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Am I A Puppet???
My mind is not still….
I cannot work on my will!!
I tried to make my way….
To slay my inner demons away!!
I have fallen Many times NOW!!
Honestly it felt WOW!!
I felt like a phoenix…..
But unable to reach my high…
But no one bothered to listen what I have said and why??
I guess…..
It’s time for me to understand…..
Life is controlled by...
The "EXTERNAL FORCES"!!!!
I cannot work on my will!!
I tried to make my way….
To slay my inner demons away!!
I have fallen Many times NOW!!
Honestly it felt WOW!!
I felt like a phoenix…..
But unable to reach my high…
But no one bothered to listen what I have said and why??
I guess…..
It’s time for me to understand…..
Life is controlled by...
The "EXTERNAL FORCES"!!!!
Published 25th Mar 2013
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25th Mar 2013 2:33pm
Loved this write, can totally relate and im sure most people here can. Life can seem like were being controlled by something whether it be addiction, love, depression, etc. Great piece.
25th Mar 2013 8:06pm
29th Mar 2013 9:19am
I enjoyed this, it made me think.
To slay my inner demons away!!
I have fallen Many times NOW!!
I get this piece.
To slay my inner demons away!!
I have fallen Many times NOW!!
I get this piece.
