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Helpful Romantic
She wants thunder and lightning
I slam the door and flash on the lamp
She says she needs more sweetness
Mr. Happy gets dipped into a jar of honey
She would like to feel held tighter
Another ratchet click on the seat belt wide strapping
I want her calling out my name
during her moments of release
She wants to tingle from feet to
hair tips
The lamp is tore from the cord
The insulation peeled inches back
After I wrap the bare wire amongst her toes
I think we will both get what we want
I slam the door and flash on the lamp
She says she needs more sweetness
Mr. Happy gets dipped into a jar of honey
She would like to feel held tighter
Another ratchet click on the seat belt wide strapping
I want her calling out my name
during her moments of release
She wants to tingle from feet to
hair tips
The lamp is tore from the cord
The insulation peeled inches back
After I wrap the bare wire amongst her toes
I think we will both get what we want
Published 22nd Mar 2013
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22nd Mar 2013 2:14am
lol.. you know this seems like a dark sensual piece and I say that becuase me and my dark and twisted sees this as sometime a killer might write after the deed has been done.. either way i did enjoy this.. thanks for sharing
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2013 2:53am
Love this piece! Would have loved it for the first two lines alone but no, you had to take it all the way. Nice job setting the scene and complying to the whims of your other. Pared down to only the necessary just makes it that much easier to see. Hope you've got more like this one, Nick!
22nd Mar 2013 1:52pm
