Poems About Disappointment Seeking Honest Critique
#disappointment
Poems about disappointment seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 10:25pm
20th Feb 2025 10:25pm
Undress
You wore my skin
You swallowed my name
You bled my strength
You fed me despair
if living means to lose
then is dying a win?
the lake of tears is overflowing
the crown of villains is tilting
all that energy in motion
marching to its desolate end
snap the heart strings
rend the tired tendons
slow descent into the abyss
running out of air; of a voice
does dressing up a mistake
make it feel like it isn't one?
I neglected a promise
I was inconsiderate in my care
I abandoned what I...
You swallowed my name
You bled my strength
You fed me despair
if living means to lose
then is dying a win?
the lake of tears is overflowing
the crown of villains is tilting
all that energy in motion
marching to its desolate end
snap the heart strings
rend the tired tendons
slow descent into the abyss
running out of air; of a voice
does dressing up a mistake
make it feel like it isn't one?
I neglected a promise
I was inconsiderate in my care
I abandoned what I...
#dark
#disappointment
#sadness
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NP_NP
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 4:26pm
13th Feb 2025 4:26pm
He Is Poison
You are the king of poisons my arsenic.
Giving you one night would be
like ingesting cyanide death to the
soul in minutes.
Careful young women, some
men come to steal your hearts
and blacken your soul, nothing more.
They'll drain your beauty and watch
you convulse their Strychnine,
enjoying your dying misery.
Be warned and careful who you
bring to bed. He will give you
spiritual death, draining your
vitality and leaving you hollow.
Before you take his hand...
Giving you one night would be
like ingesting cyanide death to the
soul in minutes.
Careful young women, some
men come to steal your hearts
and blacken your soul, nothing more.
They'll drain your beauty and watch
you convulse their Strychnine,
enjoying your dying misery.
Be warned and careful who you
bring to bed. He will give you
spiritual death, draining your
vitality and leaving you hollow.
Before you take his hand...
#disappointment
#lust
#regret
#sex
#UnrequitedLove
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 3:47pm
13th Feb 2025 3:47pm
Goodbye Dad
Goodbye Dad
I am heart broken
That I have lost you
So fast
I can't stop crying
Yes I could never believe
That you had to part so soon
But deep down
I could not stand to see you
Suffer every day
Battling you disease
I tried to make you
Comfortable
Also I had to be strong for you
And it is very hard to do
Yes you lost you battle
And at the same time
It was hard to see you leave
This earth
But at the same time
I must understand that
You are in a better place them me
You are living a new...
I am heart broken
That I have lost you
So fast
I can't stop crying
Yes I could never believe
That you had to part so soon
But deep down
I could not stand to see you
Suffer every day
Battling you disease
I tried to make you
Comfortable
Also I had to be strong for you
And it is very hard to do
Yes you lost you battle
And at the same time
It was hard to see you leave
This earth
But at the same time
I must understand that
You are in a better place them me
You are living a new...
#despair
#disappointment
#grief
#heartbroken
#shame
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moon_bather
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 2:44am
13th Feb 2025 2:44am
Lovely Disgusted Ramblings of a Self-Ingested Being
Love sick
Dumb shits
Such as myself
Stand around
Idly by
Full of nothingness
As long as you get yours
As long as royalty succeeds
We worry about nothing
We got nothing
Yet everything
Amen
To you and your motherfucking condescending albatross of a conundrum which is not anything I condone nor does your mom nor does the Pope and so we sit in this mess eating the ember and feeling incomplete just like yesterday we got nothing so now how do you feel cause I feel like nothing is that you feeling like nothing...
Dumb shits
Such as myself
Stand around
Idly by
Full of nothingness
As long as you get yours
As long as royalty succeeds
We worry about nothing
We got nothing
Yet everything
Amen
To you and your motherfucking condescending albatross of a conundrum which is not anything I condone nor does your mom nor does the Pope and so we sit in this mess eating the ember and feeling incomplete just like yesterday we got nothing so now how do you feel cause I feel like nothing is that you feeling like nothing...
#anxiety
#bittersweet
#dark
#disappointment
#emptiness
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 8:21pm
10th Feb 2025 8:21pm
Ill
My depth is shallow.
My mind, fractured.
And, all these coudla beens.
Hit me too early.
In this afternoon wakefulness.
There's a pit in my gut.
But it dies once the speed kicks in.
I don't feel like eating anything other.
Than cirgarettes ash.
The general sense of being.
Unwell.
Is constant
My mind, fractured.
And, all these coudla beens.
Hit me too early.
In this afternoon wakefulness.
There's a pit in my gut.
But it dies once the speed kicks in.
I don't feel like eating anything other.
Than cirgarettes ash.
The general sense of being.
Unwell.
Is constant
#disappointment
#emptiness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 12:02pm
8th Feb 2025 12:02pm
It is so hard to live without you my father
It is so hard to live without you
My father
I just can't live without you my father
I need you to be a part
Of my everyday life
I could never
live without father
I know that you
Also love me
Without limits
And I am your son
And I will always be your son
You have created me
59 years ago with your
Holy hands
And you have placed me
Here on earth to live
I just love the life you
Gave to me father
I never complained to you
About my life
Thanks to you father
I live a very good life ...
