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3-20
Step into my hug
atmosphere disturbed
music in our breathing
conjoined souls become flesh
Between the caress of eyes
and the vision of palms
tender touch releases tension
bending in the curl of my hold
Longing to taste
that which begins
in the soul and forms
our song
Your giggles pull from my being
the deepest smiles
silken chord
binding with consent
Press
with drawn fingers
stain skin
with kisses that linger
Pillow tossed
as body quakes
the point
of melt
Tattoo my naked soul
with
the colors of
your heart spill
Pour me slowly
breathe
as I become
your fill
Drawn of untamed quill
drops of sound fall upon ivory wrist
pressing notes to responsive skin
the air returns to sighing
Anointed by that from which the lips pour
shape the mouth into beauty
dress the naked night
in linens laced with desire
Poetic candles
glowing sheen over liquid skin
dressed
in flames of yearning
Familiar scent stills trembling lip
taste behind the curve of smile
twilight dances in sapphire eyes
growls bite your neck
Touch and trace
a delicate filigree of desire
fingers memorizing
every inch of curve
Stitching words upon willing skin
becoming
fabric of our night
pattern in the making
Soul kiss
saturates senses
drunk on
kisses deep
Ink drawn
petal press
nocturnal flower
scent lingers
long after the closing
Silent slide
I slip
into your dream
beneath your skin
infused
In these moments
it IS all about me
being all about you
my heart whispers in shouts...
You
are all about me too
atmosphere disturbed
music in our breathing
conjoined souls become flesh
Between the caress of eyes
and the vision of palms
tender touch releases tension
bending in the curl of my hold
Longing to taste
that which begins
in the soul and forms
our song
Your giggles pull from my being
the deepest smiles
silken chord
binding with consent
Press
with drawn fingers
stain skin
with kisses that linger
Pillow tossed
as body quakes
the point
of melt
Tattoo my naked soul
with
the colors of
your heart spill
Pour me slowly
breathe
as I become
your fill
Drawn of untamed quill
drops of sound fall upon ivory wrist
pressing notes to responsive skin
the air returns to sighing
Anointed by that from which the lips pour
shape the mouth into beauty
dress the naked night
in linens laced with desire
Poetic candles
glowing sheen over liquid skin
dressed
in flames of yearning
Familiar scent stills trembling lip
taste behind the curve of smile
twilight dances in sapphire eyes
growls bite your neck
Touch and trace
a delicate filigree of desire
fingers memorizing
every inch of curve
Stitching words upon willing skin
becoming
fabric of our night
pattern in the making
Soul kiss
saturates senses
drunk on
kisses deep
Ink drawn
petal press
nocturnal flower
scent lingers
long after the closing
Silent slide
I slip
into your dream
beneath your skin
infused
In these moments
it IS all about me
being all about you
my heart whispers in shouts...
You
are all about me too
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Re: 3-20
Anonymous
1st Apr 2013 3:46am
Lovely write Soul Man...a treasure
Strider
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1st Apr 2013 1:26pm
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1st Apr 2013 4:39am
captivating piece. You used every word well, Soul Man. applause applause :)
Train
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1st Apr 2013 1:27pm
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1st Apr 2013 7:19am
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1st Apr 2013 1:29pm
Yes, though all we shared this day of 3/20 was wondrous, the first hug embodied the love and passion we had shared through a long time of interaction. Nothing compares with a physical hug.
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Anonymous
1st Apr 2013 10:05am
I agree with the above comments, a beautiful, captivating piece, well worded and great structure, flow, and rhythm. Heavy in sentiment. well penned bro, peace
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1st Apr 2013 1:30pm
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1st Apr 2013 10:40am
A most wonderful heartfelt write.. Sounds like a beautiful thing you share Ken :)
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1st Apr 2013 1:31pm
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1st Apr 2013 2:58pm
"In these moments
it IS all about me
being all about you
my heart whispers in shouts..."
Powerful!!!! You put heart and soul into this for sure Soulman... Great write Sir. Thank you for sharing
it IS all about me
being all about you
my heart whispers in shouts..."
Powerful!!!! You put heart and soul into this for sure Soulman... Great write Sir. Thank you for sharing
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1st Apr 2013 11:12pm
The soul of MY soul man!:)
Loved the softness and beauty of this ink! It exposed bits of your compassionate and loving character! One of the reasons I'm drawn towards you and your ink! Your authenticity! xoxo
LOVE THIS!
Loved the softness and beauty of this ink! It exposed bits of your compassionate and loving character! One of the reasons I'm drawn towards you and your ink! Your authenticity! xoxo
LOVE THIS!
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2nd Apr 2013 11:33pm
Lol, thank you, my soul sister. It was simply retelling of my afternoon with my girl... only my words can never express the true wonder of it.
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2nd Apr 2013 00:14am
The ink of your soul flows in perfect patterns from your heart to your finger tips. It amazes me how you are able to express such true and deep emotions, while at the same time adding personal touches. You paint a realistic fairly tale, and like any great painting or fairy tale, all one can do is sit in awe of the beauty that unfolds. You have drawn me into this beauty with you, as if I experienced this myself. Amazing Ken!
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2nd Apr 2013 11:36pm
It is realistic... it happened and all I am certain of is "it only gets better"!! I greatly appreciate your seeing it as I intended; reality, not a hope or a dream and yes the personal touches simply reveal the incredible love shared. Thank you for an amazing comment, Rachel.
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2nd Apr 2013 8:50am
.. Well I obviously cant compete with the comments you've revived thus far, so I'll leave you with a simple thank you for the light hearted poetry I never flock to other then yours. It touches my heart like a feather delicate humming Bird.
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2nd Apr 2013 11:38pm
lol, no competition. LOVE your painting btw. I appreciate much your kindness and honesty. I certainly enjoy your varied and strong writing!
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2nd Apr 2013 10:06am
Lovely write, captivating.
Beautifully written,
it took me somewhere else.
Beautifully written,
it took me somewhere else.
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2nd Apr 2013 11:42pm
Ken
Tickled pink to read you Hun. You, and your gentle words are always missed :)
Tickled pink to read you Hun. You, and your gentle words are always missed :)
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2nd Apr 2013 11:54pm
Thank you, Maggie. Life is a caravan and I missed it but still dance to my own music, lol
Very sweet of you!
Very sweet of you!