Poems About Confusion Seeking Honest Critique
#confusion
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 2:15pm
26th Jan 2025 2:15pm
Seek Search and Find
To seek we must search to find what is it that we need and what in our lives, 🙏 for it's true that we are creatures of habits. THAT sometimes we don't have a glue on what we need and want, due to the chaos and drama and confusion and madness hidden behind a mask as a disguise. YET to really be able to sustain this beautiful element known as life. We must sometimes take a leap of faith, yet still knowing what we do know is that what we've been getting isn't it at all. 😞 YET then we start to just settle for the wrong reasons, just to say that we have someone only to say I got a...
#anger
#confusion
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#StreamOfConsciousness
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2 Comments
Glaxian
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 4:44pm
25th Jan 2025 4:44pm
Nuthin'
Nuthin'
Largely lost in lethargy
And able to act accordingly
Every energy eviscerating efficiency
Buying bleeding barnyard Barbary
Selling strings soaked in sophistry
living life like literal lunacy
candidly creating chaos casually
Making mountains move maliciously
fleeing fearless fiends for fantasy
proposing purpose pushed to periphery
every edifice eroding endlessly
End
Largely lost in lethargy
And able to act accordingly
Every energy eviscerating efficiency
Buying bleeding barnyard Barbary
Selling strings soaked in sophistry
living life like literal lunacy
candidly creating chaos casually
Making mountains move maliciously
fleeing fearless fiends for fantasy
proposing purpose pushed to periphery
every edifice eroding endlessly
End
#confusion
#emptiness
#escape #motivational
#escape #motivational
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 2:51pm
25th Jan 2025 2:51pm
When is enough an enough
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ FOR let's ask thyself when is enough an enough of the UNTRUTH, that doesn't do anything to help your own self esteem, lifting you up out of the way that leads to the deepness of your pain. 🤔 For when is enough an enough of spending count less minutes and hours, dwelling upon something that we have no real control over. FROM things of the past with it's regrets of mistakes, that only brings back those memories of our hurt and spiritual pain.😞 For sure really when is enough to much to...
#bittersweet
#confusion
#disappointment
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
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2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 12:15pm
25th Jan 2025 12:15pm
A method to the madness
For sure whatever is the reason there's always an responsible method, to the deepness of the madness, that you and I must truly understand that behind everything. There's a reaction with a raw and uncut point of consequence, that will affect us in ways. THAT sometimes don't make sense. 🤨 BUT yet it's still apart of us, through the process of the journey and travel and walk. THAT we must never forget how to navigate, through the process of what is happening in our lives. FOR sure everything, will stay with you in high sight of trying. Desperately to forget but you can't forget the...
#anger
#confusion
#grief
#hope
#love
55 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 10:47am
25th Jan 2025 10:47am
Them
She moves around with caution
Never knowing when "They" may appear
Anxiety has been setting in
She knows "There" real
Everyone is telling her "There" not
She'll witness "Them" from the corner of her left eye
"They" look like little children whispering
At times "They'll" look directly at her and giggle
The faces are distorted
Kind of like a blurred photograph
Several times she caught a few words "They" were saying
On some occasions "They've" asked...
Never knowing when "They" may appear
Anxiety has been setting in
She knows "There" real
Everyone is telling her "There" not
She'll witness "Them" from the corner of her left eye
"They" look like little children whispering
At times "They'll" look directly at her and giggle
The faces are distorted
Kind of like a blurred photograph
Several times she caught a few words "They" were saying
On some occasions "They've" asked...
#aging
#confusion
#fear
#MentalHealth
#scary
55 reads
15 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 5:39am
25th Jan 2025 5:39am
Checked Out
My mind is a scattered heap of wadded notes
Tossed aside and torn under mindless footsteps.
I cannot find words for all that is trapped inside.
Tossed aside and torn under mindless footsteps.
I cannot find words for all that is trapped inside.
