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Again

Fucking myself, again...
I've been here every night and day what feels like forever
Sliding my dildo in, again
Alone in my room on this big empty bed
Using my fingers, again
Rubbing fast and hard trying to get myself off
Tonight I'll use the bullet, again
Placing it on my clit and let the vibration take me away
Shower jets, again
Letting the water spray my pussy until I am exhausted
Fucking myself, again

Written by tommielynn

(Tommie Lynn)

Published 3rd Apr 2013

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Re: Again

Deepest_Fantasy

3rd Apr 2013 10:57pm

Highly erotic, yet with tones of mundane frustration and loneliness. Sexy visuals, yet they also invoke compassion for this girl who apparently longs for a real, warm penis inside her instead of a dildo. The frequent use of the word "again" really drives that feeling of the mundane home. Still, through the sadness, the variety of ways this lady pleases herself is arousing to read. My favorite is "sliding the dildo in..." (I imagined a lavender one, disappearing between her legs). Nice writing as always Tommie, mixing multiple emotions together

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tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)

3rd Apr 2013 11:39pm

She is highly frustrated!!Lonely and tired of giving it to herself.Wanting a real penis she settles for her blue dildo....AGAIN! Thank you Deepest_Fantasy, your comments are always refreshing to read! :)