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My mouth will suck you!
My nipples will salute you!
My pussy will quench your thirst!
Your cock will thank me!
Your hands will touch me!
Your lips will be covered in dew!
My nipples will salute you!
My pussy will quench your thirst!
Your cock will thank me!
Your hands will touch me!
Your lips will be covered in dew!
Published 31st Mar 2013
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31st Mar 2013 5:05am
31st Mar 2013 5:28am
31st Mar 2013 6:32am
31st Mar 2013 1:30pm
31st Mar 2013 7:28am
So much erotic imagery in so few words! This is from the perspective of a woman who is good at sex and knows it! Brilliant, tommielynn, I love it! My favorite lines of course are "My pussy will quench your thirst" and "Your lips will be covered in dew" - my favorite!
31st Mar 2013 1:38pm
All you need is a few sexy words and BAM...it's on!!
Thank you Deepest_Fantasy.
Thank you Deepest_Fantasy.
Anonymous
31st Mar 2013 1:06pm
Quick and hot and enjoyed:)
31st Mar 2013 1:41pm
I'm glad you liked this..hot and quick isn't always bad :) Thank you, Ugly and i smile :)
31st Mar 2013 2:56pm
Short and to the hot point! Puts the male reader in the mood easily, as under a spell! Reads like an incantation she may say before he's noticed her.
31st Mar 2013 3:31pm
5th Apr 2013 1:24am
Very strong words ..Make something magical ..
Knew how to express and conveying a sense of innocent love and romance
Words Thank you very enjoyable ..
refrescante
Knew how to express and conveying a sense of innocent love and romance
Words Thank you very enjoyable ..
refrescante
5th Apr 2013 1:26am
