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big bang
whiskey and wine
she as comfortable as clouds
not that my bones ache
but she gives my stomach tingle
like a storm on the horizon
anorexia does'nt mean she does'nt like my cooking
pseudo chef
another smurf i'm in love with
the morphine blues
combat the inner thigh get high
a tattoo just for you
dark matter for the upright bass
it doe'snt matter if it's dark
but what's it matter anyways
implosion vs explosion
all just lifelike souvenirs
my orbit
your circle
simple melody
a pretty noose
not too far from home
ain't love grand
what a fool i've been
a pretty face in the third floor saxophone
at last i'm alone
a six shooter to murder a dozen butterflies
i'm as good as gone
but i'm glad you're here
see you soon
no funeral needed
just play my favorite songs
and call me a gas giant
when they reduce the planets again
she as comfortable as clouds
not that my bones ache
but she gives my stomach tingle
like a storm on the horizon
anorexia does'nt mean she does'nt like my cooking
pseudo chef
another smurf i'm in love with
the morphine blues
combat the inner thigh get high
a tattoo just for you
dark matter for the upright bass
it doe'snt matter if it's dark
but what's it matter anyways
implosion vs explosion
all just lifelike souvenirs
my orbit
your circle
simple melody
a pretty noose
not too far from home
ain't love grand
what a fool i've been
a pretty face in the third floor saxophone
at last i'm alone
a six shooter to murder a dozen butterflies
i'm as good as gone
but i'm glad you're here
see you soon
no funeral needed
just play my favorite songs
and call me a gas giant
when they reduce the planets again
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Re: big bang
18th Mar 2013 2:06am
Re: big bang
18th Mar 2013 2:14am
thank you cali. i thought a lil obscure to display the sexiness, but i'm glad you got it mam...
Re: big bang
18th Mar 2013 2:34am
Obscure indeed :)
I dig it!!!
Awesome write JR...
I cant pick the favorite Stanza cuz there's choice cuts in all!!!
I dig it!!!
Awesome write JR...
I cant pick the favorite Stanza cuz there's choice cuts in all!!!
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re: Re: big bang
18th Mar 2013 7:21pm
Re: big bang
Hmm this one feels more on the cynical romantic side than your usual. Interesting change of pace. love the gritty fifth and sixth stanza.
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re: Re: big bang
18th Mar 2013 7:23pm
Re: big bang
Anonymous
18th Mar 2013 8:20am
Jr at his best
strider
strider
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Re: big bang
18th Mar 2013 3:06pm
Re: big bang
18th Mar 2013 5:16pm
John, you romantic DEVIL you. Love how your raw and honest lines cut to the bone. Especially like the wordplay in the third stanza and the potency of the last stanza. Nice job!
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Re: big bang
18th Mar 2013 7:25pm
Re: big bang
Anonymous
18th Mar 2013 10:08pm
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Re: big bang
thanx gabe
it's all connected to me.
thank you for your comments brotha........
it's all connected to me.
thank you for your comments brotha........