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LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
Why do we stay after he hurt us?
Because Love won’t let us leave…
Love makes us stay; Love believes
he will change.
But after too many emotional upper
cuts, Love turns into Hate…
Hate says to get even, hurt him back!
Bring him to his knees the way he
brought us to our knees!
Make him feel what it’s like to scurry
into a dark corner in fetal position
afraid to EVER love again!
Make him cry a sea the way we cried a
river!
After rational thinking take the place of
hatred, then comes Pride…
Pride says to walk away with your head
held high, don’t get even; get pretty, buy
those 4in Jimmy Choo, keep your “Lady”
and increase your shine!
Payback’s a bitch and pain heals in time!
Because Love won’t let us leave…
Love makes us stay; Love believes
he will change.
But after too many emotional upper
cuts, Love turns into Hate…
Hate says to get even, hurt him back!
Bring him to his knees the way he
brought us to our knees!
Make him feel what it’s like to scurry
into a dark corner in fetal position
afraid to EVER love again!
Make him cry a sea the way we cried a
river!
After rational thinking take the place of
hatred, then comes Pride…
Pride says to walk away with your head
held high, don’t get even; get pretty, buy
those 4in Jimmy Choo, keep your “Lady”
and increase your shine!
Payback’s a bitch and pain heals in time!
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Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
13th Mar 2013 10:46pm
Can really relate to the feelings expressed here (not so much the 4in Jimmy Choo's though!). Yea this is really great, think we all been in a similar situation in terms of the love turning to hate part. This is gold right here :)
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re: Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
13th Mar 2013 11:38pm
Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
Anonymous
14th Mar 2013 6:55am
I can totally relate to this, absolutely incredible. Thanks for this

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re: Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
14th Mar 2013 2:11pm
I've learned the best way to make them regret hurting you is to do better inside and out...dont get even; get pretty! LOL!
Thank you bey girl I'm glad you liked it!
Thank you bey girl I'm glad you liked it!
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re: Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
14th Mar 2013 2:12pm
Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
14th Mar 2013 2:29pm
"Make him cry a sea the way we cried a
river!
After rational thinking take the place of
hatred, then comes Pride… "
and that Pride..in the 4inch heels or the adidas tennis...oh yeah working it!!
river!
After rational thinking take the place of
hatred, then comes Pride… "
and that Pride..in the 4inch heels or the adidas tennis...oh yeah working it!!
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Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
14th Mar 2013 3:51pm
Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
17th Mar 2013 11:50pm
That is the strong black woman in you! Go ahead girl. Flaunt it.
Take no prisoners. Those not worthy will be shot. Survivor's will be shot again. You deserve it because you're worth it.
Take no prisoners. Those not worthy will be shot. Survivor's will be shot again. You deserve it because you're worth it.
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re: Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
18th Mar 2013 00:13am
Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
18th Mar 2013 00:15am
WTF? What? No fishnet stockings or garters?
Damn woman...you're cold.
Support the war effort. Sleep with a warfighter. LOL.
Damn woman...you're cold.
Support the war effort. Sleep with a warfighter. LOL.
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Nope...just heels!
I support the war efforts with 2 kids n a son in law in different branches and I looove my men in uniform! Emph! Emph! Emph! Lol
I support the war efforts with 2 kids n a son in law in different branches and I looove my men in uniform! Emph! Emph! Emph! Lol
Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
24th Mar 2013 6:12pm
The best revenge is that look on their face when enough is truly enough and they watch you walk away without a backward glance..hell leaving I hope you have a wonderful life ringin in their ear
will vibrate for years to come.. this Miss Lovelylady is that piece that says I am all woman and so damn Proud of who I am.. thank you for sharing this was a pleasure for sure
will vibrate for years to come.. this Miss Lovelylady is that piece that says I am all woman and so damn Proud of who I am.. thank you for sharing this was a pleasure for sure
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re: Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
24th Mar 2013 7:20pm
I once dated a guy for a year, he broke up with me w/o warning! I don't know if it was my feelings or my pride but I was devastated, alone in my bedroom I cried myself dehydrated! This was never shown in public, I kept my "sexy lady" on. I bumped into him a year later; he said "heeeeey Cookie damn you still look good!" I smiled and said "Do I know you?" and walked away... LOL!
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24th Mar 2013 7:40pm
lol...Love that..we all have those moments when love cripples us.. we learn to get back up and move on.
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Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
16th Apr 2013 4:17am
The positive ending to this is very admirable, n I'm impressed... That is how you do it lady!
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re: Re: LOVE, HATE, AND PRIDE
16th Apr 2013 4:22am
the operative is "lady" I try to keep my lady but, ummmm, it ain't always easy! lol
thank you!
thank you!