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orgasm haiku v
the scent off of your skin is inebriating
pheromones are devouring me I find myself on top of and behind you
my full body weight and we collapse out of breath and overwhelmed
pheromones are devouring me I find myself on top of and behind you
my full body weight and we collapse out of breath and overwhelmed
Published 19th Sep 2010
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2010 2:21pm
The first line is almost hypnotic, the imagery is so vivid. I could see a body nearly burning like a pungent incense. And the way you convey the exhaustion after the deed is done is just wonderful.
19th Sep 2010 11:08pm
aw thanks man glad you're diggin the new ones (inspired by you know who) always appreciate the support and thoughtful messages.. yeah this reply is longer than my damn poem :D cheers
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