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Love Magical
You're the lumos of my life.
You immobilus my heart.
You knew how to alohamora my love
right from the start.
You expelliarmus my tough defenses,
knowing just what to say.
You accio the best in me
and protego me each day.
You cause my passion to confringo,
you episky all my pains,
evanesco all my doubts;
our love will never wane.
You're my Fountain of Fair Fortune,
the portkey to my bliss.
If I looked in the Mirror of Erised,
I'd see us, just like this.
Published 10th Mar 2013
| Edited 21st Jun 2017
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10th Mar 2013 4:30am
Charming- clever- rhyme and wit - always a winning combo in my book(though it is rather an old book)So here's a whine to go with your cheese- Plee-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-eze write mo-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-ore!
10th Mar 2013 4:54am
I'm most certainly going to keep writing, but as for rhyme, I've noticed that pretty much only two types of my poems rhyme these days; my playful, fun/funny ones, and my anger/jeering ones lol. I guess because funny ones sound good sing-songy, and jeering ones sound more insulting if they're like limericks XD
I'm quite pleased you liked it :) I've always wanted to write a Harry Potter themed poem, but never had the.. inspiration, I guess. I'm a /huge/ HP fan.
I'm quite pleased you liked it :) I've always wanted to write a Harry Potter themed poem, but never had the.. inspiration, I guess. I'm a /huge/ HP fan.
14th Mar 2014 5:56pm
14th Mar 2014 7:38pm
