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fortune's fool

in a rare moment of clarity
he realized his rise to riches
did not make him wiser
nor less boorish

having seen a vision
of his sole life's revision
life seemed nothing less
than a lie

throwing fortune to the wind
he will begin his life again
among the paupers without friends
once again

Written by faithmairee

(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)

Published 4th Apr 2013

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Re: fortune's fool

Anonymous

- Edited 4th Apr 2013 2:17pm

4th Apr 2013 00:38am

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faithmairee (Faith Elizabeth Brigham)

4th Apr 2013 00:43am

I say yes to your question because at the end he has repeated his rise and fall. It's symbolic of a chronic gamblers life. So good to see you have graced my page with your presence. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Love your latest ones, Gabe. xoxo

Faith

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Re: fortune's fool

Amazon

4th Apr 2013 1:37am

Once again, you have written the truth for one who will never be enlightened! Wonderful work!

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faithmairee (Faith Elizabeth Brigham)

4th Apr 2013 9:20pm

You are so sweet. Thank you for your lovely comments. I appreciate them so much, amazon! :)

Faith

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Re: fortune's fool

Anonymous

4th Apr 2013 2:01am

Very insightful write, Faith. Your poems are always interesting & thought-provoking!

Love these lines & so true...

he will begin his life again
among the paupers without friends

Wonderful ink ... Well done! :)

Carlene