Figures shape
Start to form
{My effigy cries a storm}
Adhering to 'The Golden Rules'
My mirror, I adorn
The eyes have seen
In sugar coated
Crystal dreams
Cipher old
High, below
From the top
In-between
Figures shape
Start to form
{My effigy cries a storm}
Adhering to 'The Golden Rules'
My mirror, I adorn
#emotions
#love
#SelfWorth #strength
#SelfWorth #strength
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Pete_25
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 8:08am
31st Jan 2025 8:08am
Foreign Skies
These long winding roads
Under foreign skies
Fortune favours the bold
Before you kiss goodbye
Look a little closer
Every step you take
Life is a rollercoaster
Avoiding the same mistake
Under foreign skies
Fortune favours the bold
Before you kiss goodbye
Look a little closer
Every step you take
Life is a rollercoaster
Avoiding the same mistake
#emotions
#strength
#TimeHeals
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15 Comments
rksingh
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 4:37am
31st Jan 2025 4:37am
WINTER'S HEAT
Sometimes in winter
in the snow of your body
there simmered a heat
in a vivacious spring
fell a sweet calamity
as love began to jell
don't you remember
my dream's river stirred
and the nemesis in summer?
wedged between me and you
was jinx that rains
to remind of age and passion
the growing jungles and the blues
empaling warmth and vigor
an end we always detest
-R K Singh
in the snow of your body
there simmered a heat
in a vivacious spring
fell a sweet calamity
as love began to jell
don't you remember
my dream's river stirred
and the nemesis in summer?
wedged between me and you
was jinx that rains
to remind of age and passion
the growing jungles and the blues
empaling warmth and vigor
an end we always detest
-R K Singh
#emotions
#happiness
#love
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Pete_25
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 8:15am
29th Jan 2025 8:15am
Lost & Found
i. lost}
These dirty streets, skin and bone
Beneath my feet, grit and stone
Unfulfilled, the world spins around
Time stands still on solid ground
{ii. found}
Stars rain down, the night confides
In you I drown, right beside
Love declares, to you I'm bound
It was all a blur, lost and found
These dirty streets, skin and bone
Beneath my feet, grit and stone
Unfulfilled, the world spins around
Time stands still on solid ground
{ii. found}
Stars rain down, the night confides
In you I drown, right beside
Love declares, to you I'm bound
It was all a blur, lost and found
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#love
#redemption
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10 Comments
Glaxian
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 4:13am
29th Jan 2025 4:13am
Dance (extended cut)
Dance (extended mix)
And the dancers dance
To the music, moving together.
To you alone do I pledge
My life, my love, my sacred honor.
And the dancers dance
Clear the floor for the Bride and Groom.
And the dancers dance
This is your song,
Your choice, your partner.
Alone together (as family and friends)
Give you your moment
Then move to join in.
And the dancers dance
The musicians play to the tempo of life,
Whether the music is soothing to sweep you along
Or bone jarring chaos that rocks...
And the dancers dance
To the music, moving together.
To you alone do I pledge
My life, my love, my sacred honor.
And the dancers dance
Clear the floor for the Bride and Groom.
And the dancers dance
This is your song,
Your choice, your partner.
Alone together (as family and friends)
Give you your moment
Then move to join in.
And the dancers dance
The musicians play to the tempo of life,
Whether the music is soothing to sweep you along
Or bone jarring chaos that rocks...
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#respect
#romantic
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sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 5:21am
28th Jan 2025 5:21am
No One Other Then You
There's no one other then you.
That I'd rather have next to me boo.
I know that you're exotic.
I'm glad that I caught it.
Whatever it is that you do.
Just me and you.
You've got me intertwined like a damn fool.
Love tales and voodoo spells.
I see now that I'm so screwed.
Under this moon, giving into you.
Topping your body like ice cream.
Is this too soon?
That I'd rather have next to me boo.
I know that you're exotic.
I'm glad that I caught it.
Whatever it is that you do.
Just me and you.
You've got me intertwined like a damn fool.
Love tales and voodoo spells.
I see now that I'm so screwed.
Under this moon, giving into you.
Topping your body like ice cream.
Is this too soon?
#emotions
#love
#manipulation
#relationships
#sex
123 reads
2 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 1:28am
28th Jan 2025 1:28am
Between The Sheets
Why did it have to be you, that I gave my heart to.
Running from my emotions. Pacing in slow motion.
Trying to figure out are you feeling this too.
I wanna be stuck inside you.
Mother may I? What can I do?
Hide and Seek or Peak-a-Boo?
Underneath the covers, playing like two lovers.
Tagging you until I'm through.
Let's see how that karma sutra looks on you.
Pilates, zumba, show me how your body moves.
Fast or slow, however you wanna set the groove.
I'll even throw in some Kung Fu.
Perhaps a little leg stretching with some Jiu Jitsu.
Running from my emotions. Pacing in slow motion.
Trying to figure out are you feeling this too.
I wanna be stuck inside you.
Mother may I? What can I do?
Hide and Seek or Peak-a-Boo?
Underneath the covers, playing like two lovers.
Tagging you until I'm through.
Let's see how that karma sutra looks on you.
Pilates, zumba, show me how your body moves.
Fast or slow, however you wanna set the groove.
I'll even throw in some Kung Fu.
Perhaps a little leg stretching with some Jiu Jitsu.
#emotions
#love
#relationships
#seductive
#sex
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PAR
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 1:30pm
27th Jan 2025 1:30pm
Others' poetry
Isn't it exhilarating
how someone's poetry
can ignite a fire within us?
When their words resonate
so deeply, it's like they unlock
hidden chambers in our own hearts,
revealing emotions and thoughts
we hadn't fully realized were there.
Crafting your own verses
becomes more than just writing
it's a dialogue between your soul and theirs,
a harmonious exchange
across the canvas of creativity.
I've always found
that immersing myself
in powerful poetry
not only inspires me
but...
how someone's poetry
can ignite a fire within us?
When their words resonate
so deeply, it's like they unlock
hidden chambers in our own hearts,
revealing emotions and thoughts
we hadn't fully realized were there.
Crafting your own verses
becomes more than just writing
it's a dialogue between your soul and theirs,
a harmonious exchange
across the canvas of creativity.
I've always found
that immersing myself
in powerful poetry
not only inspires me
but...
#confessional
#emotions
#LifeAsAWriter
#myself
#WritingPoetry
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12 Comments
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