Haiku IV

Iris, I like the comparison between koi & dark secrets. Lots of meaning in this lovely haiku. Much enjoyed! :)

Uh, saw you comment just now. Thank you so much for your lovely comment!

I like the double entendre where "surface" can refer to the pond and the eye. Beautiful.

I'm glad to seemingly have been able to express my thoughts. Or I've found someone who can read Haikus expertly. Thank you, jagracia!

well played kiru.. i like the ones that your mind makes you skip when its so bold..

Thank you, 7th_son, glad you like it :-).