Poems About Beauty Seeking Honest Critique
#beauty
MaliTaus
Mali Taus
Mali Taus
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 7:49pm
20th Oct 2024 7:49pm
Dance of the Seven Veils
#beauty
#erotic
#obsession
#sensual
#wife
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 7:53pm
19th Oct 2024 7:53pm
His Encounter With A Real Mermaid
Quinton stepped out of
the cabin and over to
the dock for a cool down swim.
But when he got there,
his eyes had grown wide at the
sight of a hot chick swimming.
That was before he
cleared his throat which made her look
over her shoulder at him.
And just as he was
about to say something to
her, that mermaid swam away.
the cabin and over to
the dock for a cool down swim.
But when he got there,
his eyes had grown wide at the
sight of a hot chick swimming.
That was before he
cleared his throat which made her look
over her shoulder at him.
And just as he was
about to say something to
her, that mermaid swam away.
#beauty
#fiction
#mermaids
#summer
#water
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oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 7:34am
18th Oct 2024 7:34am
Beauty Shell
Beauty shell
Ugly frame
Beauty shell
Ugly on display
Beauty in a shell
Nut comes out
Not so pretty
Not so pretty
Pretty ugly
Pretty ugly
Gorgeous in grace
Shameless displays
Puppet on string
Reeling daddy in
See beauty in her eyes
But her gaze can disguise
Pretty pumpkin on a shelf
Withers and dies on my cross
See light in her
But she dimmers
Takes me for a fool
Takes me back to school
Beauty in shards of glass ...
Ugly frame
Beauty shell
Ugly on display
Beauty in a shell
Nut comes out
Not so pretty
Not so pretty
Pretty ugly
Pretty ugly
Gorgeous in grace
Shameless displays
Puppet on string
Reeling daddy in
See beauty in her eyes
But her gaze can disguise
Pretty pumpkin on a shelf
Withers and dies on my cross
See light in her
But she dimmers
Takes me for a fool
Takes me back to school
Beauty in shards of glass ...
#beauty
#dark
#emptiness #vanity
#emptiness #vanity
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Northern1
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 3:18pm
17th Oct 2024 3:18pm
Heart
This weathered nation
My stormy heart
Your jagged mountains
These deep blue fjords
My raw wild homeland
Of fierce winter gales
Endless nights and days
I sing your praise
I love you
It is so
I need you
Don't you know
When I see you
I have to smile
When I sense you
I listen while
My heart beats
My stormy heart
Your jagged mountains
These deep blue fjords
My raw wild homeland
Of fierce winter gales
Endless nights and days
I sing your praise
I love you
It is so
I need you
Don't you know
When I see you
I have to smile
When I sense you
I listen while
My heart beats
#beauty
#home
#identity
83 reads
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Quizzy29
Tanzo Ellis
Tanzo Ellis
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 11:17am
16th Oct 2024 11:17am
Car viewed eye Candy selected
Before there was a seat to sit in you were comfortable walking.
We locked eyes with mutual intentions & we moved in.
Drove with sole independency actions became submissive w/o request.
Sit back & watch them look a bit harder on purpose & marvel.
No longer walking place to place & it’s just the tip of what berg.
Nothing to put the world at your feet but let world in & you’ll use your feet to walk.
(Driving past the passenger looking away)
We locked eyes with mutual intentions & we moved in.
Drove with sole independency actions became submissive w/o request.
Sit back & watch them look a bit harder on purpose & marvel.
No longer walking place to place & it’s just the tip of what berg.
Nothing to put the world at your feet but let world in & you’ll use your feet to walk.
(Driving past the passenger looking away)
#beauty
#cars
#gratitude #patience
#gratitude #patience
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oldmanG
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 6:35am
15th Oct 2024 6:35am
Gleam in an eye
Gleam in an eye
Words not spoken but felt
We walk out into a world without limits
First step out the door
See beauty of nature before you
But you’re too busy on a time schedule
So are they but our clocks seldom align
If you miss these moments you’ll regret it
Look up in the sky a Crow is haunting a Falcon
They dip and dive and we are in awe
Like watching the Red Baron chasing Snoopy
Seconds pass but the feeling of amazement lives
Hawk dives Crow falls off ...
Words not spoken but felt
We walk out into a world without limits
First step out the door
See beauty of nature before you
But you’re too busy on a time schedule
So are they but our clocks seldom align
If you miss these moments you’ll regret it
Look up in the sky a Crow is haunting a Falcon
They dip and dive and we are in awe
Like watching the Red Baron chasing Snoopy
Seconds pass but the feeling of amazement lives
Hawk dives Crow falls off ...
#beauty
#nature
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 9:46pm
14th Oct 2024 9:46pm
Autumn, a Painting of An Artist
Confusing thoughts in Fall, me ceased to stalk
worries into the heart, floated and stepped aside
wonders from afar spreading their smiles in a flock
along with October breeze, pleased to go for a hike.
Worries into the heart, floated and stepped aside
Autumn, enthroned in the soul empire, would set its fire
along with October breeze, pleased to go for a hike
walking paths trodden by shades of foliage, nothing dire.
