Poems About Disappointment Seeking Honest Critique
#disappointment
Poems about disappointment seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:12am
Yesterday 00:12am
Please Disappear
Wake up, I want your lies
Don't die, it won't be nice
Is that what I've been waiting for?
Now I saw your face
You awoke!
You didn't die, it isn't so wonderful after all
Is that what I've been waiting for?
No.
Please disappear forever
Don't die, it won't be nice
Is that what I've been waiting for?
Now I saw your face
You awoke!
You didn't die, it isn't so wonderful after all
Is that what I've been waiting for?
No.
Please disappear forever
#death
#disappointment
#LifeChangingMoment
#regret
#relationships
37 reads
4 Comments
Stephanos_PS_M
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 3:45pm
24th Mar 2025 3:45pm
Winter comfort
I used to speak, to share my pain,
But every word was met with rain—
Not the kind that heals the ground,
Just the kind that pulls me down.
So now I keep my heart locked tight,
No more trust, no more light.
Why spill my soul when all I find
Are empty ears and colder minds?
So here’s my truth, my sad refrain:
I’ll crack a can, let silence reign.
No matter how cold this drink may be,
People are colder—that’s truth to me.
At least the chill that numbs my hand
Won’t judge or leave me where...
But every word was met with rain—
Not the kind that heals the ground,
Just the kind that pulls me down.
So now I keep my heart locked tight,
No more trust, no more light.
Why spill my soul when all I find
Are empty ears and colder minds?
So here’s my truth, my sad refrain:
I’ll crack a can, let silence reign.
No matter how cold this drink may be,
People are colder—that’s truth to me.
At least the chill that numbs my hand
Won’t judge or leave me where...
#despair
#disappointment
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#loneliness
49 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 11:33pm
22nd Mar 2025 11:33pm
When it's not love no more
Through this life we all will go through somethings, that are necessary for you to understand, that love is a two way street of give and take. For you have to learn how to navigate, through the process of the nonsense of the hurt and pain. That surely will come with confusion and displacement of what, love really is to the deepness of the truth of the heart. ❤️ For sure what you would you rather have in your own life, for wouldn't you want a relationship with a positive, commitment and real consistency to be able to share your life with for better or worse. As it is true that...
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#regret
#sadness
59 reads
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Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 11:08pm
22nd Mar 2025 11:08pm
See You In the Next Life
There was a time when I was
insouciant
the amount of fucks I gave
were counted in negative numbers
and I could internally quote my favourite comedian
“So what if you’re offended, nothing happens,
it’s not like you’re going to say
damn I was offended, I was hurt
and then I woke up with cancer”
and I’m sure there’s onlookers with a sense of
Schadenfraude at my inability
to swagger around with the big dick energy I took
for granted, thinking that because I could write
in a way that hits
I was bulletproof
because...
insouciant
the amount of fucks I gave
were counted in negative numbers
and I could internally quote my favourite comedian
“So what if you’re offended, nothing happens,
it’s not like you’re going to say
damn I was offended, I was hurt
and then I woke up with cancer”
and I’m sure there’s onlookers with a sense of
Schadenfraude at my inability
to swagger around with the big dick energy I took
for granted, thinking that because I could write
in a way that hits
I was bulletproof
because...
#disappointment
#ImSorry
#regret
101 reads
1 Comment
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 12:11pm
22nd Mar 2025 12:11pm
In the city of sorrows
In the city of sorrows
Is where we see so much
Racism
Against
Men and women
In the city of sorrows
There are so much injustice
Against people
The black people are the
Blue color worker
And they earn less money than
The white people
Is where we see so much
Racism
Against
Men and women
In the city of sorrows
There are so much injustice
Against people
The black people are the
Blue color worker
And they earn less money than
The white people
#anxiety
#denial
#despair
#disappointment
#jealousy
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0 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 8:30pm
18th Mar 2025 8:30pm
a saw blade to the guts
The first time I
kissed your bleeding
knuckles,
was because you punched
a steel wall
when I called you
a liar
and I apologized
and huddled
against your
side
desperate
to feel our
languid heat
against my cheek
and we sat
here.
right the fuck here.
in the dark
sobbing
for things
we couldn't describe
and lives
we shouldn't steal
but we did
we stole those lives
stole the fuck out of them,
and...
kissed your bleeding
knuckles,
was because you punched
a steel wall
when I called you
a liar
and I apologized
and huddled
against your
side
desperate
to feel our
languid heat
against my cheek
and we sat
here.
right the fuck here.
in the dark
sobbing
for things
we couldn't describe
and lives
we shouldn't steal
but we did
we stole those lives
stole the fuck out of them,
and...
#anger
#disappointment
#lover #obsession
#lover #obsession
174 reads
9 Comments
Chere-Rene13
Poem Published
17th Mar 2025 11:27pm
17th Mar 2025 11:27pm
The March Continues...Time Lonely Proceeds
An epilogue ending of a beginning. For another end is wide open as hearing the reverberate echo of drums...A pattern rudiment of undeveloped starts. This is the world that we know which continually spins on course. Harsh are the uncompromising laws of time.
