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The broken hearted angel.
Her wings lie spred out on the floor
How could anyone break an agels heart
Tears hide the beauty she was before
She thought he loved her
She thought he cared
She gave him her soul
And he stole her heart
Her love for him consumed her
She doesnt know what to do
Now that he's left her for good
She doesnt know who to be
But the broken hearted angel
Who lies on the floor.
How could anyone break an agels heart
Tears hide the beauty she was before
She thought he loved her
She thought he cared
She gave him her soul
And he stole her heart
Her love for him consumed her
She doesnt know what to do
Now that he's left her for good
She doesnt know who to be
But the broken hearted angel
Who lies on the floor.
Published 29th Aug 2010
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30th Aug 2010 00:12am
Sorry on the second line that's angel not agel. I'm really sorry it seems like I'm not very good at spelling at one in the morning :)
30th Aug 2010 00:26am
poem is a little short if I'm to be honest, I would have liked more description of the angel and this love. The first line and the last two lines are what make this poem beautiful, it shows the pain of the angel; 'who lies on the floor' implies despair to such a degree that it's heartbreaking to read.
30th Aug 2010 2:28pm
Thanks I'll try to put more description in the next one and I'm glad you liked it :)
