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Drowning in You

This pressure,
I'm sinking in the deep,
Drowning down below;
in this crushing cold.
I'm about to expload,
this is all to much.
But I can't stop sinking.

It's almost warm...
I don't fight it.
I'm not sure I want to.
But it hurts.
Sinking in the deep,
Drowning down in you...
It's almost pleasent;
or have I gone numb?

Can I bring you back up with me?
One day...maybe.
For you've gone down deeper than me.
Written by Karrabear (Question)
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