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Randomization
We don't write about random things anymore
All the abstract meaning is lost in the underlying message
of that secret yet obvious coding signifying the presence
of a bright mind, still, trying to shine brighter
We are all chasing ghosts in our own ways
Digging graves for our own fails
Unknowingly, we build monuments to our shame
Not of bricks and mortar
But of persona and prejudice
And some with needles in veins
Randomization is hard for the one track mind
They all fear what they don't understand
Those who don't know fear don't care
And those who don't care never wonder
What makes the world turn?
What makes a man kill?
What drives the great machine?
What devise is you and me?
All the abstract meaning is lost in the underlying message
of that secret yet obvious coding signifying the presence
of a bright mind, still, trying to shine brighter
We are all chasing ghosts in our own ways
Digging graves for our own fails
Unknowingly, we build monuments to our shame
Not of bricks and mortar
But of persona and prejudice
And some with needles in veins
Randomization is hard for the one track mind
They all fear what they don't understand
Those who don't know fear don't care
And those who don't care never wonder
What makes the world turn?
What makes a man kill?
What drives the great machine?
What devise is you and me?
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Re: Randomization
22nd Mar 2013 3:30am
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Re: Randomization
23rd Mar 2013 11:05am
Very true 13, it's good to stretch the mind and question everything I believe. Great piece. :)
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re: Re: Randomization
24th Mar 2013 11:19am
many thanks M
which is why I'm now reading 'the dice man'
(courtesy of No1^)
time to broaden the spectrum :)
which is why I'm now reading 'the dice man'
(courtesy of No1^)
time to broaden the spectrum :)
Re: Randomization
Anonymous
24th Mar 2013 3:10am
This is Amazing! Fav~ "All the abstract meaning is lost in the underlying message
of that secret yet obvious coding signifying the presence
of a bright mind, still, trying to shine brighter"
of that secret yet obvious coding signifying the presence
of a bright mind, still, trying to shine brighter"
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re: Re: Randomization
24th Mar 2013 11:20am
Re: Randomization
25th Mar 2013 00:34am
Ghosts plumb centre, ghosts jump left and right. ghosts ain't what they used to be, you can't trust ghosts not like you should
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Re: Randomization
27th Mar 2013 8:39am
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30th Mar 2013 2:06am
Re: Randomization
You are spittin some real truth there. That whole 2nd and 3rd stanza is like Damn! Love it. Keep up the great work.
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