Poems About J R R Tolkien Seeking Honest Critique
#JRRTolkien
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
19th Jan 2022 8:52am
19th Jan 2022 8:52am
Living the Eru
The void before it all was twisting,
where all was undifferentiated.
It was so hollow and slow, consisting
of pre-existance non enunciated.
Not like the void now, blackness creative.
That abyss was the loneliest feeling.
In Melkor rose an impetus imperative,
despite how tired it made his being.
What an irony, isn't it? No, it's beyond.
He stared emptily "If I enter now,
I won't return." Loveless, he does have a bond
and actually amour, with family vowed.
He loves the void, indeed he ever does.
But this is...
where all was undifferentiated.
It was so hollow and slow, consisting
of pre-existance non enunciated.
Not like the void now, blackness creative.
That abyss was the loneliest feeling.
In Melkor rose an impetus imperative,
despite how tired it made his being.
What an irony, isn't it? No, it's beyond.
He stared emptily "If I enter now,
I won't return." Loveless, he does have a bond
and actually amour, with family vowed.
He loves the void, indeed he ever does.
But this is...
#love
#loneliness
#God
#spiritual
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
9th Dec 2021 1:13pm
9th Dec 2021 1:13pm
Sauron, If your eyes were a...
What are you doing?" He appeared.
I was taken by surprise and shock.
I have never seen his attire near
such a vengeance passionate, I'm struck.
I knew he's evil.
I knew he's blood pitch red.
Yet he's differently lethal
around my presence, or in bed.
So far he's been gentle.
Understanding, subtle like a feather.
Today I saw him mental,
his fire, fierce lava, in raw leather.
The black and golden ornaments.
This eye-consuming vivid hair,
beauty unutterable, for his hands
are merciless, My Cruel Honey...
I was taken by surprise and shock.
I have never seen his attire near
such a vengeance passionate, I'm struck.
I knew he's evil.
I knew he's blood pitch red.
Yet he's differently lethal
around my presence, or in bed.
So far he's been gentle.
Understanding, subtle like a feather.
Today I saw him mental,
his fire, fierce lava, in raw leather.
The black and golden ornaments.
This eye-consuming vivid hair,
beauty unutterable, for his hands
are merciless, My Cruel Honey...
#love
#murder
#evil
#passion
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
8th Dec 2021 12:06pm
8th Dec 2021 12:06pm
Maislovaaron Navsegbogdaiar
Hello there, Fair face!"
I smirked with hidden intent;
"Did you finally destroy the race
of Arda that Mordor-wise went?"
But Annatar's insidious.
He plays around with all figures
of Middle Earth's chessboard, so serious.
He always observes and triggers
scenarios, where he gives some hints;
Oh, how does he enjoy their strategies,
when they strive to save their lifes, he wins.
Oh, the bliss of them bloody flatteries.
Will they find their way out?
Ever wondering why he hidden remains?
Why to...
I smirked with hidden intent;
"Did you finally destroy the race
of Arda that Mordor-wise went?"
But Annatar's insidious.
He plays around with all figures
of Middle Earth's chessboard, so serious.
He always observes and triggers
scenarios, where he gives some hints;
Oh, how does he enjoy their strategies,
when they strive to save their lifes, he wins.
Oh, the bliss of them bloody flatteries.
Will they find their way out?
Ever wondering why he hidden remains?
Why to...
#love
#marriage
#evil
#fate
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
13th Nov 2021 8:20pm
13th Nov 2021 8:20pm
Unless I go blind
Is it eyes that the first instance gifted?
Or it was a vision percieving itself solely...
In front, a Flame Imperishable shifted
and twisted its unknownness how... holily?
There is a spark in it, causing benediction.
Otherwise it wouldn't have a starting point..
It would be a ghostly unachieved prediction
that the Fourth attempt would disappoint.
Isn't our God the fourth attempt?
The Trinity that we rever like love,
the very own immortality, exempt
from death of falling apart, unworthy of.
Isn't it a paradox? ...
Or it was a vision percieving itself solely...
In front, a Flame Imperishable shifted
and twisted its unknownness how... holily?
There is a spark in it, causing benediction.
Otherwise it wouldn't have a starting point..
It would be a ghostly unachieved prediction
that the Fourth attempt would disappoint.
Isn't our God the fourth attempt?
The Trinity that we rever like love,
the very own immortality, exempt
from death of falling apart, unworthy of.
