Dystopian Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#dystopian
Hatful-of-Hollow
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 4:04pm
26th Mar 2025 4:04pm
Stillicide
On the day the UK drowned
the sun’s shoulders broke,
slumping the sunset into eternal twilight
All one underwater breath,
deep sea divers tried to pack
the sea into suitcases
Baggage bridled waves
o’er castles and housing estates,
stealth, the ravens skyfall
legends written on drowned pirates’ skulls,
(full fathom) five brides on continental shelf
coral and pearls are merely crust on sunken ships
travelling light
can life rafts only hold one soul?
stowed in hearth of jigsaw’ed city
flames cripple...
the sun’s shoulders broke,
slumping the sunset into eternal twilight
All one underwater breath,
deep sea divers tried to pack
the sea into suitcases
Baggage bridled waves
o’er castles and housing estates,
stealth, the ravens skyfall
legends written on drowned pirates’ skulls,
(full fathom) five brides on continental shelf
coral and pearls are merely crust on sunken ships
travelling light
can life rafts only hold one soul?
stowed in hearth of jigsaw’ed city
flames cripple...
#dystopian
#home
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summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 2:11pm
26th Feb 2025 2:11pm
~the purpose
take away even my memory
your cruel designs of lobotomy
can win you toxic nuclear wars
but yes there I am here again.. still
throbbing as a steely butterfly heart
with lousily stitched up a punctured
ruptured mind.. unable to comprehend
or feel anything even..
but yet this hearted up beat.. it’s frictional
heat has already marathonically lighted up
this eternal soul .. that feel knows the pain
the pain .. that...
your cruel designs of lobotomy
can win you toxic nuclear wars
but yes there I am here again.. still
throbbing as a steely butterfly heart
with lousily stitched up a punctured
ruptured mind.. unable to comprehend
or feel anything even..
but yet this hearted up beat.. it’s frictional
heat has already marathonically lighted up
this eternal soul .. that feel knows the pain
the pain .. that...
#dystopian
#inspirational
#nature #spiritual
#nature #spiritual
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 11:39am
24th Feb 2025 11:39am
In Musk, Should We Trust??
Zombified Society
Corrupted by technology
With Wires connected to our brain
Control our life
Cybernetic drug for our brain
Burning our cells to the end
We live now as modern slaves without souls
Just obey
We'll keep you safe
We are the truth
Technocracy
Just believe
We have control
We're the Technocracy
Hypocritical way to live
In a senselessness and empty reality
Blinded by conformity
The web of lies
Collective worldwide ignorance
Smoke and mirrors everywhere
Connected &...
Corrupted by technology
With Wires connected to our brain
Control our life
Cybernetic drug for our brain
Burning our cells to the end
We live now as modern slaves without souls
Just obey
We'll keep you safe
We are the truth
Technocracy
Just believe
We have control
We're the Technocracy
Hypocritical way to live
In a senselessness and empty reality
Blinded by conformity
The web of lies
Collective worldwide ignorance
Smoke and mirrors everywhere
Connected &...
#CallToAction
#dystopian
#manipulation
#scifi
#technology
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 10:50am
24th Feb 2025 10:50am
And We All Pay The Price
Grand designs no mere mortal understands
Shaping the future for ages to come
We are the instruments in death and treachery
False flag paranoia order of the day
They always know better than you and I
And they designate
Who to terminate
In silence subjugate
Opposition decimate
Know not 'til it's too late
Remote control decide fate
Visions of a new world they create
The war is lost before it starts
We stand no chance
Most won't even know it's on
Don't try to resist
Elite made...
Shaping the future for ages to come
We are the instruments in death and treachery
False flag paranoia order of the day
They always know better than you and I
And they designate
Who to terminate
In silence subjugate
Opposition decimate
Know not 'til it's too late
Remote control decide fate
Visions of a new world they create
The war is lost before it starts
We stand no chance
Most won't even know it's on
Don't try to resist
Elite made...
