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All I Want
All I want is a taste of what is so great,
All I want is not to be a waste to someone
who just makes a debate,
All I want is a dream that is so true
and not one that seems too blue
All I want is another
and not just to be a brother,
All I want is to live
and not just give,
All I want is a miracle
and not living in this pinnacle.
All I want is not to be a waste to someone
who just makes a debate,
All I want is a dream that is so true
and not one that seems too blue
All I want is another
and not just to be a brother,
All I want is to live
and not just give,
All I want is a miracle
and not living in this pinnacle.
Published 4th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
4th Mar 2013 6:17am
great knowing what you want..even better knowing what you don't want! nice one here! Enjoyed the read...
possible typo, line 2= waste
line 5- although to blue works..could also be too blue
good work !
possible typo, line 2= waste
line 5- although to blue works..could also be too blue
good work !
4th Mar 2013 6:30am
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