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how do you say so long
how do you say
so long to someone
who has given you
so much joy and happiness
for sixteen years
who now lays near-lifeless
in your aching arms
i can not say goodbye, dear one
i will not say goodbye
no, not now or ever
just rest well, my sweet angel
and know you were my love
yes, you were my life
so long to someone
who has given you
so much joy and happiness
for sixteen years
who now lays near-lifeless
in your aching arms
i can not say goodbye, dear one
i will not say goodbye
no, not now or ever
just rest well, my sweet angel
and know you were my love
yes, you were my life
Published 10th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
10th Mar 2013 10:43am
A sad and poignant write, well done!-heavy laden with emotion
11th Mar 2013 3:28pm
10th Mar 2013 11:57am
One never has to truly say goodbye to loved ones that have past on, death is not so final IMHO.
Beautiful sad write Faith. :)
Beautiful sad write Faith. :)
Anonymous
10th Mar 2013 12:10pm
A very beautiful & moving piece, Faith. Heart-touching & finely penned! Thank you for sharing! :)
Carlene
Carlene
10th Mar 2013 12:37pm
Oh Faith, I have to agree with the others. So beautifully sad and very touching.
10th Mar 2013 2:56pm
Memories and photos are snapshots that resound through our minds and soul long after a moment shared has passed.
10th Mar 2013 6:59pm
Very hearfelt write dear Faith
Magdalena is right death though painful
is not goodbye
Magdalena is right death though painful
is not goodbye
10th Mar 2013 10:29pm
Its very hard to say goodbye, iv always been a "until we meet again" kind of dude.
Great write as always dearest faith.
Marcus
Great write as always dearest faith.
Marcus
