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Towards the light
Fate beckons my life towards the light,
veteran eyes flashing with wit as a breathy
whistle of inhalation is drawn sharp.
Broken glass glints jagged beneath my feet,
soft pains settle, gently unworldly.
A cold sweat breaking through.
From somewhere essential I sense hushed pleads,
an urgent pressure straining against my lungs;
electricity flushes the blue from my veins,
leaving a vacancy that fades the light dim.
The light writhes in fits of panic with
intervals of screaming slicing through,
shadows tightening their strangle hold.
I start to run.
Undiscovered bravery tears apart boundaries,
fully fledged and flaunting a savior complex.
Shuddering wings unfurl and curl in throes
of torment, imprisoned in the tapering light.
The light rushes to meet me halfway.
Plunging into the light I grasp at feathers,
A set of smirking eyes meet mine.
The light is blinding.
veteran eyes flashing with wit as a breathy
whistle of inhalation is drawn sharp.
Broken glass glints jagged beneath my feet,
soft pains settle, gently unworldly.
A cold sweat breaking through.
From somewhere essential I sense hushed pleads,
an urgent pressure straining against my lungs;
electricity flushes the blue from my veins,
leaving a vacancy that fades the light dim.
The light writhes in fits of panic with
intervals of screaming slicing through,
shadows tightening their strangle hold.
I start to run.
Undiscovered bravery tears apart boundaries,
fully fledged and flaunting a savior complex.
Shuddering wings unfurl and curl in throes
of torment, imprisoned in the tapering light.
The light rushes to meet me halfway.
Plunging into the light I grasp at feathers,
A set of smirking eyes meet mine.
The light is blinding.
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Re: Towards the light
31st Mar 2013 2:01am
Re: Towards the light
Anonymous
31st Mar 2013 6:12am
I like the dark images in these lines, in particular:
Shuddering wings unfurl and curl in throes
of torment, imprisoned in the tapering light.
Enjoyed this poem. Nice work, Scribbler & a thoroughly good read! :)
Carlene
Shuddering wings unfurl and curl in throes
of torment, imprisoned in the tapering light.
Enjoyed this poem. Nice work, Scribbler & a thoroughly good read! :)
Carlene
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re: Re: Towards the light
31st Mar 2013 7:53am
Re: Towards the light
31st Mar 2013 6:31am
Scribbler these angels seem quite daunting as if dragging you to the light..wonderful imagery..causing me to ponder..beautiful..peace Crim
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re: Re: Towards the light
31st Mar 2013 7:54am
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Re: Towards the light
Anonymous
31st Mar 2013 9:19pm
Sounds like you are awakening from a trance journey...The soul returns into the body
Very inspiring poem, Scribbler!
Very inspiring poem, Scribbler!
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Re: Towards the light
Anonymous
31st Mar 2013 10:51pm
Excellent flow and I felt an angel was taking you away from darkness.... maybe I got it wrong....even if I did I like it...like..like..like;)
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Re: Towards the light
1st Apr 2013 3:21am
I love my dreams... this resembles some of them.
Ever a delight entering your world here!
Ever a delight entering your world here!
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Re: Towards the light
1st Apr 2013 4:48pm
Very nice well written words. Keep doing your thing scribbler and let no one or nothing stand in your way.
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re: Re: Towards the light
1st Apr 2013 5:44pm
Re: Towards the light
2nd Apr 2013 8:51pm
How absolutely angelic! This bring to mind something of mine that I'll post in a bit, concerning the "Savior" which is also the title as I recall. Love to see an angel try her new wings, cheers!
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re: Re: Towards the light
2nd Apr 2013 9:08pm
Re: Towards the light
Anonymous
17th Aug 2014 12:40pm
Excellent work. Love the style you used on this one!
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