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almost an affair
if we turn this thing we have
into a sordid love affair
then we may never
know what we
have missed by never
having kissed or soiled sheets
in rooms we'd just as
soon forget when love
walks out on all fours
Published 7th Mar 2013
| Edited 21st Feb 2021
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7th Mar 2013 1:00am
7th Mar 2013 1:45am
Thank you, my friend. Everyone is my teacher and I learn something from each person I meet. xo
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
7th Mar 2013 1:03am
:wow....beauty saturates this piece.X&O
7th Mar 2013 1:46am
Thank you for your wonderful remarks...they are very much appreciated :)
Faith
Faith
7th Mar 2013 2:19am
Short but potent, Faith, "when love
walks out on all fours" is a terrific line!
walks out on all fours" is a terrific line!
7th Mar 2013 6:08pm
Anonymous
7th Mar 2013 3:35am
Brilliant write, Faith! The last lines are amazing for the ideas/images they convey! Love it! :)
Carlene
Carlene
7th Mar 2013 6:32pm
Thank you, Carlene. It's always a pleasure to see you have graced my page with your presence. Thank you for your wonderful remarks and expecially your friendship! :)
Faith
Faith
7th Mar 2013 7:18am
Excellent Faith, very few words that speak volumes and I love the picture. :)
7th Mar 2013 6:33pm
Thank you very much, Magdalena. I'm honored you liked it that much! :)
Faith
Faith
