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Wind whips in stereo
Winter weary
Heavy headed from fatigued boredom
The clouds don't know when to let up
Dawn must come soon
Shine with bladed rays
and slaughter the ice wolves
of night
Heated stench of black blood
warms into the earth
Tomorrow
knows the whispers and happy sighs of
the ancient trees
These wind whips have nearly reached exhausted peace
Heavy headed from fatigued boredom
The clouds don't know when to let up
Dawn must come soon
Shine with bladed rays
and slaughter the ice wolves
of night
Heated stench of black blood
warms into the earth
Tomorrow
knows the whispers and happy sighs of
the ancient trees
These wind whips have nearly reached exhausted peace
Published 22nd Mar 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2013 6:46pm
I thoroughly enjoyed the read, Splendid. Beautiful pen, expression & wonderful imagery. Love the ending & adore the poem. Well done & one for my reading list!
Carlene :)
Carlene :)
29th Mar 2013 9:05pm
Excellent ..
And very cool ..
I stand beside you at the same summit ..
.. You are standing now in the high summit and see ..
And see what you see him of Way purely value ..
Wind
Whips
Boredom
Winter
Clouds
And what it feels like a special sense of sad
Holds a lot of nostalgia or sadness ..
Who made the pain you and what you see him about a lot of things
You feel
Heavy head of weary boredom
Clouds do not know when to stop
And here to see your flash
Circles hope
Draw feeling
And a sense
In a special way
Dynamic feeling
Static feeling
Feeling physicist
Chemical sense
Feeling physiology
Feeling human consumption ..Rare ..
Says Dawn soon
Sparkling with white rays
And here you want to sacrifice
And rituals of the ancestors of old
Qurban
The slaughter of wolves ice
Night
Black hot smell of blood
Global warming in
And wait to win
Tomorrow
Whispers and sighs known than happy
And symbolizes the ancestors
Something very valuable
And treasure ground
And they
Old trees
And finish fast paced poetic journey
Shares without poison
Shares to the next life
Have reached this wind toward peace whips exhausted
In estimating ..
You wrote what you feel .. right
But ..
Rhetoric here was fast-paced and very strong
But in the end ..
You do an excellent job
And gorgeous against us ..
We want a lot of business
And we want to clarify the vision of you
And other flash in your life through the times of past and future also ..
And a lot ..
Shares to the next life >>>=======>> ..
And very cool ..
I stand beside you at the same summit ..
.. You are standing now in the high summit and see ..
And see what you see him of Way purely value ..
Wind
Whips
Boredom
Winter
Clouds
And what it feels like a special sense of sad
Holds a lot of nostalgia or sadness ..
Who made the pain you and what you see him about a lot of things
You feel
Heavy head of weary boredom
Clouds do not know when to stop
And here to see your flash
Circles hope
Draw feeling
And a sense
In a special way
Dynamic feeling
Static feeling
Feeling physicist
Chemical sense
Feeling physiology
Feeling human consumption ..Rare ..
Says Dawn soon
Sparkling with white rays
And here you want to sacrifice
And rituals of the ancestors of old
Qurban
The slaughter of wolves ice
Night
Black hot smell of blood
Global warming in
And wait to win
Tomorrow
Whispers and sighs known than happy
And symbolizes the ancestors
Something very valuable
And treasure ground
And they
Old trees
And finish fast paced poetic journey
Shares without poison
Shares to the next life
Have reached this wind toward peace whips exhausted
In estimating ..
You wrote what you feel .. right
But ..
Rhetoric here was fast-paced and very strong
But in the end ..
You do an excellent job
And gorgeous against us ..
We want a lot of business
And we want to clarify the vision of you
And other flash in your life through the times of past and future also ..
And a lot ..
Shares to the next life >>>=======>> ..
16th Aug 2019 6:54pm
I have no words for this spill
'cept that this is incredible ink
in form and description!!
Reading List for me definitely!!!
Well done
'cept that this is incredible ink
in form and description!!
Reading List for me definitely!!!
Well done
