Christmas Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#Christmas
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 2:03am
26th Dec 2024 2:03am
Traveling Across The Miles By Train
It was while they were
traveling across the miles
by train after spending
Christmas with her family
that Elizabeth and her
roommate Judy got turned
on, stripped down and
kissed and touched each
other all over until they
reached the peak of
orgasm and collapsed.
traveling across the miles
by train after spending
Christmas with her family
that Elizabeth and her
roommate Judy got turned
on, stripped down and
kissed and touched each
other all over until they
reached the peak of
orgasm and collapsed.
#Christmas
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#lesbian
#sex
137 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 3:09pm
25th Dec 2024 3:09pm
The One Holiday Gift I'm Unable To Return
She stood by the tree.
She wore red lingerie with three bows.
She lets me pick one.
She wore red lingerie with three bows.
She lets me pick one.
#Christmas
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#seductive
135 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 12:03pm
25th Dec 2024 12:03pm
The Guiding Light
He went for his daily walk like he did every morning around 9:00 am
Today was Xmas
The weather was overcast with some light flurries
His wife was home and they will be spending Xmas with her parents today
His mother died 10 years ago
He hasn't spoken to his father since the time of her passing
They haven't seen eye to eye for many years prior, but once she died, they stopped talking
His mother was a caring, full of life individual that was taken to early
He wasn't the religious type
He would never go and visit her in the cemetery, which was only...
Today was Xmas
The weather was overcast with some light flurries
His wife was home and they will be spending Xmas with her parents today
His mother died 10 years ago
He hasn't spoken to his father since the time of her passing
They haven't seen eye to eye for many years prior, but once she died, they stopped talking
His mother was a caring, full of life individual that was taken to early
He wasn't the religious type
He would never go and visit her in the cemetery, which was only...
#Christmas
#family
#LifeChangingMoment
#love
#spiritual
66 reads
12 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 6:01am
25th Dec 2024 6:01am
A Merry Metal Xmas
Merry Christmas, to all the poets/poetesses here at DU. This year was only the beginning, folks. Seems arriving here has put some wind in the sails of my creative journey. That was my Christmas gift, I received from my fellow writers here at DU. You all helped me rise again like a glorious phoenix. Or some other town in Arizona. lol. What movie did I quote that line from? Anybody? I know who'll take a stab at it, and will probably get it right.
There will be more poems, lyrics, prose, stories, music talk, and interviews. Trust me. I'm embarking on, The Stay Vigilant Tour of...
There will be more poems, lyrics, prose, stories, music talk, and interviews. Trust me. I'm embarking on, The Stay Vigilant Tour of...
#Christmas
#holiday
122 reads
30 Comments
HadesRising
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 8:16pm
24th Dec 2024 8:16pm
ASHES FALLING LIKE SNOWFLAKES
And once
Upon a merry Christmas
A tree adorned at midnight
With lights
Twinkling upon the tinsel
And gifts wrapped in bows beneath
beneath
b e n e a t h
b e n e a t h
Those memories fading from yesteryear
Voices of the departed that I hear
Are you dead or am I a Christmas ghost
Ashes falling like snowflakes with spirits I toast
Each Eve
One ornament is entombed
In a mistletoe graveyard
Decay
The memories in whiskey
Soaked nightmares gifted to me
to me ...
Upon a merry Christmas
A tree adorned at midnight
With lights
Twinkling upon the tinsel
And gifts wrapped in bows beneath
beneath
b e n e a t h
b e n e a t h
Those memories fading from yesteryear
Voices of the departed that I hear
Are you dead or am I a Christmas ghost
Ashes falling like snowflakes with spirits I toast
Each Eve
One ornament is entombed
In a mistletoe graveyard
Decay
The memories in whiskey
Soaked nightmares gifted to me
to me ...
#Christmas
#depression
#ghosts
71 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 1:05pm
24th Dec 2024 1:05pm
Your two front teeth
#Christmas
#lyrics
#parody
#rhyming
#satirical
100 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 11:26am
24th Dec 2024 11:26am
The Gift That I Had Just Got For You
After seeing that I don't
like being far from home
at Christmas, she lifted
up the sweater she was
wearing and flashed her
naked body before saying
"I hope you like the gift
that I had just got for you."
like being far from home
at Christmas, she lifted
up the sweater she was
wearing and flashed her
naked body before saying
"I hope you like the gift
that I had just got for you."
