Poems About Beauty Seeking Honest Critique
#beauty
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 7:38pm
20th Sep 2024 7:38pm
My Snowflake Lover
This is something that was not planned
The moment you stood there and took my hand
I recall it well...
T'was the day the first snow fell
I was trembling inside, you see
I wasn't sure you were willing to be
With me on these cold winter nights
As I made love to you in the firelight
We both have a few years on us yet
Romance will never die with us, pet
You're so cute in the spring, such full of heart
Does your flavor then shift from sweet to tart?
You laugh and play as you allow me in
When it shows, you come out,...
The moment you stood there and took my hand
I recall it well...
T'was the day the first snow fell
I was trembling inside, you see
I wasn't sure you were willing to be
With me on these cold winter nights
As I made love to you in the firelight
We both have a few years on us yet
Romance will never die with us, pet
You're so cute in the spring, such full of heart
Does your flavor then shift from sweet to tart?
You laugh and play as you allow me in
When it shows, you come out,...
#beauty
#ILoveYou
#love
154 reads
26 Comments
Jammyjoe
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 2:03pm
19th Sep 2024 2:03pm
Hazel eyes
Those mesmerizing eyes, every hue of every tree in the forest
From the early light till night fall is met
Even made richer by the eclips in which they set
Those exquisite hazel eyes
Made of colorful tides
Where a kelidascope of natural beauty collides
So clear and blue
Like the first drop of morning dew
A river that flows non-stop
Or a beautiful rain drop
Grey as the clouds in storm
And in the light they transform
Into a cascading fog
One you might see on a morning jog
Green like moss by a flowing stream ...
From the early light till night fall is met
Even made richer by the eclips in which they set
Those exquisite hazel eyes
Made of colorful tides
Where a kelidascope of natural beauty collides
So clear and blue
Like the first drop of morning dew
A river that flows non-stop
Or a beautiful rain drop
Grey as the clouds in storm
And in the light they transform
Into a cascading fog
One you might see on a morning jog
Green like moss by a flowing stream ...
#beauty
#emotional
#lover
144 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Sep 2024 9:58pm
18th Sep 2024 9:58pm
She's No Longer An Ugly Duckling
It
was on
a Sunday
afternoon that
Holden spotted on
the beach and wearing a
red bikini the former
shy bookworm Eunice who looked like
she had gone through a transformation
while visiting an aunt in Malibu.
was on
a Sunday
afternoon that
Holden spotted on
the beach and wearing a
red bikini the former
shy bookworm Eunice who looked like
she had gone through a transformation
while visiting an aunt in Malibu.
#beach
#beauty
#fiction
#friendship
#summer
78 reads
0 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
18th Sep 2024 8:45pm
18th Sep 2024 8:45pm
Top of the Line (IG Version)
What is a Top of the Line Tar Baby?
She's a:
Melanin Rich
Absolutely Gorgeous
Perfectly Brown
Vision of Eye-Catching Chocolate Loveliness
Triple fudge brownie colored skin got me trippin!
Girl is fine for no reason other than to torment me
Leaving me breathless while effortlessly exuding her own brand of cocoa sweetness
Easily looking like everything I'd ever imagined a pretty woman would be
In a room filled with beautiful women
It is she who captures my attention
Her beauty,
is...
She's a:
Melanin Rich
Absolutely Gorgeous
Perfectly Brown
Vision of Eye-Catching Chocolate Loveliness
Triple fudge brownie colored skin got me trippin!
Girl is fine for no reason other than to torment me
Leaving me breathless while effortlessly exuding her own brand of cocoa sweetness
Easily looking like everything I'd ever imagined a pretty woman would be
In a room filled with beautiful women
It is she who captures my attention
Her beauty,
is...
#beauty
#happiness
#honesty #love
#honesty #love
140 reads
4 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 2:47pm
16th Sep 2024 2:47pm
Among Ancestors
In the quiet of rooms of ancestors, she lay naked face down,
a conduit between generations, breathing in the air
captured by walls her grandfather built
before her own mother's birth. Her legs dangled
silky smooth. They gleamed with a doll-like grace.
The boy standing next to the bed remembers the
knitting needles his grandmother once held.
Her body is an hourglass made of porcelain,
a figurine still in silent dance. Her back curves
gracefully, like a sand dune shaped by the wind,
tapering from her broad shoulders made strong...
a conduit between generations, breathing in the air
captured by walls her grandfather built
before her own mother's birth. Her legs dangled
silky smooth. They gleamed with a doll-like grace.
The boy standing next to the bed remembers the
knitting needles his grandmother once held.
Her body is an hourglass made of porcelain,
a figurine still in silent dance. Her back curves
gracefully, like a sand dune shaped by the wind,
tapering from her broad shoulders made strong...
