Poems About Beauty Seeking Honest Critique
#beauty
VIRGINITY
With such class and sheer elegance
Her demeanor called for reverence.
Like winter-white fresh-fallen snow
Her nudity covering [skin] reflected a radiant glow.
Wholesome and complete, her barren womb
Fertile-ready for a love seed to bloom
When the time be right
And when glistening stars would shine bright.
There she walked with a humble stride
Simple with every step and soft strides of an innocent bride
Her body full of radiant light
The winter-white virgin is her husband’s delight.
Pure and transparent as summer rain
Her...
Her demeanor called for reverence.
Like winter-white fresh-fallen snow
Her nudity covering [skin] reflected a radiant glow.
Wholesome and complete, her barren womb
Fertile-ready for a love seed to bloom
When the time be right
And when glistening stars would shine bright.
There she walked with a humble stride
Simple with every step and soft strides of an innocent bride
Her body full of radiant light
The winter-white virgin is her husband’s delight.
Pure and transparent as summer rain
Her...
#admiration
#beauty
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#husband
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Girl of the Night
A girl with a smile, never a frown,
Lived a life full and sweet,
Gone too soon, her youth was crowned
Where the lanes and dreams of children meet,
In the tender, dark folds of the night.
Her laughter, a melody true and bright,
By night beneath the sky, she gave her best,
With her love, many men were blessed,
Lived a life full and sweet,
Gone too soon, her youth was crowned
Where the lanes and dreams of children meet,
In the tender, dark folds of the night.
Her laughter, a melody true and bright,
By night beneath the sky, she gave her best,
With her love, many men were blessed,
#beauty
#sex
#teens
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cherish
little hope in expression of dreams
to live in the light of exploration
reaching heights unseen
in my mind rise
it is with great desire I reach out
delving into spirit of the unknown
sacred art in understanding
to live is to grow
secret faith is to listen
to whipering souls with knowledge
sanctifying my body in all I do
simple pleasures are embraced
and I realize life is good
not to be taken for granted
breathe into the day inspiration
and be filled on the wonderments the world has to offer ...
to live in the light of exploration
reaching heights unseen
in my mind rise
it is with great desire I reach out
delving into spirit of the unknown
sacred art in understanding
to live is to grow
secret faith is to listen
to whipering souls with knowledge
sanctifying my body in all I do
simple pleasures are embraced
and I realize life is good
not to be taken for granted
breathe into the day inspiration
and be filled on the wonderments the world has to offer ...
#beauty
#humankind
#love #spiritual
#love #spiritual
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They Asked For It Big
Do
you like
what I have
on? I bought this
outfit to show them
that I'm no longer the
geeky bookworm that they had
been making fun of back at the
days in college. What? Those bitches by the
pool are jealous? Good. They asked for it big.
you like
what I have
on? I bought this
outfit to show them
that I'm no longer the
geeky bookworm that they had
been making fun of back at the
days in college. What? Those bitches by the
pool are jealous? Good. They asked for it big.
#beauty
#dialogue
#fiction
#success
#summer
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delicate
delicate dreamer in love with the sunshine
drifting on a cloud leaving the world below me
chaos travels with me he is a part of me
mischief smiles and I laugh
tender understanding, I created them from my imagination
my racous boys who watch out for me
studious grief, they get angry when i am sad
we rise higher on the air
leaving misfits of faith behind
they will never know the creator
who relishes people's fear
he eats its taste, as a delicacy
my immortal sons rectify for me
giving him what he longs for, a...
drifting on a cloud leaving the world below me
chaos travels with me he is a part of me
mischief smiles and I laugh
tender understanding, I created them from my imagination
my racous boys who watch out for me
studious grief, they get angry when i am sad
we rise higher on the air
leaving misfits of faith behind
they will never know the creator
who relishes people's fear
he eats its taste, as a delicacy
my immortal sons rectify for me
giving him what he longs for, a...
#beauty
#love
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A little secrect on the bench
I’ve always loved wearing short skirts to college. They make me feel confident, playful, and, let’s be honest, a little bit of a tease. Today was no different—I had on my favorite short skirt, paired with a cute top, feeling good as I walked into class.
Since all the benches were full, I had to sit next to a guy who seemed a little shy. From the moment I sat down, I could tell he wasn’t entirely comfortable. He kept shifting in his seat, avoiding eye contact, and stealing quick glances at my legs whenever he thought I wasn’t looking. It was adorable, really.
As the...
Since all the benches were full, I had to sit next to a guy who seemed a little shy. From the moment I sat down, I could tell he wasn’t entirely comfortable. He kept shifting in his seat, avoiding eye contact, and stealing quick glances at my legs whenever he thought I wasn’t looking. It was adorable, really.
As the...
#admiration
#beauty
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My Pythoness
She was on me, like white on rice,
as an anatomic workhorse,
in each position, at least twice,
of exhilarating intercourse;
a life of it well spent and met
from camping tent and pickup truck,
with sweet cowgirl reversal sweat
at every discrete cloister fuck...
up by the helianthus blooms
or under the midsummer moon
where all hot love so richly flumes,
to fill her chalice, or festoon...
those comely targets of the dart
that...
as an anatomic workhorse,
in each position, at least twice,
of exhilarating intercourse;
a life of it well spent and met
from camping tent and pickup truck,
with sweet cowgirl reversal sweat
at every discrete cloister fuck...
up by the helianthus blooms
or under the midsummer moon
where all hot love so richly flumes,
to fill her chalice, or festoon...
those comely targets of the dart
that...