#anxiety
#confusion
#MentalHealth
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
46 reads
4 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 00:10am
25th Jan 2025 00:10am
I wanna live
I wanna live
My life to the fullest
Father
I want to try to make
Some more new friends
Because Father I have
Very little friends in
My life
Also I have to look
After myself
Father I have no problem
Looking after myself
I do it every single day
I look also after my health
Every single day
And I go to bed early
Every single night
So that I get
A proper night sleep
My life to the fullest
Father
I want to try to make
Some more new friends
Because Father I have
Very little friends in
My life
Also I have to look
After myself
Father I have no problem
Looking after myself
I do it every single day
I look also after my health
Every single day
And I go to bed early
Every single night
So that I get
A proper night sleep
#confusion
#denial
#despair
#heartbroken
#jealousy
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56ApacheLove
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 1:12pm
24th Jan 2025 1:12pm
Abandoned Outpost
Lay me in the old abandoned house, upon tongue and groove planks, wrap me in a woolen blanket, close to the broken window, where snowflakes are visible as they gently fall...quietly fall.
Please don't let them melt upon me though, ive bore the cold long enough.
Let the Blue and Red birds visit, singing songs, keeping me company until my hunger finally eats me alive.
Please don't let them melt upon me though, ive bore the cold long enough.
Let the Blue and Red birds visit, singing songs, keeping me company until my hunger finally eats me alive.
#confusion
#emptiness
58 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 2:21pm
23rd Jan 2025 2:21pm
The Couple Allowed Her To Join Them
Elizabeth heard a noise outside.
She followed that noise to the river.
She spotted Charles humping Mary.
That made Elizabeth strip and touch herself.
The couple allowed her to join them.
She followed that noise to the river.
She spotted Charles humping Mary.
That made Elizabeth strip and touch herself.
The couple allowed her to join them.
#confusion
#fiction
#friendship
#river
#sex
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 9:25pm
20th Jan 2025 9:25pm
In cased inside of glass
If you could change your life what would you consider, to change about your own life. FOR it's true that we have the ability and power, to alter our lives and further along, the direction of our lives as well, as our dreams. For sure if you could get one thing right, in your own life what would it be, that you have done that you would, want to be truly undone. FROM the deepness of the hurt and pain, that you caused, and left so many levels of feelings, unattended with emotional scars. That still to this day is lingering, in the dark deepness of some people's, heart and mind that you had...
#confusion
#disappointment
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#rejection
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 8:55pm
17th Jan 2025 8:55pm
Don't Quit
When you feel like the whole world is 🌍 against you don't quit, for it's not the end of your life. IT'S just human nature to feel that you just can't win, but yet you do win in the end 😉 by not giving up without a fight 😉 When you feel that you have to just settle down, for something else that has no real intentions of commitment and CONSISTENCY. 🤔 DON'T quit just because they don't have the intelligence, to know that they found the truth within a relationship that they say they been not getting. 🤨 Don't quit when things in your life, aren't what you...
#confusion
#disappointment
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
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Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 8:45am
16th Jan 2025 8:45am
Whispers Of The Midnight Air
In whispers of the midnight air
Shadows hide what isn't there
Seek the truth with an open mind
Cryptic clues within you'll find
Shadows dance and secrets spin
Through silent echoes thoughts begin
Unseen threads weave through the night
A labyrinth paved by moonlit light
Gaze deep within this cryptic verse
Trace each line, the story's curse
Twist of fate and twist of rhyme
Unveil the puzzle lost in time
Wisdom hidden of shadows kin
Hidden truths lie deep within
Shadows deep and whispers clear
Truths...
Shadows hide what isn't there
Seek the truth with an open mind
Cryptic clues within you'll find
Shadows dance and secrets spin
Through silent echoes thoughts begin
Unseen threads weave through the night
A labyrinth paved by moonlit light
Gaze deep within this cryptic verse
Trace each line, the story's curse
Twist of fate and twist of rhyme
Unveil the puzzle lost in time
Wisdom hidden of shadows kin
Hidden truths lie deep within
Shadows deep and whispers clear
Truths...
#confusion
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