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BDSM seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
In the Crumbs
In the Crumbs
It's our senselessness
that is the hallmark
of our nature;
every sacred moment....
burnt,
and every intimacy
and integration are left
in the crumbs
of the coals.
It's our senselessness
that is the hallmark
of our nature;
every sacred moment....
burnt,
and every intimacy
and integration are left
in the crumbs
of the coals.
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I'm Not That Easy

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Open up my eyes

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A Few Tornadoes
A Few Tornadoes
It seems
only a matter
of some discussion
before the wires
are crossed,
and,
at
that
point,
beyond which
memory
can hold its head up,
resilient winds
can bare
withstand the charms
of those
wobegone days
in a few tornadoes.
Our losses then
make all the more
this rarer field,
these fireflies
and
daily shield.
It seems
only a matter
of some discussion
before the wires
are crossed,
and,
at
that
point,
beyond which
memory
can hold its head up,
resilient winds
can bare
withstand the charms
of those
wobegone days
in a few tornadoes.
Our losses then
make all the more
this rarer field,
these fireflies
and
daily shield.
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Submissive scholar

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Let's go to the woods

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No choice silent voice

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Phone play

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Face Sitting
You want me to sit on your face
This is neither the time nor the place
I'm not feeling to do anything in haste
In other words, what's the race
If I do decide
To let that mouth come inside
It has to be as sweet as pie
Makes me so wet as the tide
You say you can take me to the sky above
What's between those lips is as tender as a dove
What is wrong I'm giving you a little push do I need to shove
If I sit on your face, I'll suffocate you love
More like I will drown you in the depths
As I ride...
This is neither the time nor the place
I'm not feeling to do anything in haste
In other words, what's the race
If I do decide
To let that mouth come inside
It has to be as sweet as pie
Makes me so wet as the tide
You say you can take me to the sky above
What's between those lips is as tender as a dove
What is wrong I'm giving you a little push do I need to shove
If I sit on your face, I'll suffocate you love
More like I will drown you in the depths
As I ride...
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Don't blink

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Bitch On A Leash (part one)
She was totally unaware of what was about to happen. Once she crossed over the threshold between outside and into her home, I appeared to her out of the shadow sitting on the couch in the living room. She recognized me and had forgotten she told me earlier over the phone to let myself in.
Odd, I thought earlier. We had met at a bar the night before, she had to leave suddenly and gave me her number. When I texted her the following morning, she had apologized again for leaving so suddenly and sent me a selfie of her in the shower that morning. The water glistening on her skin, the...
Odd, I thought earlier. We had met at a bar the night before, she had to leave suddenly and gave me her number. When I texted her the following morning, she had apologized again for leaving so suddenly and sent me a selfie of her in the shower that morning. The water glistening on her skin, the...
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Two days of fun

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