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Plastic Fantastic
He might well be silent and quiet for days on end.
But take him out and he lights up any given room,
Sending me racing to a distant lover my deviant
mind creates.
My toy boy might be small and plastic this is true
but Oh so big and powerful when energized.
He knows what buttons to press everytime, As I do his
with experienced fingers.
From slow tangos to high speed sambas we dance hand
in hand like devoted lovers do, as he slides down low
gradually sending me to my pinnacle high.
He moves me with pleasure strokes until I surrender to him
totally, Opening my gates for him to push on through and
take his pleasurable prize that I give willingly as I lay before
him as servant to master, For at that moment my toy boy
lover commands my very soul.
He might well be silent and quiet for days on end.
But when desired he rocks my world.
But take him out and he lights up any given room,
Sending me racing to a distant lover my deviant
mind creates.
My toy boy might be small and plastic this is true
but Oh so big and powerful when energized.
He knows what buttons to press everytime, As I do his
with experienced fingers.
From slow tangos to high speed sambas we dance hand
in hand like devoted lovers do, as he slides down low
gradually sending me to my pinnacle high.
He moves me with pleasure strokes until I surrender to him
totally, Opening my gates for him to push on through and
take his pleasurable prize that I give willingly as I lay before
him as servant to master, For at that moment my toy boy
lover commands my very soul.
He might well be silent and quiet for days on end.
But when desired he rocks my world.
Written by
Lookawaynow
(Rose)
Published 26th Mar 2013
| Edited 27th Mar 2013
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Re: Plastic Fantastic
Anonymous
26th Mar 2013 1:26pm
Oh I hear you in this poem haha. And may I say that it's very elegantly put, which is a skill in the barrage of pump n' dump crap I normally read in the erotic section.
Love the personification you have used here. Thank you for the read.
Love the personification you have used here. Thank you for the read.

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Re: Plastic Fantastic
26th Mar 2013 1:31pm
and thank you for commenting :)
yes agreed with the pump and dump" I'm probably guilty of a few of them lol but sure i like to use a little more imagination in my writes
and well it does take a womans knowledge with such toys" to portray it well :)
Men = clueless hehe only joking xD
yes agreed with the pump and dump" I'm probably guilty of a few of them lol but sure i like to use a little more imagination in my writes
and well it does take a womans knowledge with such toys" to portray it well :)
Men = clueless hehe only joking xD
Plastic Fantastic
26th Mar 2013 3:06pm
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26th Mar 2013 3:19pm
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26th Mar 2013 8:09pm
You don't get to see many poems about BoB's (battery operated boyfriends) much these days. Very illuminating.
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26th Mar 2013 8:17pm
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26th Mar 2013 9:18pm
I love this poem, equal parts clever, sexy and naughty! Delightful use of suggestive personification as well, nice work! It certainly conjured up some nice images.
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26th Mar 2013 9:52pm
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27th Mar 2013 2:26pm
Re: Plastic Fantastic
1st Apr 2013 9:11am
Hahaha. I lurve mine Errol he's commands my soul too lol he can be a bit distracting whispering to me in my sleep. He's exquistly and aesthetically pleasing. Best friend I ever had lol and I don't have to pick his socks up or take any crap from him. No food nor football just enticing for the ultimate buzz Thank you I loved this write as you described so perfectly the attraction of the perfect toy boy. Ty syn
I'm thinking of taking my boy on a world cruise sneaking him through customs :) hummah. Lol sorry this cheered me up and I'm always overexcitable when I've read a grand write and when I think of my glowing pulsing Adonis. Syn
I'm thinking of taking my boy on a world cruise sneaking him through customs :) hummah. Lol sorry this cheered me up and I'm always overexcitable when I've read a grand write and when I think of my glowing pulsing Adonis. Syn
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1st Apr 2013 11:46am
syn..word of advice from a fellow slave to the buzz..take the batteries out first if traveling :) xD
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1st Apr 2013 12:08pm
Omg lol that may take up some valuable shoe space. Cheers for the advice. My friends boyfriend who is borderline genius (I kid you not and not because of what I'm just about to say. He really is geekishly clever) he made he one she can plug into the mains!! How cools that. Long lead and duel supply potential lol. Lucky mare :)
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yes! we can only dream of such constant power hehe
It's what electricity was invented for! ok ok maybe lighting and heating but sure hehe i would live in cold dark places as long as I had some buzz going on xD
nothing worse than at that peaking moment the power starts to fade...quick where those dam spare batteries!! we all been there i'm sure haha
It's what electricity was invented for! ok ok maybe lighting and heating but sure hehe i would live in cold dark places as long as I had some buzz going on xD
nothing worse than at that peaking moment the power starts to fade...quick where those dam spare batteries!! we all been there i'm sure haha
Re: Plastic Fantastic
1st Apr 2013 10:18am
Aww cool words syn
Makes me want to write when i get compliaments like this.
So thankyou too :-)
Makes me want to write when i get compliaments like this.
So thankyou too :-)