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Blush
my fingers itch to impart
inky lines upon pale pages
for your pleasure
A wanton need fulfilled when
wrapped metaphors shroud me
in mystery
and veiled intentions wear clever disguises
cloaked in lace imagery
I beg prettily to be peeled back
layer by layer
to expose that hidden and secret
inner core
I blush
I need you
only you can undress me
gently pry apart my lines
tenderly palpate stanzas
and oh so lovingly
coax my intentions
to the surface
Published 21st Feb 2013
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21st Feb 2013 5:45am
lola - I do SO love a poet who understands that what is subtle is far more evocative and erotic than what is obvious and blatant- thank you for proving my point beyond all doubt!
LeMuseNoir
LeMuseNoir
21st Feb 2013 12:16pm
Mr. Noir. Thank you for the high praise. I appreciate a reader who understands subtlety and nuance.
"A woman's poetry is much akin to the way she dresses. She can show a lot of skin and evoke looks, but if she shows a little less and seduces with cut,fabric choice and texture, she invites the other senses to be so engaged as well."---Lola
"A woman's poetry is much akin to the way she dresses. She can show a lot of skin and evoke looks, but if she shows a little less and seduces with cut,fabric choice and texture, she invites the other senses to be so engaged as well."---Lola
Anonymous
21st Feb 2013 5:59am
great style and approach.
"I beg prettily to be peeled back
layer by layer"
love it.
"I beg prettily to be peeled back
layer by layer"
love it.
21st Feb 2013 12:17pm
Thank you Broadway. It is kind of you to stop by and read and comment. I'm glad you enjoyed!
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