#Christmas
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
109 reads
0 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 11:16am
24th Dec 2024 11:16am
Twas The Night Before A DeadLove Concert
Twas the night before the DeadLove concert at the North Pole. Kringle, hired us to put on a show for the workers. Well he says hired, when actually if was more like threatened and blackmailed to perform a Christmas Miracle.
Apparently, we’re big in the North Pole. Who knew that’s where those lost demo tapes ended up. Small world, huh.
But that’s putting the cart before the horse, folks. This is how the whole situation went down. Some of the details are a bit foggy and horrifying at the same time.
Anyways my younger brother, Garret had...
Apparently, we’re big in the North Pole. Who knew that’s where those lost demo tapes ended up. Small world, huh.
But that’s putting the cart before the horse, folks. This is how the whole situation went down. Some of the details are a bit foggy and horrifying at the same time.
Anyways my younger brother, Garret had...
#Christmas
#prose
86 reads
14 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 3:37am
24th Dec 2024 3:37am
I've Got A Christmas Card
I've got a Christmas card.
She's naked and sitting on Santa's lap.
Champagne was next to them.
She's naked and sitting on Santa's lap.
Champagne was next to them.
#Christmas
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
135 reads
6 Comments
Baldwin
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 2:59pm
23rd Dec 2024 2:59pm
Yoolis
My annual
If someone said on Christmas Eve,
"Come; see the oxen kneel,
"In the lonely barton by yonder coomb
Our childhood used to know,"
I should go with him in the gloom,
Hoping it might be so.
Thomas Hardy
I know, despite the comfort of
the hallowed tale,
there were no angels then
who came aloft
upon that ancient Christmas eve
to regions rounding Bethlehem,
and from on high
proclaimed "fear not",
to humbled men,
and spoke of swaddled wonderment
new...
If someone said on Christmas Eve,
"Come; see the oxen kneel,
"In the lonely barton by yonder coomb
Our childhood used to know,"
I should go with him in the gloom,
Hoping it might be so.
Thomas Hardy
I know, despite the comfort of
the hallowed tale,
there were no angels then
who came aloft
upon that ancient Christmas eve
to regions rounding Bethlehem,
and from on high
proclaimed "fear not",
to humbled men,
and spoke of swaddled wonderment
new...
#Christmas
34 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 2:53pm
22nd Dec 2024 2:53pm
Merry Chistmas
divine soul lilting through time
lighting up my life, God and I
in sync and deeply connected
at one with Him and his spirit
joined with the people
we feel each other intimately
rejoicing this season
colorful lights family get togethers
a special time of year
festive and bright
let's not forget those struggling
because this time of year can be daunting
for those dealing with pain
the grey overwhelming
depression sets in, feeling left out of the celebration
reach out to those you can ...
lighting up my life, God and I
in sync and deeply connected
at one with Him and his spirit
joined with the people
we feel each other intimately
rejoicing this season
colorful lights family get togethers
a special time of year
festive and bright
let's not forget those struggling
because this time of year can be daunting
for those dealing with pain
the grey overwhelming
depression sets in, feeling left out of the celebration
reach out to those you can ...
#Christmas
#love
114 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 11:27am
22nd Dec 2024 11:27am
Krampus is coming
Kringle found him on the edge of Hell
This bringer of the last Noel
Enforcer for Father Christmas
Discipline delivered by Krampus
Angels we have heard on high
Das Punisher will come this night
Big and hairy, black as pitch
A serpents young and a wooden switch
He's the lord of coal
Yes he does have a black soul
All the naughty children want to change
Be nice to others, stop the misery and pain
Star if wonder, star of light
There will be no silent night
Krampus, ancient god of Yule ...
This bringer of the last Noel
Enforcer for Father Christmas
Discipline delivered by Krampus
Angels we have heard on high
Das Punisher will come this night
Big and hairy, black as pitch
A serpents young and a wooden switch
He's the lord of coal
Yes he does have a black soul
All the naughty children want to change
Be nice to others, stop the misery and pain
Star if wonder, star of light
There will be no silent night
Krampus, ancient god of Yule ...
#children
#Christmas
#dark
#evil
#holiday
74 reads
9 Comments
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