Poems About Disappointment Seeking Friendly Advice
#disappointment
Poems about disappointment seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 7:40pm
13th Feb 2025 7:40pm
Will You Be My Valentine?
Will You Be My Valentine?
Will you be my valentine?
Must have said that a thousand times
I sent several invites to dine
Hundreds of roses fair and fine
Chocolate boxes more than nine
with all kinds of bottles of wine
Waiting for a wink or just a sign
to say that you agree to be mine
No reply nothing just a message online
A shrug with a sleazy punch line:
“You’re a fool for thinking I’m thine
I need someone who makes me shine
A bull. I don’t care if he’s a swine
As long as he has...
Will you be my valentine?
Must have said that a thousand times
I sent several invites to dine
Hundreds of roses fair and fine
Chocolate boxes more than nine
with all kinds of bottles of wine
Waiting for a wink or just a sign
to say that you agree to be mine
No reply nothing just a message online
A shrug with a sleazy punch line:
“You’re a fool for thinking I’m thine
I need someone who makes me shine
A bull. I don’t care if he’s a swine
As long as he has...
#love
#disappointment
#relationships
109 reads
4 Comments
Des0Holtz
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 8:39am
12th Feb 2025 8:39am
The Depths of Despair
In shadows I dwell, where darkness resides,
A prisoner of thoughts, where hope subsides.
Depression's grip, a heavy chain,
Whispering doubts, fueling the pain.
Self-harm's allure, a tempting release,
A fleeting escape, a moment of peace.
But scars remain, a haunting reminder,
Of battles fought, wounds left behind her.
Suicide's call, a siren's sweet song,
Promising solace, where nothing feels wrong.
But death's embrace, a cold, empty void,
Leaving behind loved ones, forever destroyed.
I yearn for light, a glimmer of hope,
To...
A prisoner of thoughts, where hope subsides.
Depression's grip, a heavy chain,
Whispering doubts, fueling the pain.
Self-harm's allure, a tempting release,
A fleeting escape, a moment of peace.
But scars remain, a haunting reminder,
Of battles fought, wounds left behind her.
Suicide's call, a siren's sweet song,
Promising solace, where nothing feels wrong.
But death's embrace, a cold, empty void,
Leaving behind loved ones, forever destroyed.
I yearn for light, a glimmer of hope,
To...
#dark
#disappointment
#hate #sadness
#hate #sadness
49 reads
3 Comments
thinlane
Poem Published
11th Feb 2025 7:36pm
11th Feb 2025 7:36pm
That Long Cold Walk
It's cold as hell out
And my fingers are aching
And it's still a long walk
Before I get home
When I left this evening
I was feeling happy and positive
And looked forward to having a fine time
Maybe share a bottle of wine with my girl
But that all went to hell
Now I'm newly single
And feeling out of control
And I'm walking home because I let myself get drunk
You all know the old saw
It's not you, it's me
And we're in two different places
I never meant to hurt you
They're all true
And they're all half truths ...
And my fingers are aching
And it's still a long walk
Before I get home
When I left this evening
I was feeling happy and positive
And looked forward to having a fine time
Maybe share a bottle of wine with my girl
But that all went to hell
Now I'm newly single
And feeling out of control
And I'm walking home because I let myself get drunk
You all know the old saw
It's not you, it's me
And we're in two different places
I never meant to hurt you
They're all true
And they're all half truths ...
#disappointment
#sadness
50 reads
0 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 4:01am
10th Feb 2025 4:01am
unloved/unwanted
unloved/unwanted
i can't stay any longer
left feeling this way
i can't stay any longer
left feeling this way
#deception
#disappointment
#rejection
#sadness
#separation
73 reads
6 Comments
Ambjr
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 3:46pm
8th Feb 2025 3:46pm
I’m a loser baby
I liked myself better
when I hated myself more
misery had a melody
self destruction had rhythm
now I’m fumblin thru life
like a virgin at an orgy
good intentions but awkward as fuck
my hands remember Rachmaninoff
but my brain has set fire
to the keys
sendin up smoke signals
to a god that stopped listenin
somewhere between genesis
and my one man show of self sabotage
they called me gifted
before my fingers learned to tremble
virtuoso playin tag with oblivion
composin chaos from memory ...
when I hated myself more
misery had a melody
self destruction had rhythm
now I’m fumblin thru life
like a virgin at an orgy
good intentions but awkward as fuck
my hands remember Rachmaninoff
but my brain has set fire
to the keys
sendin up smoke signals
to a god that stopped listenin
somewhere between genesis
and my one man show of self sabotage
they called me gifted
before my fingers learned to tremble
virtuoso playin tag with oblivion
composin chaos from memory ...
#addiction
#depression
#disappointment #music
#disappointment #music
125 reads
10 Comments
Maple666
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 8:59am
1st Feb 2025 8:59am
FACE
The many dimensions and aspects of a face of the human kind
Walking a path than can trip you at times when the terrain is the nitty gritty stuff. Rocks instead of grass and you fall on your arse and sink down past tree roots and shoots of daffodils that felt like hope.
You are on a downward trajectory and you feel that life has choked out all your funny quips and jokes and smoothed your laughter lines but left an anxiety riddled complexion and a nervous tic and a mind jacked on steroids flexing the muscles of ruminating.
It has left you feeling like you are...
Walking a path than can trip you at times when the terrain is the nitty gritty stuff. Rocks instead of grass and you fall on your arse and sink down past tree roots and shoots of daffodils that felt like hope.
