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It's over now
It's where we go
It's what we see
It's who you are
It's who i'll be
It's truth you hide
It's lies you tell
It's leave me be
It's go to hell
It's never give
It's always take
It's all for you
It's for fuck sake
It's up and down
It's here and there
It's in and out
It's couldn't care
It's take no more
It's take a bow
It's give a shit
It's over now.....
It's what we see
It's who you are
It's who i'll be
It's truth you hide
It's lies you tell
It's leave me be
It's go to hell
It's never give
It's always take
It's all for you
It's for fuck sake
It's up and down
It's here and there
It's in and out
It's couldn't care
It's take no more
It's take a bow
It's give a shit
It's over now.....
Published 8th Mar 2013
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9th Mar 2013 6:40am
Very nice- simple but complex- each short phrase stands on its own but leads seamlessly into the next- building the verse stronger and stronger- rhyme scheme solidifies it into a true poem rather than a stack of ideas- and the end is perfection- Liked it alot.
19th Apr 2013 10:16pm
Anonymous
15th Mar 2014 11:57am
A simple, effective idea. I love that the rhyme scheme here is continuous, and effects the natural flow of this piece greatly.
Thank you for the read.
Thank you for the read.