#beauty
#love
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Two Cats
In the soft glow of evening
two cats lie together.
Their breaths steady
tails gently twitching in dreams.
Their whiskers quiver,
paws knead the air,
murmurs of sleep talk
escape their parted lips.
One purrs deeply,
a sound like distant thunder.
The other replies,
a softer rhythmic hum.
Their bodies rise and fall
with each contented sigh,
In this tranquil moment
all is almost quiet and serene.
You watch over them,
heart swelling with love,
Each sound, each movement, ...
two cats lie together.
Their breaths steady
tails gently twitching in dreams.
Their whiskers quiver,
paws knead the air,
murmurs of sleep talk
escape their parted lips.
One purrs deeply,
a sound like distant thunder.
The other replies,
a softer rhythmic hum.
Their bodies rise and fall
with each contented sigh,
In this tranquil moment
all is almost quiet and serene.
You watch over them,
heart swelling with love,
Each sound, each movement, ...
#beauty
#cats
#dreams
#love
#sleep
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To Love the Tsunami
It's been years
Since the solitude and still waters of my body met his
His social warmth and plummeting waves
refreshing to my little puddle
A saltless ocean I can't help but sink in
I can still unearth admiration in observing him
His weathered and adorned hot-glued framed glasses
Their fragile state taken back again and again
No matter how many times their nose-bridge spine snaps
or its stretched arms loses the tiniest screw I have ever seen
...
Since the solitude and still waters of my body met his
His social warmth and plummeting waves
refreshing to my little puddle
A saltless ocean I can't help but sink in
I can still unearth admiration in observing him
His weathered and adorned hot-glued framed glasses
Their fragile state taken back again and again
No matter how many times their nose-bridge spine snaps
or its stretched arms loses the tiniest screw I have ever seen
...
#admiration
#beauty
#FirstLove
#love
#relationships
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Ah do
Yes, I’d love to tell you that I do
And I'd love to make you my boo; without further ado
Through fire and ice; we’ll see it through
A love reborn; both bold and new
Your touch ignites like morning’s hue
A blaze of passion; fierce and due.
No shadow falls where your light grew
The world revolves; yet rests on you.
With every step; my soul imbues
A rhythm synced; to love’s own cues.
The storms may rise; the winds may bruise
But I stand firm; I cannot lose.
Your voice; a symphony that woos
A melody...
And I'd love to make you my boo; without further ado
Through fire and ice; we’ll see it through
A love reborn; both bold and new
Your touch ignites like morning’s hue
A blaze of passion; fierce and due.
No shadow falls where your light grew
The world revolves; yet rests on you.
With every step; my soul imbues
A rhythm synced; to love’s own cues.
The storms may rise; the winds may bruise
But I stand firm; I cannot lose.
Your voice; a symphony that woos
A melody...
#beauty
#love
#romantic #UnrequitedLove
#romantic #UnrequitedLove
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A Poem for My Ex-wife
Ping Ling, what made you love me the way you did?
You didn’t hesitate to say yes the evening I proposed to you.
And you quickly put the engagement ring on your finger.
You knew that I loved you as must as you loved me.
We vowed to stay with each other until death separated us.
Never did we think our marriage would end in divorce.
Though many years have passed, I won’t stop missing you.
I’ll still love you, no matter how long we stay apart.
Every time I look at our wedding picture, my heart aches for you.
When we became one flesh,...
You didn’t hesitate to say yes the evening I proposed to you.
And you quickly put the engagement ring on your finger.
You knew that I loved you as must as you loved me.
We vowed to stay with each other until death separated us.
Never did we think our marriage would end in divorce.
Though many years have passed, I won’t stop missing you.
I’ll still love you, no matter how long we stay apart.
Every time I look at our wedding picture, my heart aches for you.
When we became one flesh,...
#beauty
#dreams
#love
#marriage
#memories
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Full Moon ín Love
Once in a month I cry for your love
Without words but loud and clear
Don't look around you, I'm not here
Find me high in the sky above
Sometimes I reach out for you
My moonbeam fingers stroke your fur
Until almost like a cat you purr
And I feel that you love me too
Protected by the velvety night
I kiss you soft and tender
Caress you with my splendor
Your yellow eyes reflect my light
Tonight you'll throw back your head
And howl a sweet melody to me
I blush with delight can you see
My moon face is...
Without words but loud and clear
Don't look around you, I'm not here
Find me high in the sky above
Sometimes I reach out for you
My moonbeam fingers stroke your fur
Until almost like a cat you purr
And I feel that you love me too
Protected by the velvety night
I kiss you soft and tender
Caress you with my splendor
Your yellow eyes reflect my light
Tonight you'll throw back your head
And howl a sweet melody to me
I blush with delight can you see
My moon face is...
#beauty
#ILoveYou
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