Poems About Taoism Seeking Honest Critique
#Taoism
drone
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 11:44am
13th Sep 2024 11:44am
Inside Your Soul
Can one
Touch Base
With One's
Own
Personal
Jesus
Without
The Psychological Crutch
Of a Mouth piece
On a Pulpit
Touch Base
With One's
Own
Personal
Jesus
Without
The Psychological Crutch
Of a Mouth piece
On a Pulpit
#Buddhist
#Christian
#Hindu
#prayer
#Taoism
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prometheus5290
Poem Published
24th Aug 2024 12:22pm
24th Aug 2024 12:22pm
Dragon Girl*
Student ask master, “Master, you abide in mind-realm-beyond-mind-realm-mind, can woman abide in mind-realm-beyond-mind-realm-mind too?”
Before master reply, ground all around shake and ground between student and master expand into enormous crevice and lotus flower emerge from crevice with petal grow past sky and stop there with petal past sky, stem from sky limit to ground limit, and root must be below. In stem, Dragon Girl look like practice fighting and say, “he, ha, you sir, of course women can abide, ha, hrggg, since I am only 9*, and I abide. hmphh”
“Master girl, if abide,...
Before master reply, ground all around shake and ground between student and master expand into enormous crevice and lotus flower emerge from crevice with petal grow past sky and stop there with petal past sky, stem from sky limit to ground limit, and root must be below. In stem, Dragon Girl look like practice fighting and say, “he, ha, you sir, of course women can abide, ha, hrggg, since I am only 9*, and I abide. hmphh”
“Master girl, if abide,...
#CallToAction
#meditation
#Taoism
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prometheus5290
Poem Published
8th Aug 2024 4:06pm
8th Aug 2024 4:06pm
The kee beeper and the bee keeper
Yesterday,
I saved a bee from a fountain,
and it stayed in my hand until it was dry enough to fly away.
I would still save them all,
even if they all stung me.
I saved a bee from a fountain,
and it stayed in my hand until it was dry enough to fly away.
I would still save them all,
even if they all stung me.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
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4 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 3:27am
14th Jun 2024 3:27am
INSERT, POP-UP, REFLUX - PAUSE (12:30am, 7-3-2010; Palm Springs, California)
each day
i live
i see
i feel
i sense
i know
sometimes even
back and forth
a little more
a little less
through days
through weeks
through months
through years
i wake
to the east
spread roots
to the south
dream
to the west
gain strength
insight
wisdom
and power
from the north
when and with
my feet are in the earth
my head in the clouds
my heart in the sea
and my mind
my spirit
and being
are all filled
with radiant
life giving...
i live
i see
i feel
i sense
i know
sometimes even
back and forth
a little more
a little less
through days
through weeks
through months
through years
i wake
to the east
spread roots
to the south
dream
to the west
gain strength
insight
wisdom
and power
from the north
when and with
my feet are in the earth
my head in the clouds
my heart in the sea
and my mind
my spirit
and being
are all filled
with radiant
life giving...
#Buddhist
#Christian
#Hindu
#spiritual
#Taoism
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prometheus5290
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 12:03pm
12th Apr 2024 12:03pm
Temporary Delay
I went to build a cairn
but could not get to where I know the rocks are.
Usually, a mandala is constructed
before we act like it never existed.
but could not get to where I know the rocks are.
Usually, a mandala is constructed
before we act like it never existed.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
176 reads
7 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
25th Jan 2024 4:56pm
25th Jan 2024 4:56pm
Weight Loss
Since we don't own anything anyway,
Can't take it with us when we die
Or just go anywhere outside the home,
Sell or give to charity or someone who will use it
Everything that you
do not need
do not use
do not want
that does not bring you joy,
and you will suddenly feel
Lighter,
Lightly,
More like light.
Can't take it with us when we die
Or just go anywhere outside the home,
Sell or give to charity or someone who will use it
Everything that you
do not need
do not use
do not want
that does not bring you joy,
and you will suddenly feel
Lighter,
Lightly,
More like light.
#happiness
#Buddhist
#Taoism
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13 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
17th Jan 2024 1:15am
17th Jan 2024 1:15am
I died that already
Be a good student...
I died that already.
Be an athlete...
I died that already.
Be a tutor/professor/educator...
I died that already.
Be an operations manager...
I died that already.
When I chose there was nothing to be,
I achieved immortality.
I died that already.
Be an athlete...
I died that already.
Be a tutor/professor/educator...
I died that already.
Be an operations manager...
I died that already.
When I chose there was nothing to be,
I achieved immortality.
#Buddhist
#SelfReflection
#Taoism
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfWorth
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11 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
8th Jan 2024 3:54pm
8th Jan 2024 3:54pm
Light Years
Light Years
The farthest back I can remember, there were already forms…forms, faces, locations. I remember seeing them and watching them like I was a viewer with no body of my own. It all felt familiar but mostly random. The people and the places didn’t seem to match and would often switch without reason. I remember feeling very strong connections to many of the images I saw, but I cannot refine a memory to a particular emotional reaction to a particular scenario.
I have no way to measure how long things went on like that, but, eventually, the forms and faces and...
The farthest back I can remember, there were already forms…forms, faces, locations. I remember seeing them and watching them like I was a viewer with no body of my own. It all felt familiar but mostly random. The people and the places didn’t seem to match and would often switch without reason. I remember feeling very strong connections to many of the images I saw, but I cannot refine a memory to a particular emotional reaction to a particular scenario.
I have no way to measure how long things went on like that, but, eventually, the forms and faces and...
#universe
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#philosophical
#scifi
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1 Comment
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
15th Nov 2023 7:01pm
15th Nov 2023 7:01pm
I'm Hebrew!!
I'm Hebrew a nation of people who's been treated unfair!!
In a world 🌎 were everyone's looking to prosper an gain dwelling in sin, without feelings and emotions or remorse to even care!!
Because being labeled as people behind two continents or even a color, now amongst the civilized, now our culture and brilliant minds your able to share!!
To the world 🌎 like precious jewels gems 💎 stones, pearl's and diamonds 💎 with no rewards being given or any thoughts of coming close to even being compared!!
Next to those whose...
In a world 🌎 were everyone's looking to prosper an gain dwelling in sin, without feelings and emotions or remorse to even care!!
Because being labeled as people behind two continents or even a color, now amongst the civilized, now our culture and brilliant minds your able to share!!
To the world 🌎 like precious jewels gems 💎 stones, pearl's and diamonds 💎 with no rewards being given or any thoughts of coming close to even being compared!!
Next to those whose...
#religion
#Christian
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#prayer
336 reads
7 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
26th Oct 2023 1:04pm
26th Oct 2023 1:04pm
Anything Is Attemptable
Right now,
Tao
are all confused at us.
Tao provide the openness to try anything
and see what we repeatedly choose to do to ourselves.
Tao
are all confused at us.
Tao provide the openness to try anything
and see what we repeatedly choose to do to ourselves.
#spiritual
#humankind
#Taoism #freedom
#Taoism #freedom
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1 Comment
prometheus5290
Poem Published
20th Sep 2023 2:47pm
20th Sep 2023 2:47pm
Zen Master
The lessonless teacher has
nothing
to teach,
but only encourages there is
nothing
to reach.
nothing
to teach,
but only encourages there is
nothing
to reach.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
228 reads
4 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
29th Jul 2023 1:53pm
29th Jul 2023 1:53pm
Eternal
The universe did not begin...
It has always been.
It has always been.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
212 reads
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