Poems About Bees Seeking Honest Critique
#bees
CanisInc-Untis
Poem Published
12th May 2022 11:47am
12th May 2022 11:47am
The Hornet and the Spider
in playground quiet
childhood swings
spinster sinister spinning
spreading lattice
marking the artflow
soul pneumatics
welcoming Spring
in dark corners
for palpable thing
black diamond
vampirical suspense
queen of the hunt
indomitable
definable
exquisite
mortifiable preying
in all her splendour
corpulent
crowned with obsidian
eyes incorporeal jewels
master-crafted her world
far from other realms
interweaving
interconnected
conduits
not a thread was left ...
childhood swings
spinster sinister spinning
spreading lattice
marking the artflow
soul pneumatics
welcoming Spring
in dark corners
for palpable thing
black diamond
vampirical suspense
queen of the hunt
indomitable
definable
exquisite
mortifiable preying
in all her splendour
corpulent
crowned with obsidian
eyes incorporeal jewels
master-crafted her world
far from other realms
interweaving
interconnected
conduits
not a thread was left ...
#hope
#war
#nature
#bees
#bittersweet
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archie23
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2021 1:42pm
23rd Dec 2021 1:42pm
The Queen spoke to me
She shuffled side to side upon the coffee table
early in the afternoon outside as I smoked a cigarette
A queen ant with wings searching for a mate
seeking to create a hive as I sought to be alive
I spoke to her
She listened to my words
She danced before me
I commented upon her beauty
She inched closer towards me.
she walked along the edge of the table
She flew onto my knee, then lost
I told her destiny
That will never be
early in the afternoon outside as I smoked a cigarette
A queen ant with wings searching for a mate
seeking to create a hive as I sought to be alive
I spoke to her
She listened to my words
She danced before me
I commented upon her beauty
She inched closer towards me.
she walked along the edge of the table
She flew onto my knee, then lost
I told her destiny
That will never be
#nature
#bees
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SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
18th Aug 2021 2:53am
18th Aug 2021 2:53am
BEE LEASH
His relationship
With the queen is beautiful
And perfectly formed
With the queen is beautiful
And perfectly formed
#bees
#senryu
#haiku
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SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
28th Jul 2021 12:38pm
28th Jul 2021 12:38pm
POSSIBLY A NOBLE SACRIFICE
I feel like a bee
That’s just had its guts spilled out—
To what end, unknown
That’s just had its guts spilled out—
To what end, unknown
#bees
#senryu
#sacrifice
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summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
18th Apr 2021 10:36pm
18th Apr 2021 10:36pm
~Sharbat Eyes..
Viz :: Sharbat Eyes
#love
#countryside
#spiritual
#bees
#sensual
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SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
11th Dec 2020 10:05pm
11th Dec 2020 10:05pm
APIARIOUS
There’s an apiary
Outside the office complex
Boxes stacked
Mismatched
Somehow still aligned
I can’t tell if it’s living or dead
The smell should give it away
I think
Sweet and bitter
Yes it reminds me of us
Outside the office complex
Boxes stacked
Mismatched
Somehow still aligned
I can’t tell if it’s living or dead
The smell should give it away
I think
Sweet and bitter
Yes it reminds me of us
#bees
#LongDistanceRelationship
#IMissYou
#separation
#symbolism
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AaHarvey
Poem Published
4th Dec 2020 11:18am
4th Dec 2020 11:18am
Humble B. Bumble : 33. Bee happy
With Blondebee Humble was always searching,
Forever looking for the answers;
But with Bee Bee it was easy learning,
He already knew she was his enchantress.
At last Humble knew what it was to bee loved.
Bee Bee, he knew, was truly good.
Life seemed so easy now with her heart.
He couldn’t beelieve the struggle had been so hard.
Every day they grew with each other.
First came the kiss and now they were lovers.
Forever bound to love eternal.
Epics would bee written in endless journals.
...
Forever looking for the answers;
But with Bee Bee it was easy learning,
He already knew she was his enchantress.
At last Humble knew what it was to bee loved.
Bee Bee, he knew, was truly good.
Life seemed so easy now with her heart.
He couldn’t beelieve the struggle had been so hard.
Every day they grew with each other.
First came the kiss and now they were lovers.
Forever bound to love eternal.
Epics would bee written in endless journals.
...
#love
#girlfriend
#relationships
#romantic
#bees
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AaHarvey
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2020 3:02pm
3rd Dec 2020 3:02pm
Humble B. Bumble : 31 You bee you and I'll be me
Lila the grasshopper was a chilled out lass.
Whenever there was tension, she would make them relax.
Her carefree soul meant she never felt bad,
And her friends all loved her, beecause she gave love back.
Other people would stress, trying to bee their best,
But Lila didn’t care about all that mess.
Take me as I am, she would always say,
And no matter what the story was,
She would always find a way,
To make people smile, even if it took a while.
Humble met her one day on his travels.
She was singing to a...
Whenever there was tension, she would make them relax.
Her carefree soul meant she never felt bad,
And her friends all loved her, beecause she gave love back.
