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Waiting
This pain in my heart
is dark and cold
My cuts and wounds
are to deep to be sewn
Even still I fear my
end is not yet near
So I suffer in
silence
Waiting for my end
to come and set me
free
is dark and cold
My cuts and wounds
are to deep to be sewn
Even still I fear my
end is not yet near
So I suffer in
silence
Waiting for my end
to come and set me
free
Published 23rd Feb 2013
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23rd Feb 2013 2:19am
I really like it for being able to express what you have in such a brief poem. Only critique is not using "end" twice. Maybe saying "Waiting for my day to come and set me free." Just a suggestion. Nice work though.
24th Feb 2013 8:43am
