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Your Crying Eye
Goodbye my wife
until the next time
you gave me life
and made it worth
while .
Looking back at the images
my brain goes slack
my heads in pieces
everything you packed
I can't wear
it's in the cases
my emotion code
has cracked
and I feign my day faces .
Goodbye my wife
until the next time
stuck deep is the knife
of my only love
of a true time .
Here I cry
as I long to you
again fly
all time stopped
when I left your crying eye
the heaven's just dropped
and only god knows why
my sanity just popped
my love can never stop
Atlantic I would hop
just to along side you lie . [/font]
until the next time
you gave me life
and made it worth
while .
Looking back at the images
my brain goes slack
my heads in pieces
everything you packed
I can't wear
it's in the cases
my emotion code
has cracked
and I feign my day faces .
Goodbye my wife
until the next time
stuck deep is the knife
of my only love
of a true time .
Here I cry
as I long to you
again fly
all time stopped
when I left your crying eye
the heaven's just dropped
and only god knows why
my sanity just popped
my love can never stop
Atlantic I would hop
just to along side you lie . [/font]
Published 20th Sep 2010
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2010 4:03pm
Warm, melodic, tender love song, with the rhythm and passion of chamber music. The hopping the Atlantic image was one I particularly enjoyed.
25th Sep 2010 1:51am
thanks jack yeah the atlantic ha ha as you probably know i have to cross such a thing to see my wife so to hop it would be only too welcome a dream :)
