Dystopian Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#dystopian
Final countdown
Killing field in party town nothing sacred burn it down
Loot the stores, burn the cop cars innocence lost in this town
Drug wars spill in off the street into a little girls sleep
Wars are fought and mothers weep for the sons poured out too cheap
Planes and cars and murder vests to fill the quotas of death
Theft and murder rule the streets that pay the price of our meth
Children die before they are born to parents having fun
Wealthy rapist, name over the door, caught in the long run
Broken promises, lies and deceit it's just...
Loot the stores, burn the cop cars innocence lost in this town
Drug wars spill in off the street into a little girls sleep
Wars are fought and mothers weep for the sons poured out too cheap
Planes and cars and murder vests to fill the quotas of death
Theft and murder rule the streets that pay the price of our meth
Children die before they are born to parents having fun
Wealthy rapist, name over the door, caught in the long run
Broken promises, lies and deceit it's just...
#apocalypse
#dystopian
#freedom
#frustration
#risk
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The Ultimate Queen (chapter one/part 2)
In the Vinu Mountains Maline has finished her nest for the coming of her child. This child is her first and quite possibly her last. Her body had a tendency to rid itself of the foreign object. For some reason, this one stayed till term. The Humm women produce offspring within a quarter of a moon phase. They are surrounded by four moons. Maline felt the stirring for her to prepare for the coming.
The mountain of Vin is rich in purple soil. The Humm tribe lived on the mountain for several generations. The height of males is five feet six inches. The females of the species' average...
The mountain of Vin is rich in purple soil. The Humm tribe lived on the mountain for several generations. The height of males is five feet six inches. The females of the species' average...
#dystopian
#scifi
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The Ultimate Queen Chapter One/part one
Chapter One
In This multicolored universe, in a cluster of hidden stars. There is a place that houses the nine worlds. In each of these worlds’ lives, inhabitant species that believe, they are the only survivors of the wars. The great wars that separated a united universe.
Once the war was over and the dead were more than the inhabitants could endure, propaganda was created to dissuade the youth from venturing out.
The queen of the Xantus people, Queen Ruel, announced to her people that they were the center of the universe and had no other life...
In This multicolored universe, in a cluster of hidden stars. There is a place that houses the nine worlds. In each of these worlds’ lives, inhabitant species that believe, they are the only survivors of the wars. The great wars that separated a united universe.
Once the war was over and the dead were more than the inhabitants could endure, propaganda was created to dissuade the youth from venturing out.
The queen of the Xantus people, Queen Ruel, announced to her people that they were the center of the universe and had no other life...
#dystopian
#scifi
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Welcome to the NWO
Better keep on working or you will be replaced
Question any answers and you will be erased
You're the architect of apathy
Society crumbling beyond disorder
Welcome to your new world order
Forcing integration until you all are one
Deracinated ciphers of the lowest common sum
All the nations crumble as we open up the borders
Welcome to your new world order
We'll teach you truth is just illusion
We'll teach you just what to believe
You could not stand all the confusion
No you're better off on your knees
Freedom is...
Question any answers and you will be erased
You're the architect of apathy
Society crumbling beyond disorder
Welcome to your new world order
Forcing integration until you all are one
Deracinated ciphers of the lowest common sum
All the nations crumble as we open up the borders
Welcome to your new world order
We'll teach you truth is just illusion
We'll teach you just what to believe
You could not stand all the confusion
No you're better off on your knees
Freedom is...
#corruption
#dystopian
#greed
#money
#politics
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Police Say (f**k the fear you’re peddling)
Police SAY (Fuck the fear that you peddle)
Breaking news live at five
This just in another shooting or robbery
Doesn’t matter where it was
Police SAY….
Gotta get it on blame it on you know who
Police SAY…
Feed the fear sorry grandma
It’s rating’s we’re shooting for
Police SAY
Ok what’s next enough of murder
How bout assault and battery
Police SAY
Or a robbery or hit and run
When are we going to get to positive
Feel good stories don’t boost the ratings...
Breaking news live at five
This just in another shooting or robbery
Doesn’t matter where it was
Police SAY….
Gotta get it on blame it on you know who
Police SAY…
Feed the fear sorry grandma
It’s rating’s we’re shooting for
Police SAY
Ok what’s next enough of murder
How bout assault and battery
Police SAY
Or a robbery or hit and run
When are we going to get to positive
Feel good stories don’t boost the ratings...
#dystopian
#fear
#hypocrisy #lies
#hypocrisy #lies
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Fritz Lang's Dystopia
They built this shiny cell
For you to live in
Adorned with their icons
Painted with their lies
They don`t trick me
For I am not like you
You`re a robot
Living in Metropolis
They paved this golden path
For you to follow
Your grave is waiting on
Step by step you fall
They don`t trick me
For I am not like you
You`re a robot
Living in Metropolis
"We are the mechanism
Wheels in the gears of society
We are indifferent
Servants of the gods of anxiety"
Wake up they`re selling you...
For you to live in
Adorned with their icons
Painted with their lies
They don`t trick me
For I am not like you
You`re a robot
Living in Metropolis
They paved this golden path
For you to follow
Your grave is waiting on
Step by step you fall
They don`t trick me
For I am not like you
You`re a robot
Living in Metropolis
"We are the mechanism
Wheels in the gears of society
We are indifferent
Servants of the gods of anxiety"
Wake up they`re selling you...