#conflict
#dystopian
#fate
#nonfiction
#politics
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12 Comments
Glaxian
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 2:22am
16th Jan 2025 2:22am
Final countdown
Killing field in party town nothing sacred burn it down
Loot the stores, burn the cop cars innocence lost in this town
Drug wars spill in off the street into a little girls sleep
Wars are fought and mothers weep for the sons poured out too cheap
Planes and cars and murder vests to fill the quotas of death
Theft and murder rule the streets that pay the price of our meth
Children die before they are born to parents having fun
Wealthy rapist, name over the door, caught in the long run
Broken promises, lies and deceit it's just...
Loot the stores, burn the cop cars innocence lost in this town
Drug wars spill in off the street into a little girls sleep
Wars are fought and mothers weep for the sons poured out too cheap
Planes and cars and murder vests to fill the quotas of death
Theft and murder rule the streets that pay the price of our meth
Children die before they are born to parents having fun
Wealthy rapist, name over the door, caught in the long run
Broken promises, lies and deceit it's just...
#apocalypse
#dystopian
#freedom
#frustration
#risk
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 7:20pm
23rd Oct 2024 7:20pm
Welcome to the NWO
Better keep on working or you will be replaced
Question any answers and you will be erased
You're the architect of apathy
Society crumbling beyond disorder
Welcome to your new world order
Forcing integration until you all are one
Deracinated ciphers of the lowest common sum
All the nations crumble as we open up the borders
Welcome to your new world order
We'll teach you truth is just illusion
We'll teach you just what to believe
You could not stand all the confusion
No you're better off on your knees
Freedom is...
Question any answers and you will be erased
You're the architect of apathy
Society crumbling beyond disorder
Welcome to your new world order
Forcing integration until you all are one
Deracinated ciphers of the lowest common sum
All the nations crumble as we open up the borders
Welcome to your new world order
We'll teach you truth is just illusion
We'll teach you just what to believe
You could not stand all the confusion
No you're better off on your knees
Freedom is...
#corruption
#dystopian
#greed
#money
#politics
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6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 2:40pm
17th Oct 2024 2:40pm
Police Say (f**k the fear you’re peddling)
Police SAY (Fuck the fear that you peddle)
Breaking news live at five
This just in another shooting or robbery
Doesn’t matter where it was
Police SAY….
Gotta get it on blame it on you know who
Police SAY…
Feed the fear sorry grandma
It’s rating’s we’re shooting for
Police SAY
Ok what’s next enough of murder
How bout assault and battery
Police SAY
Or a robbery or hit and run
When are we going to get to positive
Feel good stories don’t boost the ratings...
Breaking news live at five
This just in another shooting or robbery
Doesn’t matter where it was
Police SAY….
Gotta get it on blame it on you know who
Police SAY…
Feed the fear sorry grandma
It’s rating’s we’re shooting for
Police SAY
Ok what’s next enough of murder
How bout assault and battery
Police SAY
Or a robbery or hit and run
When are we going to get to positive
Feel good stories don’t boost the ratings...
#dystopian
#fear
#hypocrisy #lies
#hypocrisy #lies
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 10:49am
11th Oct 2024 10:49am
Fritz Lang's Dystopia
They built this shiny cell
For you to live in
Adorned with their icons
Painted with their lies
They don`t trick me
For I am not like you
You`re a robot
Living in Metropolis
They paved this golden path
For you to follow
Your grave is waiting on
Step by step you fall
They don`t trick me
For I am not like you
You`re a robot
Living in Metropolis
"We are the mechanism
Wheels in the gears of society
We are indifferent
Servants of the gods of anxiety"
Wake up they`re selling you...
For you to live in
Adorned with their icons
Painted with their lies
They don`t trick me
For I am not like you
You`re a robot
Living in Metropolis
They paved this golden path
For you to follow
Your grave is waiting on
Step by step you fall
They don`t trick me
For I am not like you
You`re a robot
Living in Metropolis
"We are the mechanism
Wheels in the gears of society
We are indifferent
Servants of the gods of anxiety"
Wake up they`re selling you...
