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The hardest line i have to say because its hard not to finish it.
"i'll hopefully forget about you one day"
but i guess i should finish that sentence
infront of her but i dont think
she'll appreciate the morbid romance that
"the day of my death." would bring.
but i guess i should finish that sentence
infront of her but i dont think
she'll appreciate the morbid romance that
"the day of my death." would bring.
Published 9th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
9th Mar 2013 5:11pm
That's it. Heart just hit the floor - good job, Will. Just so you know, she Will appreciate it, morbidity and all, because Every girl hopes to be *that* one.
10th Mar 2013 1:31am
10th Mar 2013 2:35am
That ending is just great.
This poem is simple, honest, short; it's powerful.
This poem is simple, honest, short; it's powerful.