My father
I just can't live without you my father
I need you to be a part
Of my everyday life
I could never
live without father
I know that you
Also love me
Without limits
And I am your son
And I will always be your son
You have created me
59 years ago with your
Holy hands
And you have placed me
Here on earth to live
I just love the life you
Gave to me father
I never complained to you
About my life
Thanks to you father
I live a very good life ...
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#regret
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:27pm
7th Feb 2025 10:27pm
Dear friend
Dear friend
Always remember
That you are a child of God
He is the one that
Created you in his image
A long time ago
So you are beautiful
In God’s eyes
And if you don’t agree
It is ok because God
Has his own opinion
Always remember
That you are a child of God
He is the one that
Created you in his image
A long time ago
So you are beautiful
In God’s eyes
And if you don’t agree
It is ok because God
Has his own opinion
#anger
#disappointment
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:25pm
7th Feb 2025 10:25pm
I am waking up now
I am waking up
Now
The time is 8:00 am
I am starting to get ready
For the day
First I am shaving my
Face the old fashion away
It is very hard to do
I have to do it
Slowly
If I do it fast
I will cut my face
It takes me 20 minutes
To shave
When it is over
I will go into my shower
And have a shower
When my shower is over
I will turn the shower off
Then I will dry my body
With a bath towel
Now is the time for me
To get dress
In to my casual clothes
I will put my pajama and my ...
Now
The time is 8:00 am
I am starting to get ready
For the day
First I am shaving my
Face the old fashion away
It is very hard to do
I have to do it
Slowly
If I do it fast
I will cut my face
It takes me 20 minutes
To shave
When it is over
I will go into my shower
And have a shower
When my shower is over
I will turn the shower off
Then I will dry my body
With a bath towel
Now is the time for me
To get dress
In to my casual clothes
I will put my pajama and my ...
#anger
#apathy
#disappointment
#emptiness
#jealousy
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Aquatic-Vehicle
Lexiloo
Lexiloo
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 9:35pm
7th Feb 2025 9:35pm
Yes or no?
Why was it
That I was disappointed
With a yes?
My expectations rose
Beliefs put on a show
All for naught.
I truly thought
The worst dreadful thing
One could say was “no”.
I’m glad I understand
You can’t fix what’s solidified.
I wish I matured.
And I wish I was the one to say no.
That I was disappointed
With a yes?
My expectations rose
Beliefs put on a show
All for naught.
I truly thought
The worst dreadful thing
One could say was “no”.
I’m glad I understand
You can’t fix what’s solidified.
I wish I matured.
And I wish I was the one to say no.
#disappointment
#PersonalGrowth
#regret
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NoQuarter
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 3:50am
7th Feb 2025 3:50am
Silence That Devours
i knock but the door does not open
i speak my name into the dark
but even the echoes refuse to answer
the walls should hold memories
but they are empty
hollow bones of a place that never wanted me
the mirror stands waiting
but i am not in it
i press my hand to the glass
expecting warmth
but it is only cold only blank
only a reflection of nothing
somewhere a door swings open to nothing
somewhere my shadow walks without me
i thought if i waited long enough
the silence would break
that...
i speak my name into the dark
but even the echoes refuse to answer
the walls should hold memories
but they are empty
hollow bones of a place that never wanted me
the mirror stands waiting
but i am not in it
i press my hand to the glass
expecting warmth
but it is only cold only blank
only a reflection of nothing
somewhere a door swings open to nothing
somewhere my shadow walks without me
i thought if i waited long enough
the silence would break
that...
#disappointment
#loneliness
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 1:38am
7th Feb 2025 1:38am
Cómo Foi?
Cómo Foi?
This beautiful sunny day
During the Summer
It was a very hot day
For us
That made us
Sweat like pigs
Nonstop
The only way to get
Relief from this hot day
Is to go to the beach
Where it is cooler
We will have to swim
For a few minutes
Then when we come out
We will feel relieved
Cómo Foi?
I was the only one
Who had taken a look
At the blue sky
With white clouds
Also, I didn't see any sign
Of rain in the sky
Now this day was coming to
An end
We saw the sun going...
This beautiful sunny day
During the Summer
It was a very hot day
For us
That made us
Sweat like pigs
Nonstop
The only way to get
Relief from this hot day
Is to go to the beach
Where it is cooler
We will have to swim
For a few minutes
Then when we come out
We will feel relieved
Cómo Foi?
I was the only one
Who had taken a look
At the blue sky
With white clouds
Also, I didn't see any sign
Of rain in the sky
Now this day was coming to
An end
We saw the sun going...
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#regret
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:08am
5th Feb 2025 11:08am
Don't go around
Don't go around
Talking behind my back
To you
Snobbish friends
Because I hate
When you do that
You have no right
To do that
Also when you do that
You also hurt me badly
And I must
Tell you that
I hate that very much
Tell me what I supposed
To do with you
Because I don't trust you
At all
I want to break our friendship
Please go and live your
Life alone
And I will also
Live my life alone
Also, I don't need a friend
Like that
Talking behind my back
To you
Snobbish friends
Because I hate
When you do that
You have no right
To do that
Also when you do that
You also hurt me badly
And I must
Tell you that
I hate that very much
Tell me what I supposed
To do with you
Because I don't trust you
At all
I want to break our friendship
Please go and live your
Life alone
And I will also
Live my life alone
Also, I don't need a friend
Like that
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#rejection
#sadness
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