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Deceptive cupid
Oh God! Please let me know,
Is he a friend or a foe?!
The one who aimed at me and him,
With all the ray of hopes dim,
Keeping us from each other far,
And bursting heart in a mental war.
How could I be so stupid?!!
To trust that deceptive Cupid!!! "
Is he a friend or a foe?!
The one who aimed at me and him,
With all the ray of hopes dim,
Keeping us from each other far,
And bursting heart in a mental war.
How could I be so stupid?!!
To trust that deceptive Cupid!!! "
Published 4th Sep 2009
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4th Sep 2009 4:48pm
this poem is short but interesting .. i can relate it with my life & events! pure feelings :)
4th Sep 2009 5:15pm
see u urself r perplexed and u r blaming cupidji to be deceptive...either take a stance...or take a stand...but yes rythematically intelligent work...
6th Sep 2009 10:30pm
confused about love and the one (cupid)who made it happen....that was it good or bad as it made the lovly feelings still with not the hope of getting it easily.....this is a poem expressing the feelings of a person who loves somone but have really very less hopes of getting his/her love throughout his/her life.......thanks for ur comment!
5th Sep 2009 2:21am
i can totally relate to this, love isn't always 4 the best, n sometimes u love the wrong person
6th Sep 2009 10:33pm
yeah!...the poem is for the cupid who made the couple love each other but with very less hopes of uniting them.....thanks for the comments.
