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Wrong Direction
Inwardly thinking
Constantly dreaming
Forever longing
Filled to the brim
Standing on the edge
Barely breathing
struggling to make the right choice
dazing through
Fearing everything
flashing pictures
Doomed to the end
Unforgiving fate
dying heart
eternal isolation
Dreadful life
A piece of my life
one and all.
Constantly dreaming
Forever longing
Filled to the brim
Standing on the edge
Barely breathing
struggling to make the right choice
dazing through
Fearing everything
flashing pictures
Doomed to the end
Unforgiving fate
dying heart
eternal isolation
Dreadful life
A piece of my life
one and all.
Published 13th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2013 7:29pm
Definitely a dark place described in this. Felt it. The short lines don't waste words - and it's more effective this way. Nice cadence too. Enjoyed the read, LostNMisunderstood.
14th Mar 2013 7:10am
14th Mar 2013 5:59pm
