BDSM Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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BDSM seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
runningturtle87
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 1:47pm
14th Nov 2024 1:47pm
Private Prisons
Private Prisons
My expectation
that
others
will change
or understand
or accept
puts 100%
of the power
and accountability
in the hands
of
others
and abdicates
response
and responsibility.
My expectation
that
others
will change
or understand
or accept
puts 100%
of the power
and accountability
in the hands
of
others
and abdicates
response
and responsibility.
#BDSM
255 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 11:19pm
13th Nov 2024 11:19pm
arousal
taking time to notice the intricate things I love about you
your straight back and swagger, arrogant for sure
you act like a person in command
I'd follow you anywhere
you give respect, always cordial
the women are impressed by you
it doesn't matter the situation
you handle yourself easily
laid back Texas drawal
a smile that matches
gets a lady giddy
piercing blue eyes
that look like ice when you're angry
your sexual hunger sometimes unsatiable
your take care of business attitude
all...
your straight back and swagger, arrogant for sure
you act like a person in command
I'd follow you anywhere
you give respect, always cordial
the women are impressed by you
it doesn't matter the situation
you handle yourself easily
laid back Texas drawal
a smile that matches
gets a lady giddy
piercing blue eyes
that look like ice when you're angry
your sexual hunger sometimes unsatiable
your take care of business attitude
all...
#BDSM
#lust
223 reads
3 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 9:59pm
13th Nov 2024 9:59pm
Field and Stream
In Lego-like snap tight word precision
I find that some to logic are immune
and incapable of bard concision
with their characters so rustically hewn
to typecast themselves with a bumpkin pride
that hunts and fishes the motorsport way
into a future where eloquence died
along with students in a bullet spray,
and then they only act to think and pray
and blame the horror show on mental health
because they WANT all the havoc to stay
in their rapacity for commonwealth
fueled by a hatred of those schools
where their...
I find that some to logic are immune
and incapable of bard concision
with their characters so rustically hewn
to typecast themselves with a bumpkin pride
that hunts and fishes the motorsport way
into a future where eloquence died
along with students in a bullet spray,
and then they only act to think and pray
and blame the horror show on mental health
because they WANT all the havoc to stay
in their rapacity for commonwealth
fueled by a hatred of those schools
where their...
#BDSM
#FeelingTrapped
#reading #ThrillSeeking
#reading #ThrillSeeking
176 reads
7 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 2:51pm
12th Nov 2024 2:51pm
Prize
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#sensual
307 reads
3 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 00:51am
12th Nov 2024 00:51am
Wait
#BDSM
#erotic
#sex
487 reads
28 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 6:21pm
11th Nov 2024 6:21pm
to seduce a Sadist
darkly seductive I want to thrill
entertaining your greed I spill the music
that releases your inner beast
tantalizing your senses
drinking in your hard demeanor
you're just my type
my sanity always on edge
you're unsure, you think should I?
your ego overcomes your caution
you can tame anyone, afterall
tasting my darkness you're intrigued
my injection of fantasy
awakens you to temptation
my visions come to frutition, when I look at you
you cut me to pieces with a glance
masochistic I relish...
entertaining your greed I spill the music
that releases your inner beast
tantalizing your senses
drinking in your hard demeanor
you're just my type
my sanity always on edge
you're unsure, you think should I?
your ego overcomes your caution
you can tame anyone, afterall
tasting my darkness you're intrigued
my injection of fantasy
awakens you to temptation
my visions come to frutition, when I look at you
you cut me to pieces with a glance
masochistic I relish...
#BDSM
#lust
288 reads
9 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 00:36am
11th Nov 2024 00:36am
You Lie
Dom
You lie to yourself
It is of no consequence to me.
You knew what would occur
I gave you a safety
You decided you could handle it
Why did you lie?
Submissive
I want to please you
I did not lie about everything
Of course, I knew what would occur
Am I not dressed to please you?
I have not looked up once
Dom
You wanted this tender
I cannot do that for you
YOU CHOSE WRONG
Not looking up is a form of hiding when not told to do so.
Your body cannot hide your...
You lie to yourself
It is of no consequence to me.
You knew what would occur
I gave you a safety
You decided you could handle it
Why did you lie?
Submissive
I want to please you
I did not lie about everything
Of course, I knew what would occur
Am I not dressed to please you?
I have not looked up once
Dom
You wanted this tender
I cannot do that for you
YOU CHOSE WRONG
Not looking up is a form of hiding when not told to do so.
Your body cannot hide your...
#sex
#BDSM
#erotic
453 reads
18 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 12:59pm
9th Nov 2024 12:59pm
The Rapist Elect
Dear America,
No. Don't come to me if you've been abused.
Why in the world would I trust you now
when with great powers you chose to endow
a monster whereby much evil has oozed?
For years I have warned you multiple times
about a dude and his scallywag goons
whenever I wasn't watching full moons
or render love into rococo rhymes.
It's clear to me now you prefer the pain
so often seen on destitute faces
and anger from unbalanced nutcases
thriving only from a tormented brain
shaped in...
No. Don't come to me if you've been abused.
Why in the world would I trust you now
when with great powers you chose to endow
a monster whereby much evil has oozed?
For years I have warned you multiple times
about a dude and his scallywag goons
whenever I wasn't watching full moons
or render love into rococo rhymes.
It's clear to me now you prefer the pain
so often seen on destitute faces
and anger from unbalanced nutcases
thriving only from a tormented brain
shaped in...
#BDSM
158 reads
9 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 8:58am
8th Nov 2024 8:58am
I Try....So Hard
I Try....So Hard
I try
to pay attention
to the world
that spins around.
I
really
have no feelings
for the universal sound.
The only thing
that makes some sense
and leads me
to believe
is that I try
and fail it all
if your presence
I would leave.
We live within
the deepest part,
where mind knows
heart is king,
and attributes
the values sought,
when soul itself
can bring.
I try
to pay attention
to the world
that spins around.
I
really
have no feelings
for the universal sound.
The only thing
that makes some sense
and leads me
to believe
is that I try
and fail it all
if your presence
I would leave.
We live within
the deepest part,
where mind knows
heart is king,
and attributes
the values sought,
when soul itself
can bring.
#BDSM
#orgasm
#sensual
237 reads
2 Comments
Mando82
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 8:46pm
7th Nov 2024 8:46pm
Goddess Queen Naughty Princess
#BDSM
#erotic
305 reads
1 Comment
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 11:57pm
5th Nov 2024 11:57pm
Playtime surprise
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#passion
394 reads
2 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 11:56pm
3rd Nov 2024 11:56pm
Hungry Wolves
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#passion
281 reads
0 Comments
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