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I Wanna Make This Work
Why do you do this to me?
I try to put you first,
But you let me down.
Am I not enough?
How will I ever know
If you never tell me what you want?
I'm lost here
I'll never find my way out.
Unless we work together,
To make the pieces fit.
I try to put you first,
But you let me down.
Am I not enough?
How will I ever know
If you never tell me what you want?
I'm lost here
I'll never find my way out.
Unless we work together,
To make the pieces fit.
Published 18th Feb 2013
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18th Feb 2013 1:03am
I just recently went through something that makes me relate so well to this poem. Well done.
Anonymous
18th Feb 2013 1:07am
Nice deep expressions.... a lovely read:(
18th Feb 2013 2:59am
I feel the pain in this piece, it really hits home. I relate to it so much. When you give it your all and they dont give anything. Worst feeling... Great piece though and welcome to DUP