Other people would stress, trying to bee their best,
But Lila didn’t care about all that mess.
Take me as I am, she would always say,
And no matter what the story was,
She would always find a way,
To make people smile, even if it took a while.
Humble met her one day on his travels.
She was singing to a...
#happiness
#love
#friendship
#peace
#bees
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AaHarvey
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2020 11:05am
2nd Dec 2020 11:05am
Humble B. Bumble : 25. Beeyond the joke!
Humble met up with his friends after work.
He had a big smile because he was thinking about her;
The bee he had kissed, remembering the bliss.
She said her name was Ever Queen.
As Humble was telling them what happened, Bee-Real said,
You know she’s got a boyfriend don’t ya? His name is Zed.
Humble’s heart sank and he said, Right! That’s it!
I’m no longer going out with anyone from this hive! I quit!
Oh come on Humble, said Blondebee.
I’m sure you’ll meet someone eventually.
Yeah right, I don’t think so, I’ll...
He had a big smile because he was thinking about her;
The bee he had kissed, remembering the bliss.
She said her name was Ever Queen.
As Humble was telling them what happened, Bee-Real said,
You know she’s got a boyfriend don’t ya? His name is Zed.
Humble’s heart sank and he said, Right! That’s it!
I’m no longer going out with anyone from this hive! I quit!
Oh come on Humble, said Blondebee.
I’m sure you’ll meet someone eventually.
Yeah right, I don’t think so, I’ll...
#sadness
#love
#bees
#despair
#passion
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AaHarvey
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2020 11:00am
2nd Dec 2020 11:00am
Humble B. Bumble : 19. Humble and Blondebee R.I.P.
Humble went out with Blondebee and tried to have fun.
He wanted to kiss her, but his heart was still young,
And he was too shy; she said she didn’t mind.
They spent time together and loved to fly.
They would hold each other’s hands,
And spin through the air together.
She was Humble’s first love and
He had hoped he could bee with her forever…
…but something was missing, he knew it too well.
The electricity wasn’t there, but he was afraid to tell.
They were both good friends and happy with each other,
But...
He wanted to kiss her, but his heart was still young,
And he was too shy; she said she didn’t mind.
They spent time together and loved to fly.
They would hold each other’s hands,
And spin through the air together.
She was Humble’s first love and
He had hoped he could bee with her forever…
…but something was missing, he knew it too well.
The electricity wasn’t there, but he was afraid to tell.
They were both good friends and happy with each other,
But...
#sadness
#love
#romantic
#bees
#FirstLove
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AaHarvey
Poem Published
1st Dec 2020 8:10pm
1st Dec 2020 8:10pm
Humble B. Bumble : 16. Beloved?
The third date was ok, Humble thought.
At least this time Blondebee didn’t look so bored.
She was up to her elbows in shopping bags.
Humble paid for the dinner and they had a laugh.
They ended the night on a triple date.
Bee-Real and Love-Bee and Tiny Dancer’s date was late,
So Tiny ended up talking to Blondebee until Buzzie arrived.
They all had fun and then they said their goodbyes.
Humble walked Blondebee home and wanted a kiss goodnight,
But she said “Er, excuse me, not tonight.”
She was his friend, so why couldn’t...
At least this time Blondebee didn’t look so bored.
She was up to her elbows in shopping bags.
Humble paid for the dinner and they had a laugh.
They ended the night on a triple date.
Bee-Real and Love-Bee and Tiny Dancer’s date was late,
So Tiny ended up talking to Blondebee until Buzzie arrived.
They all had fun and then they said their goodbyes.
Humble walked Blondebee home and wanted a kiss goodnight,
But she said “Er, excuse me, not tonight.”
She was his friend, so why couldn’t...
#love
#relationships
#bees
#FirstLove
#dating
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AaHarvey
Poem Published
1st Dec 2020 8:07pm
1st Dec 2020 8:07pm
Humble B. Bumble : 15. Unbeelievable!
Humble and Blondebee’s first date didn’t go with a bang.
He took her to the Kinema to see ‘Killer Bee’, aw man!
I can’t wait to see this film, it looks so cool!
It’s about an assassin who targets The Queen; it rules!
The two of them watched and Humble was amazed;
Blondebee unfortunately didn’t feel the same,
And as they were eating at the Nectar Queen,
Blondebee tore into the film,
And Humble couldn’t beelieve what he was hearing.
Surely you liked it? I loved it so much!
Sorry, I guess it’s a boy’s film, where...
He took her to the Kinema to see ‘Killer Bee’, aw man!
I can’t wait to see this film, it looks so cool!
It’s about an assassin who targets The Queen; it rules!
The two of them watched and Humble was amazed;
Blondebee unfortunately didn’t feel the same,
And as they were eating at the Nectar Queen,
Blondebee tore into the film,
And Humble couldn’t beelieve what he was hearing.
Surely you liked it? I loved it so much!
Sorry, I guess it’s a boy’s film, where...
#love
#relationships
#ShortStory
#bees
#dating
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