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don't ever say i didn't love you
don't ever say i didn't love you
with everything i had
of all the people in all the world
you picked me to treat bad
i wasn't the one who cheated
nor the one who always liked to fight
if you'll remember it was you
who tried to make a wrong thing right
don't ever say i didn't love you
the way that a wife should
if anything most everyone would say
i treated you too good
i wasn't in it for myself
i loved you as good as anybody could
with everything i had
of all the people in all the world
you picked me to treat bad
i wasn't the one who cheated
nor the one who always liked to fight
if you'll remember it was you
who tried to make a wrong thing right
don't ever say i didn't love you
the way that a wife should
if anything most everyone would say
i treated you too good
i wasn't in it for myself
i loved you as good as anybody could
Published 5th Mar 2013
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5th Mar 2013 3:21am
6th Mar 2013 1:45am
5th Mar 2013 3:26am
Very sad, sometimes we try so hard, but it still isn't enough, sad, but beautifully written, and easily read.....Cassie
6th Mar 2013 1:47am
Yes, that is how it was in my marriage. Thank you for your wonderful comments. They really touched me. :)
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
5th Mar 2013 3:35am
This is so sad. I can not imagine turning away from a precious Lady as you are. You have a beautiful soul and heart. :)
6th Mar 2013 1:48am
I'm so honored and humbled by your lovely comments. thank you so much, dear lady. :)
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
5th Mar 2013 5:59am
A very touching, heartfelt write, Faith. Wow! to the title etc., & that amazing finish! Kindness, consideration, respect & true friendship - which all go hand in hand - are either there or they are not! Your beautiful self deserves the best self another has to offer! A wonderful poem, Faith. :)
Carlene
Carlene
6th Mar 2013 1:50am
I am deeply touched by your wonderful comments, Carlene. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. :)
Faith
Faith
5th Mar 2013 3:57pm
6th Mar 2013 1:50am
