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WHERE YOU HIDE...I AM THERE
They focused on my emotion.
Stared like stalkers.
Waiting for my answer with metronome hearts.
so I told them the truth...
"My favorite place I have ever been,
is behind your mirrors...Under your skin...
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Stared like stalkers.
Waiting for my answer with metronome hearts.
so I told them the truth...
"My favorite place I have ever been,
is behind your mirrors...Under your skin...
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10803905
Published 17th Feb 2013
| Edited 19th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
17th Feb 2013 9:11pm
Fascinating lines! A little like an image beyond an image beyond an image...The kind of poem you can read over and over. Grand!
17th Feb 2013 9:14pm
18th Feb 2013 5:39am
Anonymous
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18th Feb 2013 2:56pm
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Anonymous
21st Feb 2013 10:34am
Love this effort, man.
In so few words.....wow.
I have no words.
This last part sure can creep one out a bit...it's like the protagonist can see stuff others can't....
*"My favorite place I have ever been,
is behind your mirrors...Under your skin...
Please (oh please) keep penning, poet!
Cheers
Tidespotter
In so few words.....wow.
I have no words.
This last part sure can creep one out a bit...it's like the protagonist can see stuff others can't....
*"My favorite place I have ever been,
is behind your mirrors...Under your skin...
Please (oh please) keep penning, poet!
Cheers
Tidespotter
21st Feb 2013 5:39pm
