Poems About Confusion Seeking Honest Critique
#confusion
Billy_Snagg
Jizzman
Jizzman
Poem Published
Today 4:01pm
Today 4:01pm
TRUMP IS BACK!
Trump is back, oh yeah baby...
DRILL BABY DRILL!
You said 'baby' already!
Yeah but I'm here for the thrill...
Mr Vance!
Trump is back...
He’s gonna save your back,
Your reputation -
(Even though it's in the shitter)
Ala, ala... my baby's back!
He wants everyone sacked.
If I were you,
I'd take a permanent vacation...
To Ukraine!
Ala ala Trump -
Alas, you know he’s been lyin',
No matter what Musk is tryin.
He shoulda stayed gone for good!
Ah wooo, ah wooo.
Now Zelenski wants to kick...
DRILL BABY DRILL!
You said 'baby' already!
Yeah but I'm here for the thrill...
Mr Vance!
Trump is back...
He’s gonna save your back,
Your reputation -
(Even though it's in the shitter)
Ala, ala... my baby's back!
He wants everyone sacked.
If I were you,
I'd take a permanent vacation...
To Ukraine!
Ala ala Trump -
Alas, you know he’s been lyin',
No matter what Musk is tryin.
He shoulda stayed gone for good!
Ah wooo, ah wooo.
Now Zelenski wants to kick...
#anger
#anxiety
#bittersweet
#confusion
#despair
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blaberidae
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 7:50am
26th Mar 2025 7:50am
Growing Intimacies
Between the legs, there is an illiteracy,
A disposition so callow and dewy,
And an ever lolling head.
Fussing about
This graceless locution, and that garbling bed—
Between faint forms, an illegitimacy.
A disposition so callow and dewy,
And an ever lolling head.
Fussing about
This graceless locution, and that garbling bed—
Between faint forms, an illegitimacy.
#birth
#confusion
#dialogue
#LifeChangingMoment
#sex
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Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 11:18am
25th Mar 2025 11:18am
Color Within The Lines
Believe the Bible
Abide by the commandments
Read our history books
That is what happened
Follow school rules
Color within the lines
Work endless hours to survive
Follow these laws
Listen to the news
Believe what you're told
Become numb and mindless
Don't think for yourself
Pass this knowledge around
Your mind is inundated
Brainwashed
Controlled, conditioned
Conformity
Abide by the commandments
Read our history books
That is what happened
Follow school rules
Color within the lines
Work endless hours to survive
Follow these laws
Listen to the news
Believe what you're told
Become numb and mindless
Don't think for yourself
Pass this knowledge around
Your mind is inundated
Brainwashed
Controlled, conditioned
Conformity
#confusion
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Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 10:09pm
19th Mar 2025 10:09pm
Like Nothing Matters
I served a sentence of self imposed
exile because I couldn’t grow enough
to grasp the concepts of years of failures
fallouts and repeating cycles of mistakes
I’ve walked back in with hat-in-hand-contrition
too many times and it’s always been
with a pack of matches in my back pocket
because recovering pyromaniacs are worse
than drug addicts
every long winded apology and self exploratory
delve into stream of conscious delivered
new insights that led to dead ends and
falling into the same patterns
...
exile because I couldn’t grow enough
to grasp the concepts of years of failures
fallouts and repeating cycles of mistakes
I’ve walked back in with hat-in-hand-contrition
too many times and it’s always been
with a pack of matches in my back pocket
because recovering pyromaniacs are worse
than drug addicts
every long winded apology and self exploratory
delve into stream of conscious delivered
new insights that led to dead ends and
falling into the same patterns
...
#confusion
#dark
#ignorance
146 reads
7 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 3:28pm
19th Mar 2025 3:28pm
The paths unclear
Heckled by emotions
Making a mind so jaded
The memories are there
But the colours are faded
Happiness and health
Trust and fear
The windows all misty
The paths unlclear
Making a mind so jaded
The memories are there
But the colours are faded
Happiness and health
Trust and fear
The windows all misty
The paths unlclear
#bittersweet
#confusion
#despair
#loneliness
#sadness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 2:00pm
19th Mar 2025 2:00pm
It's alright to cry
Did you know that when we cry alone in the wee hours of the night, we are only releasing our hurt and pain that we feel deeper than deep, as a woman or a man yeah I know that as a man we aren't supposed, to show that part of us, as a man for sure it's not that we are weak, for sure we have our own emotions and genuine feelings just like a woman. For sure it's alright to cry so that we can shed, the deepness of the truth of the pain that comes, with the hurt. BUT yet you shouldn't stay in that moment of regret, for sometimes things just happen for a righteous reason, as sometimes things just...
#anger
#confusion
#courage
#grief
#strength
94 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 1:41pm
19th Mar 2025 1:41pm
What Are You Staring, Dude?
What are you staring, Dude?
Never before saw me in the nude?
Know it must be crude.
I thought I had such complete solitude.
I didn't mean to sound so rude.
Never before saw me in the nude?
Know it must be crude.
I thought I had such complete solitude.
I didn't mean to sound so rude.
#confusion
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
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cheesa
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 9:40am
19th Mar 2025 9:40am
Mind the moors
My mind is like a moorland
With boggy areas of sadness and sorrow hidden between joyus pastures of green
There's always an evaluation of any elation while traipsing through this enclosed plaine of openness
With boggy areas of sadness and sorrow hidden between joyus pastures of green
There's always an evaluation of any elation while traipsing through this enclosed plaine of openness
#confusion
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 11:04pm
16th Mar 2025 11:04pm
Sometimes it's necessary
There will come a time when we have to learn, how to navigate through the process of a broken heart, 💔 that will leave behind the foot prints of hurt 😞 and the sorrow of pain. That will come in the form, of the pure silent of your loneliness, that brings tears in the dark of the night. For sometimes we have to take in account, that nothing really last forever, yet sometimes they return as they never left you alone. Sometimes it is necessary to understand, that what will be will be more important than you think it is to you. Sometimes when things come back to you, it is not by...
#confusion
#despair
#frustration
#hope
#love
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 00:57am
16th Mar 2025 00:57am
Waking Up With More Than A Hangover
Mary woke and saw Ted.
Then, she discovered she was also naked.
Mary felt a painful head.
Then, she discovered she was also naked.
Mary felt a painful head.
#alcohol
#confusion
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 1:31pm
11th Mar 2025 1:31pm
No Thanks. I'm Just Here To Visit A Friend.
Tim came to Glendale early.
He caught Michelle posing naked for Monique.
Monique asked Tim to join.
He caught Michelle posing naked for Monique.
Monique asked Tim to join.
#art
#confusion
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
138 reads
2 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 1:38am
6th Mar 2025 1:38am
3 wishes
broken door
busted lip
screams fill the empty spaces
hate fills love
love spills on the floor
i tell you i love you
do you hear me
do you know me
punches thrown
darkness covers light
is it hate or is it love
which one is it
i don't know...
i only wish
it would stop
i only wish
i was dead
i only wish
i wasn't me
busted lip
screams fill the empty spaces
hate fills love
love spills on the floor
i tell you i love you
do you hear me
do you know me
punches thrown
darkness covers light
is it hate or is it love
which one is it
i don't know...
i only wish
it would stop
i only wish
i was dead
i only wish
i wasn't me
#confusion
#dark
#fear
93 reads
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