You are on a downward trajectory and you feel that life has choked out all your funny quips and jokes and smoothed your laughter lines but left an anxiety riddled complexion and a nervous tic and a mind jacked on steroids flexing the muscles of ruminating.
It has left you feeling like you are...
#anxiety
#apathy
#bittersweet
#confusion
#disappointment
51 reads
4 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 11:11pm
31st Jan 2025 11:11pm
Rivers of Life
I drown in the blackhole of memories
hearts break down as porcelain whispers echo
the hurt as a delicate origami unfurled
swirled as in a whirlpool crumpled and torn
your lies are as a cuckoo's call
empty echoes, shadows fighting the night
threads of my trust now frayed
swept away by my tempest of sorrow
hearts break down as porcelain whispers echo
the hurt as a delicate origami unfurled
swirled as in a whirlpool crumpled and torn
your lies are as a cuckoo's call
empty echoes, shadows fighting the night
threads of my trust now frayed
swept away by my tempest of sorrow
#disappointment
92 reads
7 Comments
chihiro_angel
geeeeel.crp
geeeeel.crp
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 3:02am
27th Jan 2025 3:02am
Certain Exile
No one truly knows the weight of certainty,
The kind that whispers you don’t belong anywhere.
Not just the ache of feeling out of place,
But the cold, sharp truth of knowing it.
Familiar faces do not bring comfort,
Only the reminder that you are somewhere you do not fit.
The streets you grew up walking feel like strangers.
Each turn offers nothing but emptiness,
A longing for something you cannot name,
Something you are certain does not exist.
It is not just voices that drift past,
They are languages you...
The kind that whispers you don’t belong anywhere.
Not just the ache of feeling out of place,
But the cold, sharp truth of knowing it.
Familiar faces do not bring comfort,
Only the reminder that you are somewhere you do not fit.
The streets you grew up walking feel like strangers.
Each turn offers nothing but emptiness,
A longing for something you cannot name,
Something you are certain does not exist.
It is not just voices that drift past,
They are languages you...
#confusion
#disappointment
#grief
56 reads
1 Comment
Renee
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 5:37pm
24th Jan 2025 5:37pm
Broken
I was more innocent than I ever knew,
Dreaming of picket fences, a life steady and true.
You were supposed to be my anchor, my safe place,
But the tides of life have washed away that space.
Growing up in chaos, I fought just to survive,
Learning to love, yet always deceived.
You seemed so stable, with your family intact;
I longed to be like that, but you turned your back.
Your loud rants, dreadful words, and hurtful hands
Ripped apart the glue that barely held my strands.
I didn’t know how to love, completely broken,...
Dreaming of picket fences, a life steady and true.
You were supposed to be my anchor, my safe place,
But the tides of life have washed away that space.
Growing up in chaos, I fought just to survive,
Learning to love, yet always deceived.
You seemed so stable, with your family intact;
I longed to be like that, but you turned your back.
Your loud rants, dreadful words, and hurtful hands
Ripped apart the glue that barely held my strands.
I didn’t know how to love, completely broken,...
#breakup
#conflict
#deception
#disappointment
#MovingOn
114 reads
1 Comment
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:13pm
19th Jan 2025 10:13pm
part of the crowd
let me
hurry
and rush
uptown,
let me
become
part of
the crowd,
it's lonely
being
just one.
hurry
and rush
uptown,
let me
become
part of
the crowd,
it's lonely
being
just one.
#boredom
#confusion
#disappointment
#emptiness
#loneliness
76 reads
4 Comments
Nvmb
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 8:05pm
19th Jan 2025 8:05pm
Who are you
Who are you, staring back at me?
Someone I don’t want to see.
Your eyes are hollow, your hands are still,
You’re the weight I can’t ever kill.
I try to talk, but you just blink,
Are you afraid of what I think?
Tell me, do you even care?
Or are you just a ghost in there?
Who are you, and what’s your name?
Do you hate me? Am I to blame?
Why do you wear this broken face,
Like nothing’s left to take its place?
I’m begging you, say something true—
Who are you?
When did you stop looking my way?
Was it when...
Someone I don’t want to see.
Your eyes are hollow, your hands are still,
You’re the weight I can’t ever kill.
I try to talk, but you just blink,
Are you afraid of what I think?
Tell me, do you even care?
Or are you just a ghost in there?
Who are you, and what’s your name?
Do you hate me? Am I to blame?
Why do you wear this broken face,
Like nothing’s left to take its place?
I’m begging you, say something true—
Who are you?
When did you stop looking my way?
Was it when...
#apathy
#dark
#despair
#disappointment
#emptiness
77 reads
0 Comments
Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Kaden Malis
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 6:35am
19th Jan 2025 6:35am
Belief
Belief was a dream
I lost it all
Last night
Stood by and watched
As it all
Withered and died
I don't even believe myself
I'm not giving in
I'm giving up
Tired of living a lie
Sick of my life
I've had enough
Used to see the light
Now everything
Is cold and grey
Used to feel free
Now I have
Nothing to say
I wished for dreams
That forever turned
Into nightmares
Changing me into
A saddened joke
And pitiful liar
So take my...
I lost it all
Last night
Stood by and watched
As it all
Withered and died
I don't even believe myself
I'm not giving in
I'm giving up
Tired of living a lie
Sick of my life
I've had enough
Used to see the light
Now everything
Is cold and grey
Used to feel free
Now I have
Nothing to say
I wished for dreams
That forever turned
Into nightmares
Changing me into
A saddened joke
And pitiful liar
So take my...
#addiction
#alcohol
#disappointment
#frustration
#temptation
65 reads
2 Comments
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