#corruption
#dystopian
#money
#poverty
#scifi
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6 Comments
SonderNinja
BenjaminEC
BenjaminEC
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 7:39pm
6th Oct 2024 7:39pm
American Golem
Passive dirt in mindless motion,
numb of speech for careful meetings
covered stars
over-stares of lap
with dullard ties
nod or quake
to desk in stone
solidified-
ingested parchments
awaiting script,
monotone scraping
stalks & perks
sorcerer's code
through shortened miles
skyscrapers shake...
empty earth in shameless pattern,
toiling tongue with office jargon
smothered stars
on a spit of wind
with cyborg eyes
dead at...
numb of speech for careful meetings
covered stars
over-stares of lap
with dullard ties
nod or quake
to desk in stone
solidified-
ingested parchments
awaiting script,
monotone scraping
stalks & perks
sorcerer's code
through shortened miles
skyscrapers shake...
empty earth in shameless pattern,
toiling tongue with office jargon
smothered stars
on a spit of wind
with cyborg eyes
dead at...
#culture
#dark
#dystopian #FreeVerse
#dystopian #FreeVerse
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1 Comment
SonderNinja
BenjaminEC
BenjaminEC
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 4:01pm
6th Oct 2024 4:01pm
American Homunculus
Things are about to break,
it's on the tongue of the world-
we're
about to
synchronize
fomented worms
in misery
zap with certain
electricity,
mass = hypnotized:
where will a town mouse
hide
from bill-collecting
fat cat rage
of rubes & cons
across the Rubicon?
This land is our land,
from bubbling cauldron
to breeding bored
in an overflow
of nowhere to go but
up
when the lights go
down;
I'm gonna be on...
it's on the tongue of the world-
we're
about to
synchronize
fomented worms
in misery
zap with certain
electricity,
mass = hypnotized:
where will a town mouse
hide
from bill-collecting
fat cat rage
of rubes & cons
across the Rubicon?
This land is our land,
from bubbling cauldron
to breeding bored
in an overflow
of nowhere to go but
up
when the lights go
down;
I'm gonna be on...
#culture
#dark
#dystopian #FreeVerse
#dystopian #FreeVerse
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1 Comment
oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 5:16pm
28th Sep 2024 5:16pm
Machine don’t feel(especially.001 percent)
Machine don’t feel(especially .001 percent)
Fuck the machine
I’m real not Artificial
Algorithm set the money
Dweebs with not enough honey
The Zusk of Muckerberg
Trolls of the .001 percent
CEOs of social media
Now it’s where some read the news and
Thought Orange and Mueller with Q
Would execute and Uphold Christian values
P T Orange said there’s a sucker born
And stacks roll in on a stolen lie
Of a free and fair election
All the while Zusk of Muckerberg
Count stacks and...
Fuck the machine
I’m real not Artificial
Algorithm set the money
Dweebs with not enough honey
The Zusk of Muckerberg
Trolls of the .001 percent
CEOs of social media
Now it’s where some read the news and
Thought Orange and Mueller with Q
Would execute and Uphold Christian values
P T Orange said there’s a sucker born
And stacks roll in on a stolen lie
Of a free and fair election
All the while Zusk of Muckerberg
Count stacks and...
#dystopian
#greed
#humankind #money
#humankind #money
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2024 11:32am
23rd Sep 2024 11:32am
The Grotesque
We are grotesque
We mate and create something horrific
Sluts and killers
Mean blood spillers
Whores and fuckers
Fools and suckers
Monster fucking dads
Sisters born with crabs
Monster slut mothers
Incest fueled brothers
We the monsters
One nation under a demigod
With obligation and injustice for all
We mate and create something horrific
Sluts and killers
Mean blood spillers
Whores and fuckers
Fools and suckers
Monster fucking dads
Sisters born with crabs
Monster slut mothers
Incest fueled brothers
We the monsters
One nation under a demigod
With obligation and injustice for all
#dark
#dystopian
#evil #rhyming
#evil #rhyming
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