Isn't it a paradox? ...
#identity
#science
#God
#astronomy
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
29th Aug 2021 7:13pm
29th Aug 2021 7:13pm
Who's Eru Iluvatar?
Tell me, who is Eru the Creator?"
Who has ever heard of him?
Vague memories gave air to
a space where the faded could sing,
to create a world of itself's perfection,
nothing could repeat the landscape,
therefore, Eru's a Son Co-Ordinating the action
point of the progressive attainment of fate.
"Let's make a mortal of our image Own"
The Father, the Son and the Spirit Holy proclaimed.
The paradise son promised before the Father's throne
to protect his realm from rebellions disdained.
Therefore, if we think...
Who has ever heard of him?
Vague memories gave air to
a space where the faded could sing,
to create a world of itself's perfection,
nothing could repeat the landscape,
therefore, Eru's a Son Co-Ordinating the action
point of the progressive attainment of fate.
"Let's make a mortal of our image Own"
The Father, the Son and the Spirit Holy proclaimed.
The paradise son promised before the Father's throne
to protect his realm from rebellions disdained.
Therefore, if we think...
#religion
#God
#spiritual
#heaven
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
26th Aug 2021 9:41am
26th Aug 2021 9:41am
The 4th attempt of the Real to accomplish Creation
"Morgoth" I uttered first,
tears reflected starlight in my eyes.
"Your crown - it is the Absolute curse"
I thought but never told him he's wise.
"Without your dream, my death is certain"
I pledged while roaming in the sea.
The Real has only one and fourth attempt to live - and it's thy burden,
but empirical deeds do upheave.
I've been pulsating with frustration.
It is not God but the divine,
and the three attempts failed to create Creation
but Morgoth...
tears reflected starlight in my eyes.
"Your crown - it is the Absolute curse"
I thought but never told him he's wise.
"Without your dream, my death is certain"
I pledged while roaming in the sea.
The Real has only one and fourth attempt to live - and it's thy burden,
but empirical deeds do upheave.
I've been pulsating with frustration.
It is not God but the divine,
and the three attempts failed to create Creation
but Morgoth...
#God
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#SelfDiscovery
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
7th Jun 2021 8:35pm
7th Jun 2021 8:35pm
Finrod Felagund
Shadow laying blame unfathomed,
yet life still has to be lived;
when a deed's been done by a brothered,
probably you won't upheave...
A curse on your kin is still there,
even if you indirectly are involved,
the lingering sensation do you bear
for the Doom of the Noldor is foretold.
You must have a strong heart.
Separation of the family crestfallen
weighs on the smiles from the day's start;
yet you have the strength to call in
choice ~ is it the beloved elleth
or your people shamefully exiled?
You shall...
yet life still has to be lived;
when a deed's been done by a brothered,
probably you won't upheave...
A curse on your kin is still there,
even if you indirectly are involved,
the lingering sensation do you bear
for the Doom of the Noldor is foretold.
You must have a strong heart.
Separation of the family crestfallen
weighs on the smiles from the day's start;
yet you have the strength to call in
choice ~ is it the beloved elleth
or your people shamefully exiled?
You shall...
#sadness
#love
#friendship
#dreams
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
30th May 2021 12:47pm
30th May 2021 12:47pm
You are the Scariest of All Them Evil Ones, Annatar!
Trumpets blare in the distance,
Sauron is smirking without heart,
cruel plans to burn that resistance
with unimmaginable darkened art.
Oh, what is it to be an Eye AllSeeing
to gather all connections there are,
but not to help them, never freeing.
Just ways to torture eternally in war.
Not even war, it is a prison,
where he'd abduct all innocent folks.
I saw it myself, it's beyond seen reasons,
he'd really unleash a portal to his brutal jokes.
Laugh now, my cutthroat Anniechlem.
I love your merciless and bloody...
Sauron is smirking without heart,
cruel plans to burn that resistance
with unimmaginable darkened art.
Oh, what is it to be an Eye AllSeeing
to gather all connections there are,
but not to help them, never freeing.
Just ways to torture eternally in war.
Not even war, it is a prison,
where he'd abduct all innocent folks.
I saw it myself, it's beyond seen reasons,
he'd really unleash a portal to his brutal jokes.
Laugh now, my cutthroat Anniechlem.
I love your merciless and bloody...