Autumn, enthroned in the soul empire, would set its fire
a painting of no formal learning, that's Nature the...
worries into the heart, floated and stepped aside
wonders from afar spreading their smiles in a flock
along with October breeze, pleased to go for a hike.
Worries into the heart, floated and stepped aside
Autumn, enthroned in the soul empire, would set its fire
along with October breeze, pleased to go for a hike
walking paths trodden by shades of foliage, nothing dire.
Autumn, enthroned in the soul empire, would set its fire
a painting of no formal learning, that's Nature the...
#beauty
#fall
#MyInspiration
#nature
#spiritual
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LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 2:18pm
14th Oct 2024 2:18pm
John's Middle Daughter - True Crime #2 Eliminating Inheritance
When their spirit departs, they return to the ground;
on that very day their plans come to nothing. from Psalm 146
Since his middle daughter was mostly lanky legs and arms, I knew my position was important. I needed to be on her level to achieve the best view of her smallish center mass at the distance of two football fields.
She was beautiful, a cheerleader, and popular in her school. Her father said she had a steady boyfriend, and he knew they’d had sex. I took some comfort in knowing she’d known love in her life.
As she stood...
on that very day their plans come to nothing. from Psalm 146
Since his middle daughter was mostly lanky legs and arms, I knew my position was important. I needed to be on her level to achieve the best view of her smallish center mass at the distance of two football fields.
She was beautiful, a cheerleader, and popular in her school. Her father said she had a steady boyfriend, and he knew they’d had sex. I took some comfort in knowing she’d known love in her life.
As she stood...
#beauty
#death
#murder
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Pete_25
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 9:17am
13th Oct 2024 9:17am
Blue Jean
Fly, studs
Knee rips
Loose hands
Get to grips
Denim love
Wiggle walks
Derriere
Baby talks
Looking fine
So sublime
Blue Jean
Please be mine
Knee rips
Loose hands
Get to grips
Denim love
Wiggle walks
Derriere
Baby talks
Looking fine
So sublime
Blue Jean
Please be mine
#beauty
#love
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oldmanG
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 5:13am
13th Oct 2024 5:13am
A P B
This is an all points bulletin
Be on the look out for someone gorgeous
She’s is carrying my beating blood red heart
She is considered armed and glamorous
She stands 5 foot 6 and is decadent
But when she’s in my arms she’s dangerous
Like a 5 alarm fire in the car
She should be considered armed and glamorous
But when she’s with me she purrs like a kitten
I’m silly putty in her hands
I can’t see the stars beneath me
But I know the stars are in her eyes
Can’t get enough of the taste of her lips ...
Be on the look out for someone gorgeous
She’s is carrying my beating blood red heart
She is considered armed and glamorous
She stands 5 foot 6 and is decadent
But when she’s in my arms she’s dangerous
Like a 5 alarm fire in the car
She should be considered armed and glamorous
But when she’s with me she purrs like a kitten
I’m silly putty in her hands
I can’t see the stars beneath me
But I know the stars are in her eyes
Can’t get enough of the taste of her lips ...
#admiration
#beauty
#gratitude
#honesty
#romantic
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Poet__2248
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 7:44pm
12th Oct 2024 7:44pm
Complete
Maybe she will look at me
But i will not know enough to answer with a stare more intense than hers
So I will tear my heart from my ribs and hold it out for her
And she will sit oblivious like a child as i wait for her to take it
I will wait for a moment and then I will stuff it back into my body
before she can reach it
i will act, pretend she is a mere stranger and not the reason for my poorly stitched chest,
my heart a second away from being ripped out once more by my own hand for her
then shoved down my throat and eaten before she can hear the...
But i will not know enough to answer with a stare more intense than hers
So I will tear my heart from my ribs and hold it out for her
And she will sit oblivious like a child as i wait for her to take it
I will wait for a moment and then I will stuff it back into my body
before she can reach it
i will act, pretend she is a mere stranger and not the reason for my poorly stitched chest,
my heart a second away from being ripped out once more by my own hand for her
then shoved down my throat and eaten before she can hear the...
#admiration
#anxiety
#beauty
#love
#romantic
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oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 12:58pm
12th Oct 2024 12:58pm
Mr Confidence (little schoolboy)
Mr confidence little schoolboy
Who are you discovering
Your true self or a parade of lies
Sit by the beating heart of my being
Pulse quickens blood restricts
Walking with my princess
But I’m a hollow shell
Fake a laugh
When all I want to say is
Run away with me
On a beach for two
With a fuzzy drink and umbrella
Had my chance
Struck out looking
Didn’t swing the bat
Take my best chance to show her
Kicking up dust
On the way back to the dugout
Spit on...
Who are you discovering
Your true self or a parade of lies
Sit by the beating heart of my being
Pulse quickens blood restricts
Walking with my princess
But I’m a hollow shell
Fake a laugh
When all I want to say is
Run away with me
On a beach for two
With a fuzzy drink and umbrella
Had my chance
Struck out looking
Didn’t swing the bat
Take my best chance to show her
Kicking up dust
On the way back to the dugout
Spit on...
#beauty
#crush
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
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