#beauty
#family
#FirstLove #memories
#FirstLove #memories
193 reads
9 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 4:26pm
15th Sep 2024 4:26pm
Shelf Life
Pretty has a shelf life
Beauty never expires
Fashions change
Trends go away
Eyesight fades
Appreciation and adoration come from the soul;
and are felt even with one's eyes closed
Just like a faded rose pressed into a memory book,
all that looks good will one day lose its prettiness
Even the powerful fragrance that made one's head spin giddily
Will dissipate in time
But those incredible feelings
Inspired when these memories, which nourish and sustain your soul were formed,
Will always remain...
Beauty never expires
Fashions change
Trends go away
Eyesight fades
Appreciation and adoration come from the soul;
and are felt even with one's eyes closed
Just like a faded rose pressed into a memory book,
all that looks good will one day lose its prettiness
Even the powerful fragrance that made one's head spin giddily
Will dissipate in time
But those incredible feelings
Inspired when these memories, which nourish and sustain your soul were formed,
Will always remain...
#admiration
#beauty
#happiness
#love
#romantic
184 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 2:17am
15th Sep 2024 2:17am
Well? Don't You Want To Get It On With Me?
Kate saw Eric watching her.
She took off her top and jeans.
Then, she smiled at him.
She took off her top and jeans.
Then, she smiled at him.
#beauty
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
201 reads
0 Comments
Pratik
Poem Published
12th Sep 2024 7:10pm
12th Sep 2024 7:10pm
Jessy, My Uncontrollable Desire
Jessy, with that look in your eye,
You know exactly how you make me sigh.
That string so delicate on your skin,
My mind races, where do I begin?
Your curves, so perfect, a sight to behold,
I can’t control the thoughts I hold.
Every inch of you pulls me in tight,
Making me crave you through the night.
My bulge grows, hard to contain,
Thoughts of you drive me insane.
Jessy, you tease with that tempting glance,
I’m trapped in this fiery, lustful trance.
The way you look back, knowing you’ve won,
I’m ready for...
You know exactly how you make me sigh.
That string so delicate on your skin,
My mind races, where do I begin?
Your curves, so perfect, a sight to behold,
I can’t control the thoughts I hold.
Every inch of you pulls me in tight,
Making me crave you through the night.
My bulge grows, hard to contain,
Thoughts of you drive me insane.
Jessy, you tease with that tempting glance,
I’m trapped in this fiery, lustful trance.
The way you look back, knowing you’ve won,
I’m ready for...
#admiration
#beauty
227 reads
1 Comment
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 5:15am
10th Sep 2024 5:15am
Lily Tu
sweet and sexy man
you weren't expected but you are
a star rising in my skies
romancing the honesty
giggly girl, you have a way about you
your truths about me make me laugh
teaching me self acception
brewing something beautiful inside me
stripping my linger until I'm bare and blushing
covering myself with a shy smile
your knowledge of things surpasses mine
never one to second guess you
my hope is you will love me still
as you penetrate my soul
you're in murky waters now
my dark abyss nobody has ever...
you weren't expected but you are
a star rising in my skies
romancing the honesty
giggly girl, you have a way about you
your truths about me make me laugh
teaching me self acception
brewing something beautiful inside me
stripping my linger until I'm bare and blushing
covering myself with a shy smile
your knowledge of things surpasses mine
never one to second guess you
my hope is you will love me still
as you penetrate my soul
you're in murky waters now
my dark abyss nobody has ever...
#beauty
#romantic
177 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 2:20am
10th Sep 2024 2:20am
They Saw Each Other At Art Class
Sabrina dropped that one robe.
She looked over her shoulder at Richard.
They smiled at each other.
She looked over her shoulder at Richard.
They smiled at each other.
#art
#beauty
#fiction
#romantic
#school
127 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 3:03pm
8th Sep 2024 3:03pm
A Bittersweet Decision
Abigail finds out
that moving herself to San
Francisco for a
modeling assignment is
a bittersweet decision.
that moving herself to San
Francisco for a
modeling assignment is
a bittersweet decision.
#beauty
#city
#fiction
#freedom
#tanka
86 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 6:47pm
6th Sep 2024 6:47pm
bloom honey
satisfy the love cravings deep within
it's painfully true I love you
caress my hurt it's the most beautiful about me
listen to my refrains and let them lull you sexually
it always rains in the grey
giving me hope you are the sunshine that enters
the clouds depart and the flowers are ladies in waiting
opening up, faces turned towards you with smiles on their faces
the garden opens as they watch their mistress put on her finest
I'm dressed in blue just like you requested
innocent sitting by the sacred waters
you peel back my...
it's painfully true I love you
caress my hurt it's the most beautiful about me
listen to my refrains and let them lull you sexually
it always rains in the grey
giving me hope you are the sunshine that enters
the clouds depart and the flowers are ladies in waiting
opening up, faces turned towards you with smiles on their faces
the garden opens as they watch their mistress put on her finest
I'm dressed in blue just like you requested
innocent sitting by the sacred waters
you peel back my...
#beauty
#romantic
166 reads
5 Comments
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