#corruption
#dystopian
#money
#poverty
#scifi
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American Golem
Passive dirt in mindless motion,
numb of speech for careful meetings
covered stars
over-stares of lap
with dullard ties
nod or quake
to desk in stone
solidified-
ingested parchments
awaiting script,
monotone scraping
stalks & perks
sorcerer's code
through shortened miles
skyscrapers shake...
empty earth in shameless pattern,
toiling tongue with office jargon
smothered stars
on a spit of wind
with cyborg eyes
dead at...
numb of speech for careful meetings
covered stars
over-stares of lap
with dullard ties
nod or quake
to desk in stone
solidified-
ingested parchments
awaiting script,
monotone scraping
stalks & perks
sorcerer's code
through shortened miles
skyscrapers shake...
empty earth in shameless pattern,
toiling tongue with office jargon
smothered stars
on a spit of wind
with cyborg eyes
dead at...
#culture
#dark
#dystopian #FreeVerse
#dystopian #FreeVerse
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American Homunculus
Things are about to break,
it's on the tongue of the world-
we're
about to
synchronize
fomented worms
in misery
zap with certain
electricity,
mass = hypnotized:
where will a town mouse
hide
from bill-collecting
fat cat rage
of rubes & cons
across the Rubicon?
This land is our land,
from bubbling cauldron
to breeding bored
in an overflow
of nowhere to go but
up
when the lights go
down;
I'm gonna be on...
it's on the tongue of the world-
we're
about to
synchronize
fomented worms
in misery
zap with certain
electricity,
mass = hypnotized:
where will a town mouse
hide
from bill-collecting
fat cat rage
of rubes & cons
across the Rubicon?
This land is our land,
from bubbling cauldron
to breeding bored
in an overflow
of nowhere to go but
up
when the lights go
down;
I'm gonna be on...
#culture
#dark
#dystopian #FreeVerse
#dystopian #FreeVerse
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Machine don’t feel(especially.001 percent)
Machine don’t feel(especially .001 percent)
Fuck the machine
I’m real not Artificial
Algorithm set the money
Dweebs with not enough honey
The Zusk of Muckerberg
Trolls of the .001 percent
CEOs of social media
Now it’s where some read the news and
Thought Orange and Mueller with Q
Would execute
Uphold Christian values
P T Orange said there’s a sucker born
And stacks roll in on a stolen lie
Of a free and fair election
All the while Zusk of Muckerberg
Count stacks and sows seeds of anger
Get angry...
Fuck the machine
I’m real not Artificial
Algorithm set the money
Dweebs with not enough honey
The Zusk of Muckerberg
Trolls of the .001 percent
CEOs of social media
Now it’s where some read the news and
Thought Orange and Mueller with Q
Would execute
Uphold Christian values
P T Orange said there’s a sucker born
And stacks roll in on a stolen lie
Of a free and fair election
All the while Zusk of Muckerberg
Count stacks and sows seeds of anger
Get angry...
#dystopian
#greed
#humankind #money
#humankind #money
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The Grotesque
We are grotesque
We mate and create something horrific
Sluts and killers
Mean blood spillers
Whores and fuckers
Fools and suckers
Monster fucking dads
Sisters born with crabs
Monster slut mothers
Incest fueled brothers
We the monsters
One nation under a demigod
With obligation and injustice for all
We mate and create something horrific
Sluts and killers
Mean blood spillers
Whores and fuckers
Fools and suckers
Monster fucking dads
Sisters born with crabs
Monster slut mothers
Incest fueled brothers
We the monsters
One nation under a demigod
With obligation and injustice for all
#dark
#dystopian
#evil #rhyming
#evil #rhyming
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Nursery Sales Rhyme
Agent:
“Welcome, dear customer, to our store so bright.
May I introduce a product, a true delight?”
Customer:
“Thank you, kind agent, I’m eager to see
what marvels you have in store for me.”
Agent:
“This gadget, so neat, with features galore
will simplify your life and so much more.”
Customer:
“Tell me, dear agent, what makes it unique?
I’m searching for something, truly sleek.”
Agent:
“It’s crafted with care, with precision and grace.
A perfect companion in...
“Welcome, dear customer, to our store so bright.
May I introduce a product, a true delight?”
Customer:
“Thank you, kind agent, I’m eager to see
what marvels you have in store for me.”
Agent:
“This gadget, so neat, with features galore
will simplify your life and so much more.”
Customer:
“Tell me, dear agent, what makes it unique?
I’m searching for something, truly sleek.”
Agent:
“It’s crafted with care, with precision and grace.
A perfect companion in...
#dystopian
#steampunk
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maybe it was mushrooms
couldn’t tell the difference between
a hydrangea and a geranium, except
didn’t they use geranium to make nuclear
bombs, or something quite like it ..
a hydrangea and a geranium, except
didn’t they use geranium to make nuclear
bombs, or something quite like it ..
#dystopian
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DU Poetry : Dystopian Seeking Honest Critique Poems