Depth of slumber, darken trails feet obey & follow. A sleepwalk harrowing trance of dire rules, guides one easily towards the threshold of the night. Fear of opening that drawer...Fear of opening that door...Fear of being here...
Depth of slumber, darken trails feet obey & follow. A sleepwalk harrowing trance of dire rules, guides one easily towards the threshold of the night. Fear of opening that drawer...Fear of opening that door...Fear of being here...
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#loneliness
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buddhakitty
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 9:09pm
16th Mar 2025 9:09pm
what ever happened to:
looking out for
your follow man
live and let live and
to each thier own
lighting a candle
in the dark
minding your
own business
judge not lest
ye be judged
forgiving and
forgetting
letting bygones
be bygones
living by the
Golden Rule
whatever
happened to:
kids playing ball
in a sand lot
soda machines with
ice cold glass bottles
an honest days wage
for an...
your follow man
live and let live and
to each thier own
lighting a candle
in the dark
minding your
own business
judge not lest
ye be judged
forgiving and
forgetting
letting bygones
be bygones
living by the
Golden Rule
whatever
happened to:
kids playing ball
in a sand lot
soda machines with
ice cold glass bottles
an honest days wage
for an...
#bittersweet
#disappointment
82 reads
10 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 11:19pm
11th Mar 2025 11:19pm
Impulsively Writing about the Misery of Myself
I'm amazed at how long.
I've managed to keep myself alive.
Without trying too.
Hard to keep living.
Mr Self Destruct.
Mr. Give Me Anything as Long as I'm baked.
Some life I sought, really.
In fact.
I tried not to live.
I sought death.
It seems like something or someone.
Is preventing me from dying.
And, I feel comforted in the comfortable annihilation.
I only feel in a deep sleep.
Or a concussive forcing me to wake up.
With rage and hate.
As my brain rockets off my skull
All this natural...
I've managed to keep myself alive.
Without trying too.
Hard to keep living.
Mr Self Destruct.
Mr. Give Me Anything as Long as I'm baked.
Some life I sought, really.
In fact.
I tried not to live.
I sought death.
It seems like something or someone.
Is preventing me from dying.
And, I feel comforted in the comfortable annihilation.
I only feel in a deep sleep.
Or a concussive forcing me to wake up.
With rage and hate.
As my brain rockets off my skull
All this natural...
#disappointment
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0 Comments
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 4:46am
11th Mar 2025 4:46am
Toothpaste We Can't Put Back In
Stupidity is contagious
Stupidity is spread
Ignorance is ostentatious
And ignorance is bred
We say what we want
Irregardless of facts
We worship as servants
While our hatred attracts
Other people like minded
No one thinks for themselves
The system keeps us divided
And we no longer delve
Into information to learn
Or things that really matter
We'd rather the world burn
And be torn and tattered
We live in our hatred
While being self...
Stupidity is spread
Ignorance is ostentatious
And ignorance is bred
We say what we want
Irregardless of facts
We worship as servants
While our hatred attracts
Other people like minded
No one thinks for themselves
The system keeps us divided
And we no longer delve
Into information to learn
Or things that really matter
We'd rather the world burn
And be torn and tattered
We live in our hatred
While being self...
#disappointment
#sadness
#shame
111 reads
0 Comments
BlackBox
Black Box
Black Box
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 8:24pm
10th Mar 2025 8:24pm
Love Evanesce
No eloquent way to express
All the feelings I have for you
A messy assortment of sadness and love
I miss you.
I break down in tears
From the despair
Crying deeply, the insurmountable pain
Causes me to begin laughing in the midst of my grief
How can she have such a profound impact?
Greeting me in the morning,
Waiting for me to awake
From my life with you
You live in my can of beer
Thrive in my flower;
But you’re not there
Not there
There. In my thoughts
Reminding me of my loneliness ...
All the feelings I have for you
A messy assortment of sadness and love
I miss you.
I break down in tears
From the despair
Crying deeply, the insurmountable pain
Causes me to begin laughing in the midst of my grief
How can she have such a profound impact?
Greeting me in the morning,
Waiting for me to awake
From my life with you
You live in my can of beer
Thrive in my flower;
But you’re not there
Not there
There. In my thoughts
Reminding me of my loneliness ...
#apathy
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#sadness
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 7:40pm
9th Mar 2025 7:40pm
Note to self
She sells sea shells.
By the sea shore.
Cause.
I ain't taking her flights of fancy.
As some sacred script.
Change?
If you missed the forest for the trees.
Maybe you'd think that.
But, I'm consistently me.
I just stopped fantasizing about people.
Accepted them for how they were.
And, threw them away.
Like the refuse they are.
Everyone is a temporary light.
In a sea of engulfing darkness.
And I will shine brighter than the sun.
In the middle of night.
By the sea shore.
Cause.
I ain't taking her flights of fancy.
As some sacred script.
Change?
If you missed the forest for the trees.
Maybe you'd think that.
But, I'm consistently me.
I just stopped fantasizing about people.
Accepted them for how they were.
And, threw them away.
Like the refuse they are.
Everyone is a temporary light.
In a sea of engulfing darkness.
And I will shine brighter than the sun.
In the middle of night.
#disappointment
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0 Comments
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