#dark
#evil
#nightmares
#fear
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
9th May 2021 6:03pm
9th May 2021 6:03pm
The Eternal Ring of the One
Clenching, flame splashes bursting,
melting lava everywhere,
Maia spirit, chaos clusters, churning
all golden and fiery glares.
What it is to be the One?
It is the Absolute (DESTROYS!)
It is Varda but GODDAMN!
Mairon is part of the DECOYS.
Can this One imitate her light?
But we shall become the Absolute,
God is not only Manwe's Ray bright
but it contains all emanations, even brute.
Therefore, until you accept it
that we are the same as the evil,
we cannot be the link, but wept, lit,
and...
melting lava everywhere,
Maia spirit, chaos clusters, churning
all golden and fiery glares.
What it is to be the One?
It is the Absolute (DESTROYS!)
It is Varda but GODDAMN!
Mairon is part of the DECOYS.
Can this One imitate her light?
But we shall become the Absolute,
God is not only Manwe's Ray bright
but it contains all emanations, even brute.
Therefore, until you accept it
that we are the same as the evil,
we cannot be the link, but wept, lit,
and...
#love
#God
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
8th May 2021 2:26pm
8th May 2021 2:26pm
The Shadow In Fingon's Heart
Fingon, why you're ill?"
I whispered, caring for his health.
Did I sense a shadow's chills,
for it silently and moistly dwelt...
I always sensed this faithful hope,
the Finwe house was prior to the Ring,
the Eternal Now ends as a suicide rope?
But Fingon's blessed, angelic wings...
No, Time leaks everywhere ~
forward and backwards as a curse ~
I don't want to see you, elve, there...
where Sauron would do the worst.
Please immediately heal.
Right before my eyes...
It may be the empirical will.
Before...
I whispered, caring for his health.
Did I sense a shadow's chills,
for it silently and moistly dwelt...
I always sensed this faithful hope,
the Finwe house was prior to the Ring,
the Eternal Now ends as a suicide rope?
But Fingon's blessed, angelic wings...
No, Time leaks everywhere ~
forward and backwards as a curse ~
I don't want to see you, elve, there...
where Sauron would do the worst.
Please immediately heal.
Right before my eyes...
It may be the empirical will.
Before...
#hope
#evil
#utopia
#illness
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
7th May 2021 7:51pm
7th May 2021 7:51pm
Burzum to Me, You, Bloody Sauron!
Sauron?" I asked in doubt,
as it doubt has always been;
my intestines bloody shout
that there's one thing I've seen
in the Ring that you've inserted
One disgusting part of yourself
the essence of a girl that's perverted
but not In May Way, you shadowing elf.
It is everything that ruins my world
one chemical substance so girly
it just wants to smash me and hurt
my alchemy of everything - so surely.
I don't want to change you at all.
Not to purify you, or serious make your doom.
I can see behind your eyes...
as it doubt has always been;
my intestines bloody shout
that there's one thing I've seen
in the Ring that you've inserted
One disgusting part of yourself
the essence of a girl that's perverted
but not In May Way, you shadowing elf.
It is everything that ruins my world
one chemical substance so girly
it just wants to smash me and hurt
my alchemy of everything - so surely.
I don't want to change you at all.
Not to purify you, or serious make your doom.
I can see behind your eyes...
#love
#corruption
#evil
#TruthOfLife
#JRRTolkien
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AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2021 11:05am
22nd Apr 2021 11:05am
Manwe meets Merihkene
Underneath a clouded sky
where no one ever lies
what does Light deny
it accepts humbly and tries
not to feel so broken
in the heart, as he was hurt
by cutting trees so smoken
as Valinor was now injured.
"Have you ever p-protected?"
he gently uttered as a bunny-
bird that was neglected;
He would expect the love so honey
to flow in his Creations;
unbreakable and ever lively
touched by damnations?
What the reason might be?
I thought... life is eternal.
But Life eternal is.
Just some...
where no one ever lies
what does Light deny
it accepts humbly and tries
not to feel so broken
in the heart, as he was hurt
by cutting trees so smoken
as Valinor was now injured.
"Have you ever p-protected?"
he gently uttered as a bunny-
bird that was neglected;
He would expect the love so honey
to flow in his Creations;
unbreakable and ever lively
touched by damnations?
What the reason might be?
I thought... life is eternal.
But Life eternal is.
Just some...
#courage
#power
#inspirational
#God
#JRRTolkien
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