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What would happen...
If the grass was blue, and the sky was green?
If the ocean was dry, and the desert was wet?
If the sun was night, and the moon was day?
What would happen...
If time stopped?
If the world stood still?
If life was simple?
If nobody cared?
What would happen?
....we would be together
If the ocean was dry, and the desert was wet?
If the sun was night, and the moon was day?
What would happen...
If time stopped?
If the world stood still?
If life was simple?
If nobody cared?
What would happen?
....we would be together
Published 2nd Mar 2013
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2nd Mar 2013 2:09am
I love poems like this - at first glance it's like a cake with vanilla icing - sweet, simple - but you have to dig into it to see what flavor it is underneath.
2nd Mar 2013 4:43am
ah yes indeed, sweet & simple it is :)
Thank you LeMuseNoir for your poetic praise
Thank you LeMuseNoir for your poetic praise
2nd Mar 2013 2:18am
Short poem that speaks big. This is great because that is what God intended for us all, and that is to be together. Excellent write!
2nd Mar 2013 4:45am
Thank you Elbaby for stopping by for the quick read and praise,
God Bless
God Bless
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2013 2:26am
A unique & wonderfully penned poem! Love your style of writing, LSK. Welcome to DUP! :)
Carlene
Carlene
2nd Mar 2013 4:50am
So glad you enjoyed the writing, and thanks for the compliments. I think I'll keep at it :)
DUP is a wonderful and supportive environment...
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LSK
DUP is a wonderful and supportive environment...
Drop by anytime
LSK
